Name: FiveOhFirst reviewed
Muggle Spell on Jan 10, 2010 08:28 pm
That was so sad, but beautiful at the same time. The ending was fantastic, Ginny emptying the gun's shells; really meaningful.
I love their obliviousness of what the gun is, though it is the general knowledge of most of the Wizarding World. A wand that only performs one spell.
Well done, again. You'll be sick of my reviews soon. ;)
-Jayde
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I had a great prompt o work with for this one - and I must say - I never grow tired of reviews from anyone ;)
Name: bad_angel_109 reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 26, 2009 02:05 am
wow, great piece. i thought ginny had shot herself. so sad at the end. u portrayed the malfoys and ron well :)
sad story. just a quick question: how old were they? including ron? just curious
Author's Response: First, thanks for the review! Second, I have no idea how old they were :-P I never really thought about it that much. I guess, if I had to say, I'd put Ginny at 18 or 19, and therefore Draco and Ron at about 19 or 20. They're young, I know, but I'm saying the war makes you age faster. Again, thanks for the review!
Name: ZSF reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 19, 2009 05:56 pm
Wow. This was really good. Your Draco was so touching and very brave. Poor Ginny!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Name: Caroline reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 17, 2009 09:37 am
Hey, I'm Caramelsilver on LJ: Thank you again, so much for this fic. It's absolutely amazing. It's so different from anything I imagined and so much better than anything I could come up with (which is also the reason I never managed to write it myself.)
I love the death you gave Lucius and Narcissa. I also love your characterization of Ron. Really, I love everything. It's a wonderful fic. And the Draco's death at the end kills me everytime. Brava!
Author's Response: You have no idea how glad I am you liked this! I felt terrible because I had had to rush the ending in order to get it in. I think you had a great prompt, and it was a lot of fun for me to try to fit in as much of it as I could for you. I'm happy yu liked the Ron, and the Malfoys, I was hoping that they'd be what you wanted to see! ;-) Thanks for taking the time to review over here as well!!
Name: xLovelyLollypopx reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 10, 2009 02:33 pm
I'm confused. Did she kill someone else or herself?
You're probably like of course she _____ but I am a little slow. :]
really sad :[
Author's Response: No, it's okay. She actually didn't kill anyone, she fired the gun into the ground, because she was afraid of what it had done. Sorry about that! Thanks for the review!
Name: lookwhatidid reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 08, 2009 05:18 pm
I second Ginny. Draco does not have permission to die! This was so absolutely depressing and I think you portrayed all of the characters perfectly without making any of them cliche or cheesy. I also truly loved your word choice, in spots where I appreciated nothing more than the descriptions you used to form images in my mind. Basically: fantastic! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! Your review was great! Thanks for reading!
Name: silvermay reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 07, 2009 05:47 pm
That was beautiful and brought me to tears. It hit a little close to home as the girlfriend of a Marine, but you put a disturbingly pleasant spin on it.
Author's Response: Well, good luck to you. And thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it
Name: CCC reviewed
Muggle Spell on Feb 07, 2009 11:51 am
Bloody hell, that was depressing. He can't die. She has to save him. I decree it. Go forth and write a sequel or the next chapter or something. i love the idea of the gun as a wand that only knows one spell. That was quite inventive. good job.
Author's Response: You can only ask for so many miracles. I wrote a second chapter to Dirty Little Secret, after all. Just you wiat, I'm working on a chaptered fic, I swear it, and it'll end happy, eventually. :-P Thank you for your reviews :-)