Name: Nameless reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 20, 2010 10:34 pm
Very cute story
Name: BlackSnowflakes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 15, 2009 10:40 pm
Fantastic job!! I really liked how you moved from scene to scene, and the imagery you placed in the scene. You did a good job at making the characters believable (there are too many Hogwarts fics where they act like they're a couple in their 30s rather than teens!!) but you perfectly portrayed it, and had I loved how their relationship developed : )
The one critique I'd give, is sometimes in certain scenes their thoughts got in the way of the flow, or they would say something unnecessary which the reader can infer (ie. the part in the kiss scene in the parenteses...although I really loved that scene, and how it was "chaste"!!)
I hope my review helps, you're a great writer!! I look forward to reading more from you!
Name: xLovelyLollypopx reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 23, 2008 03:16 pm
the ending is cutee! :] the whole thing doesnt go together for me because it is so random...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm sorry it seemed too random.
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 23, 2008 02:05 am
awww oober cute! great job i wish it went on some more but i still like how its done =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 22, 2008 05:12 pm
This was so cute.
I loved the interaction so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the interaction!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 22, 2008 03:29 pm
i like this story. it was sweet and good. great job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: coincidence_casualty reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 22, 2008 08:26 am
I love the tone of the story... it's a little unsettled with all the jumps in the timeline but it seems to be reflective of Draco and Ginny's relationship too. Is the story done?
Author's Response: Yes, the story is done. Some things are just better left to the imagination of the reader, and their future is one of them. Thanks for reading!
Name: ish reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 22, 2008 12:56 am
that was really beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 21, 2008 06:40 pm
I loved the cut scenes. Jumping back and forth. It was marvelous.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!