Name: Alexandria Malfoy reviewed Proposition on Dec 23, 2008 03:41 pm
Hmm...this organization you've thought up should make for some fantastic reading in later chapters! I also liked how the acronym for their name spells out MUSIC. :D Good job!

Author's Response: Hee, I couldn't find a way to work any of the acronyms you guys suggested on LJ into the chapter without turning the tone of the fic into funny. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Name: imelda reviewed Proposition on Dec 19, 2008 05:05 pm
Noo!! I've seen 'Nikita'! I know how this ends! I'm just kidding. This is really interesting and well-written, and I'm dying to see how you bring in the DG romance.

Have you ever seen 'Nikita'? It's a French movie. If not, you should check it out--really good, and it has a similar premise!

Author's Response: Ooh, no, I've never seen Nikita; I will have to check it out sometime. Thank you for the rec, and for reviewing! :)
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Proposition on Dec 19, 2008 04:06 pm
This seems like it's going to be a fantastic story. The chapters so far have been great. It has the mystery thing going on and I do love spy Draco.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: I dream of draco reviewed Prologue on Dec 19, 2008 04:00 pm
I really like a post-HBP/DH Harry that tries to help clear Draco's name. It's refreshing from needless animosity, and it seems to fit his character more.

Also, what really struck me was the sentence about Draco looking like a boy king. That really stuck out for me, and totally fits with my view of him.

Author's Response: Yes, I think Harry can be dense and stubborn, but he always ends up doing what's right. And the boy king bit was quite vivid in my head, so I'm glad it came across well. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Proposition on Dec 19, 2008 03:41 pm
Ooooh the plot thickens! I'm so glad Draco is getting out of jail. I can't wait to find out who is behind this organization and who is involved. You've definitely peaked my interest! Great job : - )

Author's Response: Hurrah! Thank you! :)
Name: dristi reviewed Proposition on Dec 19, 2008 12:13 pm
hi, the first two chapters are very intriguing and interesting...

keep up and pls update soon...

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reviewing!
Name: fairydust123 reviewed Proposition on Dec 19, 2008 06:38 am
Oh, this looks really good! You've got me veery intrigued :)

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Katmillia reviewed Proposition on Dec 19, 2008 06:02 am
I really like where this is going. Everything about this chapter felt particularly vivid- especially Draco's thoughts on the yard time, in such a harsh and cold environment. The relief was very well-done. I can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The yard scene I think is one of my favourite things I've written, so I'm glad you liked it!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Proposition on Dec 18, 2008 11:11 pm
"Give me a secret, give me a sign, give me a reason to Walk the Fire. See another dawn through a daughter's eyes, you give me a reason to Walk the Fire."

I LOVE The Unit. It is absolutely the most AWESOME show on television today. I'm REALLY looking forward to this fic.

Author's Response: Uh oh, this fic might be disappointing, then, because I've never seen an episode of that show! Sorry for the confusion. :/
Name: sweetpop reviewed Prologue on Dec 17, 2008 05:24 pm
Oooh! This is exciting! I was assuming that Draco would be freed or something quick when you brought in Harry as in most stories- hopefully the rest of your story will have quirky twists and turns coming up!

Author's Response: Hee, I hope so too. Thank you for reviewing!
Name: doc_3 reviewed Prologue on Dec 17, 2008 04:42 am
This is a fantastic start. Perfect characterization of exactly what I think Harry would have done in this case, and perfect description of the way his testimony would have been ignored. And I loved your descriptions of Draco, I could see the expressions on his face. I'm totally caught up and looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad the scene came across realistically.
Name: mchen reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 09:52 pm
Great start, can't wait to see where it goes and how you take us there!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: adorame06 reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 08:44 pm
Wow this looks to be very interesting! I can't wait till more is posted!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I will have more up soon.
Name: yunnage reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 07:39 pm
great introduction

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 03:17 pm
Oh I thoroughly enjoyed that =]
Excited for more.

Author's Response: Yay! I will have more posted soon.
Name: Alexandria Malfoy reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 02:50 pm
Very interesting start! :) Considering how Ginny feels about Draco in this particular story thus far, I'm curious as to how their relationship will progress. Good job overall!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 12:09 pm
Great Prologue. I'm looking forward to reading your story; I can't wait to find out where you'll take us.

Author's Response: Thank you! There's more coming soon!
Name: Katmillia reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 06:01 am
I love seeing new stories from you. I'm already hooked- how do you do that to me? :)

Author's Response: It must be a gift. :) Thank you for commenting!
Name: LadySalmon reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 01:34 am

Mmm, good, a new story. I like your writing.

I like this Draco :P



Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Prologue on Dec 16, 2008 01:14 am
I can't wait to see where it's going!

Author's Response: :D
Name: WG13 reviewed Prologue on Dec 15, 2008 10:05 pm
Wow this is an interesting different perceptive on things. Can't wait to see where you take things from here.
Mala

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed Prologue on Dec 15, 2008 09:34 pm
Ooooh, this is great. I like reasonable Harry and feel bad for Draco. 20 years!! I look forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you! I figured Harry's had a few years to get some perspective and would still be addicted to doing the right thing anyway. :)
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