on Mar 29, 2011 11:00 am
This is very short, and it usually wouldn't be my type. But the opening paragraph sucked me in. For a one-shot, it's pretty damn good.
Author's Response: Haha thanks for stepping outside your comfort zone for me! Glad you liked it!
on Nov 27, 2010 01:51 pm
Hahaha, this was adorable! I loved the last line. Made me chuckle.
Author's Response: Happy I could bring you laughter :) Thanks for the review!
Name: starlit skyes
on Jan 10, 2010 11:33 pm
That was very cute! I liked it. Ginny's voice is enjoyable and nicely done.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much :)
on Jan 10, 2010 08:03 pm
How did I never read any of your stories before today? They're fantastic!
I really love the opening paragraph. It's true too. While little kids are watching Disney movies and waiting for their happily ever after, people are being rejected by the ones they love.
I kind of wonder why Harry decided to break off the wedding, but I think Ginny's reaction suited her well. Having gotten past her hero worship of Harry, but not realizing it until he ends the relationship anyways.
Harry shrinking in comparison to Draco was great too.
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews!
on May 04, 2009 03:47 pm
agreed. harry is the sucky thing.
Author's Response: yeah he is, reviews on the other hand are awesome ;) Thanks
on Apr 23, 2009 05:51 pm
Potter Stinks! (Or sucks in this case)
Author's Response: :-P Indeed.
on Apr 19, 2009 06:01 pm
i think this a great short story, i wish that it was a bit longer though but thats just me. Anyway, great job
Author's Response: Mmmm, yeah it was meant to b kinda short, and I understand wanting it longer! Thank for the review though :)
on Apr 15, 2009 05:35 pm
Another thumbs up for you! =D
Author's Response: Thank you !
Name: Kitty Lupin
on Apr 15, 2009 03:41 am
Really cute, I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you liked it
on Apr 14, 2009 06:54 pm
hahahaha bloody brilliant! i loved it! wouldnt mind one more chapter....:)
Author's Response: lol i'm thinking about it :-) thanks for the review
on Apr 14, 2009 04:22 am
LOVE the last lines. Gleeeeee....
Author's Response: Lol I'm happy it made you laugh!
on Apr 14, 2009 01:03 am
Author's Response: Thanks :-) it was fun to write!!
on Apr 13, 2009 04:31 pm
Haha i love that..."maybe it was just Harry" Lmao..
Author's Response: glad it made you laugh! Thanks for the review.
on Apr 13, 2009 01:03 pm
This was fun. I like how you revealed what happened a little bit at a time. Good job.
Author's Response: And it was a happy story, aren't you proud? I'm happy you liked it :-) Thanks for the review!
on Apr 13, 2009 12:52 pm
I whole heartedly approve. Ginny laughed. I love it. Perhaps in a while, you can do a longer sequel.
Author's Response: Actually, I'm thinking about it already -- maybe some thing Draco's POV :-P surprise surprise there, right? Thanks for the review!
on Apr 13, 2009 12:52 pm
Hahahaha! I don't normally like stories that are rough on the Chosen One, but this was too funny to not enjoy! Thanks! :D
Author's Response: aww but this one was just picking on him a little :-P Happy you liked it!!
on Apr 13, 2009 12:47 pm
Oh my goodness! I LOVE the last line! "Maybe it wasn't love that sucked after all. Maybe it was just Harry" Haha! This is bloody fantastic!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it ;)
on Apr 13, 2009 12:14 pm
I love the last paragraph ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! This was fun to write!!
Name: Loveable Punk
on Apr 13, 2009 11:42 am
Well well well, I think I read a lot of us in that story, minus that fact that you didn't hit me after I kissed you the first time.
Wonderful read as always, darling.
Author's Response: Yeah yeah yeah, I could have, or something. Regardless, thanks for your review punk ;)
on Apr 13, 2009 10:55 am
Awww that's so sweet! It's short and succinct and totally conveys what you're trying to say. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it!