Hmm...this organization you've thought up should make for some fantastic reading in later chapters! I also liked how the acronym for their name spells out MUSIC. :D Good job!
Author's Response: Hee, I couldn't find a way to work any of the acronyms you guys suggested on LJ into the chapter without turning the tone of the fic into funny. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Noo!! I've seen 'Nikita'! I know how this ends! I'm just kidding. This is really interesting and well-written, and I'm dying to see how you bring in the DG romance.
Have you ever seen 'Nikita'? It's a French movie. If not, you should check it out--really good, and it has a similar premise!
Author's Response: Ooh, no, I've never seen Nikita; I will have to check it out sometime. Thank you for the rec, and for reviewing! :)
This seems like it's going to be a fantastic story. The chapters so far have been great. It has the mystery thing going on and I do love spy Draco.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I really like a post-HBP/DH Harry that tries to help clear Draco's name. It's refreshing from needless animosity, and it seems to fit his character more.
Also, what really struck me was the sentence about Draco looking like a boy king. That really stuck out for me, and totally fits with my view of him.
Author's Response: Yes, I think Harry can be dense and stubborn, but he always ends up doing what's right. And the boy king bit was quite vivid in my head, so I'm glad it came across well. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Ooooh the plot thickens! I'm so glad Draco is getting out of jail. I can't wait to find out who is behind this organization and who is involved. You've definitely peaked my interest! Great job : - )
Author's Response: Hurrah! Thank you! :)
hi, the first two chapters are very intriguing and interesting...
keep up and pls update soon...
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reviewing!
Oh, this looks really good! You've got me veery intrigued :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
I really like where this is going. Everything about this chapter felt particularly vivid- especially Draco's thoughts on the yard time, in such a harsh and cold environment. The relief was very well-done. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The yard scene I think is one of my favourite things I've written, so I'm glad you liked it!
"Give me a secret, give me a sign, give me a reason to Walk the Fire. See another dawn through a daughter's eyes, you give me a reason to Walk the Fire."
I LOVE The Unit. It is absolutely the most AWESOME show on television today. I'm REALLY looking forward to this fic.
Author's Response: Uh oh, this fic might be disappointing, then, because I've never seen an episode of that show! Sorry for the confusion. :/
Oooh! This is exciting! I was assuming that Draco would be freed or something quick when you brought in Harry as in most stories- hopefully the rest of your story will have quirky twists and turns coming up!
Author's Response: Hee, I hope so too. Thank you for reviewing!
This is a fantastic start. Perfect characterization of exactly what I think Harry would have done in this case, and perfect description of the way his testimony would have been ignored. And I loved your descriptions of Draco, I could see the expressions on his face. I'm totally caught up and looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad the scene came across realistically.
Great start, can't wait to see where it goes and how you take us there!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow this looks to be very interesting! I can't wait till more is posted!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I will have more up soon.
great introduction
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh I thoroughly enjoyed that =]
Excited for more.
Author's Response: Yay! I will have more posted soon.
Very interesting start! :) Considering how Ginny feels about Draco in this particular story thus far, I'm curious as to how their relationship will progress. Good job overall!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Great Prologue. I'm looking forward to reading your story; I can't wait to find out where you'll take us.
Author's Response: Thank you! There's more coming soon!
I love seeing new stories from you. I'm already hooked- how do you do that to me? :)
Author's Response: It must be a gift. :) Thank you for commenting!
Mmm, good, a new story. I like your writing.
I like this Draco :P
Author's Response: Thank you!
I can't wait to see where it's going!
Author's Response: :D
Wow this is an interesting different perceptive on things. Can't wait to see where you take things from here.
Mala
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
Ooooh, this is great. I like reasonable Harry and feel bad for Draco. 20 years!! I look forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you! I figured Harry's had a few years to get some perspective and would still be addicted to doing the right thing anyway. :)