Name: bee245 reviewed The Son on May 11, 2009 11:15 am
very good!!! :D very very intriguing and I'm am loving the tension :D

update soon please!



bee245

Author's Response: I will, I promise. Thanks so much!
Name: hummie reviewed The Son on May 11, 2009 11:13 am
the worst cliffhanger yet! ahhh i'm getting too old for that kind of thing, lol... i may just have to abandon this fic for a while to spare myself these gut-wrenching cliffies. sigh. well, very good chapter. i am unhappy at scorpius's interest in lily since you made us attached to rose. otherwise, well done. i look forward to reading the next chapter. hopefully, more will be happening.

Author's Response: Was that really the worst? ;) Can't wait till you see future chapters, though I promise the next ones are not nearly as wicked. Thanks for the review!
Name: laurelin reviewed The Son on May 11, 2009 11:07 am
Oh my GOD Rose must be dying, thinking Lily and Scorpius like each other!

Can't wait to read more. Great story :)

Author's Response: I know, I feel so awful for her, I really do. Thanks so much for the review!
Name: abby reviewed The Son on May 11, 2009 10:27 am
Aw, come ON! Don't leave me hanging like this!!!! :)

Author's Response: Haha, but I have to, that's what makes each chapter so fantastic to write, just thinking up the ways to end them all.
Name: hpotterfan_5 reviewed Advice and Answers on May 11, 2009 07:56 am
I just wanna start out by saying that you're a really good writer and I like how the characters and plot are being developed.

I am rooting for Draco/Ginny in the end somehow! lol

Though I like how everything is going, I really hope there isn't gonna be a Scorpius/Lily/Rose love triangle. I'm not fond of the idea of family members being involved with/fighting over the same person.

And honestly, the whole Scorpius/Lily would've come out of nowhere, while Rose had feelings for him all along. All that aside, I hope you get the chance to post the next chapter very soon cuz I can't wait to read it.

Author's Response: Well, as the chapters progress so do the characters and their relationships, so I do hope you enjoy the end result. Thanks so much for your review and compliment!
Name: Mourning Broken Angel reviewed The Son on May 11, 2009 07:39 am
I just had to read the entire story so far after I validated this chapter, and I have to say- it's fantastic. Great. Wonderful. I adore the various love polygons that are forming up, particularly Lily-Scorpius-Rose.

Awesome job, and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm flattered that you read it after checking my grammar (thankfully I started getting a beta lol)! Once again, thanks for your review!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed The Son on May 11, 2009 07:04 am
Oh oh more please!!!

Author's Response: It's coming, I swear lol!
Name: ginnyXmalfoy reviewed Broken Promise on May 02, 2009 07:37 pm
This story is so good! :)
Can't wait to see where you'll take it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Hopefully you'll end up loving it *crossing my fingers*
Name: citrusabby reviewed Broken Promise on May 02, 2009 04:03 am
*Secretly shipping Scorpius/Lily*

They're not siblings... are they?

Author's Response: Ginny never actually cheated on Harry with Draco and wasn't with him at any point during her marriage to Harry, so nope, safe to say these two are not siblings ;)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Broken Promise on May 02, 2009 03:58 am
Bravo! Wonderful chapter. I wonder when we will see more (or hear) about D/G. Good Luck! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! D/G is coming and Draco will be introduced in the next chapter but these last few were necessary to set-up the background. Everything else takes off as a result of Lily knowing. Thanks for your review!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 03:59 pm
Eek!
Scorpius is so cute!
hehe.

Author's Response: Not the usual response a Malfoy gets lol. Thanks!
Name: shaded reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 02:57 pm
That was a great chapter. Horrible in that Rose couldn't keep her promise, but great character development. (When I saw the chapter title, I think I gasped aloud. Although the story summary indicates that this would happen, I held this tiny portion of me that hoped Rose wouldn't have to break the promise.)

By the way, Scorpius was lovely. It's sweet that although disliking Weasleys in general, he would still stop to see if one of the girls is okay.

I wonder what'll happen now. Will Lily confront Rose, or her mother? Maybe mention it to her brothers or father? Or keep it from her siblings? I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.

Author's Response: Wow, you suggested so many different things that Lily could then do, my head is still spinning! Gold star for plot twists though! I see Lily as very devious like her mother had been, so we'll just have to see! Either way, from this point on, the plot is thickening as knowing the truth tends to complicate different people's perspectives. And thanks for your opinion of Scorpius, I was trying to make it so Draco's son had some sense of manners. :)
Name: AngelicRose reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 02:28 pm
I feel bad for Rose! It wasn't her fault! Scorpius is A LOT nicer than his father, for sure. I like how you kind of mix Next Gen with Draco/Ginny.

Also, is there a possible Rose/Scorpius/Lily stored in the future? *raise brow*

Author's Response: Of course, love triangles make everything more interesting, don't you think? ;) Thanks for your review!
Name: DGgirl reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 08:18 am
Great update! Wow, Scorpius is sure nicer than Draco was at school! Now I can't wait for the next update! please write more soon! xoxo

Author's Response: Thanks you! I think being raised by Draco (who was only a school bully) as opposed to being raised by Lucius (a murderer) would affect your personality just a bit differently ;) Kind of how Lily is a bit more bratty than Ginny ever was (at least in my opinion). Different parents, different results...
Name: albinopeacockwithfreckles reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 05:54 am
Hmm, is there something going on between Lily and Scorpius?

Author's Response: ... If you mean currently, no as they sort of just met. They knew of each other certainly but never hung around in the same circles, so consider this their first interaction.
Name: eveil woman reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 05:41 am
I don't really know what to say, I thought this site was a Ginny Draco based site. I gave this story a chance however it's now chapter four and we have yet to see Draco and have oly heard bout something that wasn't and its looking more like an next gen story. I understand the need for set up but I thing you need to get to the Ginny Draco stuff! Don;t misunderstand I think you writting and story are good but I personally DON"T read next generation stuff. unless the next gen is only a sideline. If you planing to make this about the next generation maybe you need to post this on another site.

Author's Response: First off, I definately understand your concern so I'll go ahead and address it here: Yes, this has next generation ships but it's alongside D/G and comes as a result of Lily's wanting to get to the bottom of her mother's relationship with Draco. Draco will be introduced in the next chapter, but first Lily had to find out her mother's secret (in this chapter) and then meet Scorpius to give her the chance to meet Draco. I understand if it's frustrating that D/G isn't predominant in the introductory chapters and that's a valid concern, however I was just trying something different and I've completed all sixteen chapters and am satisfied with the end result, hopefully once they've all been posted, you'll agree. If not that's fine too :) Just hope I could clear some things up.
Name: psyche reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 05:33 am
I think I'm going to love Lily & Scorpius in this story. I'm wondering what will happen next now that the secret is out. And hope we see Draco soon. =)

Author's Response: Aw thanks! He's coming, I promise and Lily's devilish streak as well as she tries to get to the bottom of all this :)
Name: ginaco reviewed Broken Promise on Apr 30, 2009 04:26 am
I love love love this story! I feel so bad for Lily though. And also Rose for having to tell. Please update.

Author's Response: It's coming soon and I promise that Draco is coming as well ;)
Name: citrusabby reviewed A Truth to Tell on Apr 29, 2009 04:47 am
You ALWAYS pick the best time to end the chapter, huh? :P How's Rose ever going to get out of this without revealing Aunt Gin's secret?

Author's Response: Haha, thanks ;) Well hopefully the next chapter will be up soon and you'll see if she does.
Name: AngelicRose reviewed A Truth to Tell on Apr 25, 2009 03:51 pm
I officially adore Lily, the little devil.
This line: “I’m sure that’s exactly what she wanted, my dad and yours engaging in a very merry Christmas with each other.” is pure genius!

Ahh I can't wait to see what happens next! Is Rose going to tell?

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for all your reviews! I love seeing what one reader thinks on each chapter, and I love Lily too, I hope I do her justice :)
Name: AngelicRose reviewed Confessions on Apr 25, 2009 03:45 pm
Ch. 2: Aw, Harry's really adorable in your story.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: AngelicRose reviewed Advice and Answers on Apr 25, 2009 03:41 pm
Ch.1 review: I like the Rose/Ginny Aunt/Niece relationship. I wish I had that. LOL at James and Albus! And I have a feeling that Lily's going to be my favorite.

Author's Response: I hope so! I'm glad you like it so much!
Name: eveil woman reviewed A Truth to Tell on Apr 25, 2009 04:47 am
This look promising I hope you continue it. I can't wait to see some Ginny Draco stuff!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, and D/G's coming...
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed A Truth to Tell on Apr 24, 2009 06:03 pm
I've never read any "second generation" stories, but I'm liking this one, and interested to see where you take it--you have such a lot of leeway!

Author's Response: I'm not gonna lie, the leeway is wonderful :)
Name: shaded reviewed A Truth to Tell on Apr 24, 2009 03:43 pm
Oh no! Agh! You can't just stop there! You just can't! At least please update soon. I can't wait to see how things will unfold. Will Rose be able to at least deflect part of the question so she doesn't have to reveal all?

I really like how you wrote this chapter. Rose's observations of her friends is interesting. I like how you've been able to convey Lily's character so fully and realistically.

Please update soon!! ^_^

Author's Response: It's coming, it's coming, I promise and thanks so much for your comments, I was hoping to really develop the two girls' characters :)
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