Name: Copenhagen reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 08:07 pm
Wow. I really, really love this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter!You really know how to write a cliff-hanger- don't keep us in suspense too much longer!
Name: StormyBliss reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 04:31 pm
MOLLY IS EVIL!!! I can't wait for Ginny to find out an be able to hold her little girl! I have a little girl who is almost 2 and the thought that someone would do that made me so mad I almost cried. I hope when Ginny finds out she punches her mother in the face. OK I feel better now... can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: Bronte44 reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 03:21 pm
Aggh! I have an immense Love/Hate relationships with cliffhangers.... You just aggravated it.
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 08:16 am
:D I loved this. A lot.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 07:02 am
I really like you're story! I can't wait for the next chapter to find out exactly how Draco and Ginny will react to seeing each other after so many years and so many lies & secrets. Serena is absolutely a perfect mix of her parents. I loved her interaction with her "evil Grandmother" lol. You are doing a wonderful job and I'm looking forward to following your story : - )
Name: citrusabby reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 02:51 am
I demand a new chapter, NOW.
Haha, just kidding, but I really can't wait for them to meet each other again.
Name: annacherie reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 08, 2009 01:27 am
For your first time this is really good. I hope you continue. I'm very interested in what happens.
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 10:21 pm
Ooo! You WOULD end this chapter like that! I completely love this story. Mrs. Weasley is pretty friggin' evil in this one. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon!
Name: VegaBlack reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 06:43 pm
This is a cool concept for a story, usually it's Draco who doesn't know about his and Ginny's love child. I'm desperate to see more of the Malfoys but I especially loved Serena; she's a great mix of haughty and demanding like Cannon!Draco and caring and spunky like Ginny. I absolutely love the evil grandmother bit, I admit I cackled just a little when I read that :)
Please please update soon! I can't wait for Molly to get her comeuppance and Ginny's reaction to Serena.
Name: albinopeacockwithfreckles reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 05:47 pm
that is an aweful cliffhanger. just so you know. ;-) update soon!
Name: sweetproserpina reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 05:46 pm
great start so far- i can't believe what molly did though! looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!
Name: AudsMalfoy reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 05:44 pm
Whoa! Cliffy, much?
I wanna know what happens!
Quick quick quick!
Fabulous, very sad, story
Name: shaded reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 03:44 pm
Hehe, Serena is adorable. It's so sweet how Draco was telling her stories of how alike she is to her mother. I laughed aloud and for a long while when I read the line "Come and give your evil grandmother a hug." Hehe, that was awesome. It really brings home how much Narcissa loves her little granddaughter.
Although I love the Blaise/Luna pairing, I find it quite odd that Luna would change her mannerisms after becoming Blaise's fiancee. It just seems quite surreal having her change like that.
All in all, I'm enjoying this story very much. I particularly like Draco's characterisation. His devotion to Serena in the little things he does is very well portrayed.
I hope that the next chapter will be posted up soon!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 02:07 pm
Oh. Here comes the truth. I cannot wait for the fireworks to set off. Great chapter. I'm glad that Draco and Luna didn't believe that she was dead. Will they get over her not knowing anything after she explains what her family did. I wish that she would have listened to Healer Jenkins. Happy writing.
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 01:35 pm
This reminds me somewhat of the movie Augest Rush. Loving the story so far!
Name: penfold reviewed
Pineapple Upside Down Cake on Feb 07, 2009 12:53 pm
Yay for Blaise and Luna being together! I always love them as a pair. :)
And yes, glad to see the story is finally getting going. Can't wait to see where it goes, please update soon!
Name: annam reviewed
Prologue on Feb 07, 2009 12:38 pm
It is different and i would like to read more so please update soon!!!
I love that she bakes and if you decide to put any recipes, im sure i'll be baking them... just a suggestion....hint..hint
Name: shalita reviewed
Prologue on Feb 06, 2009 11:28 am
Poconos! Ha! NEPA pride. :) For that reason alone I'm interested in following this story. Well, the plot seems fairly interesting as well. Usually it's Draco not knowing about the child... kinda like a role reversal here. Sort of. I'll definitely be watching this. :)
Name: shaded reviewed
Prologue on Feb 05, 2009 02:05 pm
This is an interesting start to the story. I like your writing style. The various scenes do not seem choppy at all, but are good at piecing together Ginny's story of how she came to be where she is. 'Though I'm not sure whether I can imagine Molly & Arthur actually carrying out what they did, I can understand their reasoning; they really only want the best possible future for Ginny. I look forward to Ginny's reaction once she finds out her parents gave her child away to the Malfoys and witheld that knowledge from her.
I'm quite looking forward to the next chapter. I hope it'll be posted soon!
Author's Response: Molly and Arthur are out of character in this story, of course. I've manipulated them for my story line.
I'm quite horrible ;]
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed
Prologue on Feb 05, 2009 11:11 am
Well written, and since I live in the region, I must say I approve of the setting.
Author's Response: Thank you.
I love the Poconos. It's a big part of me.
Name: gracie reviewed
Prologue on Feb 05, 2009 09:18 am
I'd have never thought it possible that i could ever hate Mrs Weasley but you've made it so poor poor ginny
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed
Prologue on Feb 05, 2009 06:34 am
How could they do that her? Stupid idiots, don't they know she'll hate them when she finds out, which they so rightly deserve.
Name: joey101 reviewed
Prologue on Feb 05, 2009 01:55 am
MOLLY U BITCH! cant wait till draco comes to the rescue (if he does)
Name: RoonilWazlib reviewed
Prologue on Feb 04, 2009 07:30 pm
oooooooohh...... Ginny is going to be ...well, I don't think I'm really allowed that language in a review.. But she is.. LOL Looking forward to more =)
Name: Bronte44 reviewed
Prologue on Feb 04, 2009 03:17 pm
As a birthmother, this story is very close to home. Thankfully my mother left me the choice. What Molly did was simply inexcusable. When Ginny finds out ( and she will) There'll be hell to pay.