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Name: Keap reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 11, 2011 07:11 am
This fic is really wonderfully written.

Though it's not the usual happy ending I do understand what Draco is feeling and why he chose that path in the end.

I honestky can't imagine giving up the luxuries in life even if i loved a person so much. I wouod think that giving it all up, would make me resent the other person in the end?

Am i making sense? And if i am, does that make me a bad person? Lol.

But anyway! Really nicely written. I tried going to you lj page but its only for regustered users so i wasnt able to find the companion fic. J hope you could post it here.


Thanks!:)
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 07, 2011 05:51 pm
I would absolutely love to read the companion pieces. Is there any place I could find them on the web?
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 21, 2011 04:03 pm
i think draco made the wrong choice.  a lovely story & please write the companion pieces!!
Name: ginnyd reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 19, 2010 11:56 am
All I can say is WOW. Loved it
Name: ginnywitch reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 22, 2010 08:56 pm
You should post the companion pieces to this. This one of my favorite fics and I'd love to read the rest...
Name: kinxx reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 01, 2009 06:27 pm
of all takes of the ending given to us in Canon, this is my favourite.
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Name: Adelagia reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 22, 2009 05:18 am
I liked this a lot; it was really well-written. The shipper in me is sad, but for the circumstances, Draco's decision makes sense, and you give him such a clear and thoughtful voice. The secondary characters are done wonderfully as well, even though they only pop up for a little bit. I'd love to read the companion pieces.
Name: I dream of draco reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 20, 2009 06:24 pm
Oh that's too sad! Of course I wish they had stayed together, but if this ship had been canon, this probably would have been the way it ended. :( Very beautifully written.
Name: dristi reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 19, 2009 11:36 am
hi, interesting, yet, if not love, what does matter?

...as i sad before, very interesting and it made me think...a lot...

hope to read more from you.....
Name: raistlin89 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 05:35 pm
oh em gee thats so sad, and a damper. but i like how it was played off on what really happend. i think you should go ahead with the other two stories you were talking bout for sure. =)
Name: ginnywitch reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 02:38 pm
this really well done. i loved Andromeda and the way things are rationalized. it's a different kind of unhappy ending b/c unlike most of these i read it seemed to be much more realistic and it made more sense considering the character that all of us draco/ginny shippers want draco to be(i.e. someone who is not a coward). i liked it alot. can't wait to see the other installments! =]
Name: VegaBlack reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 01:51 pm
I really enjoyed this take on the failing of a young D/G relationship, very original. I think my favorite part was Andromeda's line, "for those of us who were made for more, love is not always enough". It was great how Draco mirrored the line later with more certitude, but strangely when he thinks it it sounds very unconvincing. I'm very curious about what he said when he broke if off with Ginny, she wouldn't have put much stock in that argument, I'm sure. Anyhoo, great read :)
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 10:14 am
actually original. nice. ahh I want to see a DG ending but that could spoil it i guess..
Name: silver rose reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 09:55 am
woah..how sad. very unexpected. i thought he'd choose ginny. hmm.
Name: mchen reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 09:10 am
Very true to Draco and Malfoy characterisation -- although I of course hate the choice he made, you made it so that I completely understood the logic and "rightness" of it, given who Draco is. Well done.

Would love to see the companion pieces.
Name: Licentia poetica reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 07:00 am
Well done...written with a level of maturity that transcends the usual "angst" piece.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 05:00 am
This was a great story but it broke my heart that he ended things with Ginny. I loved the interaction between Draco and his Aunt Andromeda. I knew he'd realize he loved Ginny once he let her go. I'd love to read more. Thank you for sharing.
Name: Indiainksky reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 04:32 am
Wow. I love the receding hairline jibe. And Draco's maturity. Well done!
Name: mahek210 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2009 12:57 am
umm i dont knw if i agree wid d story or no!!!its written very nicely of course but i dont knw d answer 2 whether love wld b ever enough.yes i think practically if u think love wldnt b enough..but i wld like 2 think it shd b enough!!oopss sorry m blabberin now..anyways nice story njoyed it gud work:)
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 17, 2009 11:46 pm
wow...just....wow.

that was beautifully depressingly amazing! It was so honest that i could feel my little heart twinge with the parting line. It was lovely. I don't know what else to say, my heads in a jumble!

xx
Name: sillybinky reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 17, 2009 07:58 pm
wow. as much as i strictly read fiction for leisure, which means they're mostly 'romantic' or ideal, i love the way this was written. it appeals to my realistic side. it usually makes me sad how in reality, love is not always enough (andromeda). though draco was really lucky with his wife, he does not wallow or angst. he still loves ginny, he wonders what-if, but he knows where he is. he decided on what he can live with, he lives with it, and he's okay.

it actually made me feel good. i don't know, maybe because even if you can't have everything, life can be not too bad. and oh, i LOVE the last line. from when andromeda said it and as it was made the very point of the story (even if it's not true for everyone). it could be meant for someone like draco. :) good job!
Name: ZSF reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 17, 2009 07:23 pm
You've written it in a great way that makes me understand Draco's decision (and maybe approve of it, slightly). It's very realistic, and very well written. :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 17, 2009 06:07 pm
well this story just blows romantic notions out the window doesn't it? its good tho.
Name: Rosalie reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 17, 2009 05:58 pm
As bitter and sad as this was, all well written of course, please, please post the companion pieces, as I'm insanely curious. well done. The last line is so horribly against everything a heart should believe, but it's what Draco believes and that's what makes this so honest and sad and he doesn't even recognize it. Well done.
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