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This was fantastic. Almost poetic.
I loved the symmetry. It was very effective. I don't know why I continue to read your stories, as I'm a happy-ending lover, but I love the way you write. Sorry I'm awful about reviewing, Just thought you deserved a thanks for sharing your talents and to let you know that you have a fan in me, even with your morbid endings. Always looking forward to reading more. Thanks! =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's always good to hear you have a repeat reader and someone who enjoys your stories. Sad endings seem to be my MO, so I'll have to shake it up a little maybe. Look for some stuff soon that may have some not-so-familiar styles of ending. :D
i love this...plz tell me theres more to come. dont let draco die :(
Author's Response: Unfortunately, there is no more to come with this story. I intentionally left the ending open-ended so the reader could draw their own conclusion. So, if you don't want him to die, then he didn't die ;)
Pipperstorms would like to add that you're still trying to finish said Christmas story, and that you will continue to keep trying.
Anyway, this is th first of your stories that didn't make me cry -- but you almost did. I think had you wanted to, you could have gone a little bit further with the photo of the kids. Reguardless, I found myself fasinated with Blaise, and the thought that Hermione might have been dead, because she was not with Rona and Harry. But, in my mind of course Draco wouldn't have mentioned her by name, because well, she's still a Muggle born.
Author's Response: Do I have to respond to this review? I guess so, or I'll never hear the end of it. Thank you for your review, darling. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-P And yes, I will continue to try and finish that forsaken Christmas story.
ooooH! i really liked it! but i wish you would write one more chappie coz im so interested to know what happened.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for your review! I've always tried to write multi-chaptered fics, but they never seem to get finished (just ask Pipperstorms about the Christmas Story I was supposed to finish for her). Maybe someday I'll try one. :D
Uh wow. But I can't understand why Draco didn't hide himself with his children? Surely he can't think of murdering Voldemort all alone?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Lee. For the story, I did some research on the Fidelius Charm, and how it worked. If Draco had stayed hidden with the children and he had been killed (because the Charm would have hidden the children, not him), then the children's location would have been revealed. By telling the children's grandparents and mother, upon his death, they would become the Secret Keepers. Think of the Charm not as a permanent solution, but rather as a stopgap to buy some time until everyone can regroup. As for Voldemort, well, he figured he might as well take a shot. ope this answers your questions. :D
Wow--that was great. Fantastic writing, suspense, symmetry, restraint (I think that must be the hardest thing to learn about writing). I loved it. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. There is no greater joy in writing than to know others found enjoyment in it as well. Thanks for the review. :D
Even though I just this minute validated this, I wanted to come in and write you a review... because it was just that damn good. Beautiful little story, with the absolute perfect amount of repetition and symmetry between Draco's two 'meetings'.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I should write at 4am more often. :D