Name: misslimelight reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 07:49 pm
hahaha i love this story. And i very much understand draco's point of view. ;)
Author's Response: Probably wouldn't have been able to write it if I didn't have a ton of experience with the topic myself. LOL!
Hopefully, he will have more success than I. :)
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 07:33 pm
Cute.
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 05:54 pm
I enjoyed this too much. Draco is having a hard time dealing with Ginny. It's really funny. I can't wait until he starts to shape up because nothing beats snarky Draco.
Author's Response: I do love him in this fic. Rather clueless, but not fully aware that he is. The world is out to get him, but it's for his own good. So glad you like it!!!! :)
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 05:53 pm
Oh, this story is such a delightful read! Every new turn of events leaves me laughing, and the role reversal of Ginny-in-charge vs. out-maneuvered-Draco is super fun. As a writer, you tend to come up with some of the most original work on FIA imho, and I like how you steer clear of most cliches.
The Harry Potter part really caught me off guard but made me laugh and smirk at Draco. How did you decide on yogurt being the food that horribly offends Draco?
As always, great chapter. It's nice to see your versatility as a writer; you have a sense of humor and a knack for delivering great lines.
Author's Response: Once again, thank you for your incredibly thoughtful comments! (I'm having a bad day, and need them) I do try to be original because, well, I have no training in creative writing and 'twas my worst subject in school. I'm a science/math person, and there are many excelling writers here, so I needed an angle for people to want to read my stuff. :)
As for the yogurt... well, it took years for me to get my husband to eat it, and I basically couldn't help but think of his expression when I tried to talk him into it. Now he loves the stuff. Go figure. :)
Hugs!!!
-G
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 03:12 pm
LOVE it. It is entirely too true how you portray an adult rationalizing a temper tantrum. hahahahah
Author's Response: Hmmm.... I wonder if this comes from personal experience.... Nah... :D
Name: scubarang reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 02:39 pm
Although I'm having a difficult time picturing Draco being overweight, I'm really enjoying this story. It has an original plot and the interaction between the two is realistic. I do hope Ginny deoes her job well because I don't want to picture a chubby Draco anymore.
Author's Response: No, I can't keep him that way, but he is fun right now. :)
Name: suzymaholic reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 02:09 pm
haha, I'm gonna admit, the idea of malfoy fat didn't quite sit right with me, but you're good at making the characters flesh out and I find myself enjoying this fic a lot! Woot for you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having a hard time writing him that way, because I don't see him that way either. so he'll start "shaping up" soon. best wishes! -G
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 01:06 pm
I love how it's a 'conspiracy'! :D
Author's Response: poor Draco has no clue that he's at the total mercy of the women around him. Thanks!!!!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 12:04 pm
Yes, I did enjoy. *Nods sagely* Very much. Especially the yogurt. That was really funny. :)
I want to see him losing weight! Chubby!Draco is so unattractive!
Author's Response: don't worry. It's a pretty short story. you won't have to wait long.
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 07:56 am
LOL thats great... keep it going that was funny!
Author's Response: Got a couple of scenes that are quite cute coming up. Thanks for the feedback! Gosh, I totally needed the encouragement today!
Name: Indiainksky reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 05:58 am
I LOVE how diabolical Ginny is, and how Draco really can't keep up with her. :) Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Poor Draco really is a bit clueless about it :) Kind of makes him all the cuter.
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 3 - Set a Date on Apr 28, 2009 05:53 am
ahh i love this story! i check back every day for updates! really fabulous work here :) lovely plot and cutely written :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Updates should come soon. It's a pretty short story (for me) I totally appreciate the feedback. Thank you.
Name: Licentia poetica reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 28, 2009 04:24 am
*snort*
I'm truly enjoying the idea of an out-of-shape Draco having to deal with the loss of his candy and pastries and your description of yogurt is priceless! This is a refreshing take on the disparity of wealth and 'class' between the two; thanks!
Author's Response: Yes... somehow, I could just picture him with the yogurt and a really funny expression. Poor thing doesn't quite have a clue. Makes him rather sweet, I think. :) Thanks so much for the feedback. - G
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 08, 2009 02:00 pm
HAHAHAH !
Poor Draco! I know the feeling! "I want to work out today!" --- end of the day-- "Do I really have to workout!?!" Very nicely done! I simply adore this story, and it's being written in the appropriate season... summer summer summer is quickly approaching!
As always, excellent writing! I can't wait for another update, just to see how Draco fairs with Ginny in charge! =] =] =] =]
Oh yeah, LOVED this part! I was laughing:
Unfortunately, Mrs. Harris had not yet left the room, and was currently standing by the door, shaking her head at him in a negative manner.
Author's Response: I must admit that getting Draco off his bum to excercise has certainly inspired me. :) Thanks! and don't forget to workout today! LOL!
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 08, 2009 01:49 pm
Aww, I love Edwina! She really cares about Malfoy, and I like the fact that she knows how to sorta boss him around when he gets out of hand.
Very different characterization of Draco! I like seeing him out of his element a little bit, giving him some realistic flaws! It's a bit refreshing to read a story where the author isn't constantly gushing about how attractive he is! I am very interested, and I'm off the read the second chapter.
And oh yeah, did i mention that after reading this I went to get into shape for summer ASAP! =]
Author's Response: So glad you enjoy Edwina. She has a wonderful scene at the end BTW, possibly the sweetest scene I've ever written. Hope you keep up with the workouts for summer! *grins* -G
Name: LunaLoves reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 04:26 pm
Yay!! Good chapter, I'm excited for the actual training to start. Lets see Ginny whip Draco into shape, woowoo
Author's Response: Thans!!! :)
Name: LuvWabbit reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 01:15 pm
Oh my God! This is so funny! It scares me a little to think of Draco being so fat! Keep it up.
Author's Response: Scares me too. He's still our Draco underneath, tho! :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 12:33 pm
Oh, awesome. It's refreshing to see a really different kind of Draco, and I think Ginny's going to do wonders for him. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoy my anti-Draco image. Gotta say that it is really easy to write him like this. :)
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 12:17 pm
giggles with glee.
Author's Response: Love those giggles! I hope the next chapters will keep you laughing also!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 12:02 pm
Ooh, this is fabulous! And very original. Can't wait to see Draco's pain mount. *heh*
Author's Response: Thanks! I did aim for originality. I almost feel bad for Draco, but I manage to get over it quickly. :)
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 10:05 am
Hmmm Ginny seems to really get that Draco's confidence is key for him. The interaction is cute; it's cute because it's almost one-sided. Draco isn't up to his Hogwarts prattish self, so she has the upper hand so far. The Quidditch practice and breakfast should be quite interesting.
Author's Response: So Glad the interaction is coming across, as it will be all from Draco's POV. Onto Quidditch next... :)
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 07, 2009 09:31 am
A Draco that is obviously insecure and lacks self-confidence? And to add to it he's pudgy? This is such an original and innovative concept. It seems very promising and I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Hard to believe, isn't it, since I do love our blond egomaniac. I was thinking, if we go back to JKR's universe, he is a bit insecure, hence why he hides behind being a bully, so surprisingly, he was easy to write this way. Thanks soo much for the feedback!!! :) -G
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 08:01 am
Ha ha awesome
Author's Response: Love seeing those laughs come back in reviews. Thank you!
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 07:45 am
Hehehe. It's wonderful to see Ginny truly have the upper hand at first in a D/G fic. She's totally in character and able to put Draco in his place. It's also rather believable to have Draco act as he does, especially since he has been rather hermit-like with regards to socialising.
I'm looking forward to the Quidditch practice. It should be rather amusing, methinks. ^_^
Author's Response: So glad to see that Draco's situation comes across as believable. That's very important to me. And I totally love a strong Ginny also. Thanks! G
Name: randomosity reviewed
Chapter 2 - Looking Ahead on Apr 07, 2009 06:21 am
I 180,000 percent LOVE the premise of this fic, as I'm going through the whole Die with a T situation myself and can relate to Draco so much. In fact, I had my first session with a personal trainer this morning. Oh, Draco, you have no idea what you're getting into.
BTW, I love that Ginny gets to the heart of the matter--and Draco's ego: "you['ll] want to show Harry up." That should get Draco moving.
*looking forward to the updates*
Author's Response: Haha! Yes... have some experience in that area too. I just love the idea of poor Draco dealing with it, almost against his will. Thanks so much! G