Reviews For Dancing on the Bar
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 19, 2009 06:04 am
Ooooooh, now that was an unexpected twist. Very good!! I'm totally and utterly drawn in and the characters feel very real. Fab!
Name: niffer reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 19, 2009 05:49 am
Great story! I thought she probably was working for the Aurors. I don't think it's Draco I'm imagining it's Blaise! He seemed off. More please.
Name: citrusabby reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 19, 2009 02:06 am
That's so gruesome......... but ain't Draco charming?
Name: Sporkanator87 reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 10:00 pm
This is really good! I'm enjoying it very much so far! Please keep writing it!
Name: merriza reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 07:52 pm
Great so far. I love the unique ideas in your storyline. Please update soon :)
Name: Freedomflyer reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 06:58 pm
Not to sound creepy or stalkerish but this story is Fantastic! Really good!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 06:23 pm
oOoOoOoOoOo. i'm interested. update soon.
Name: Akt5us reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 12:23 pm
Wow! I really like where this story is going and I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: Prolific Wonder reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 10:41 am
Personally I think it's... Blaise!!! Ohh Ginny get over yourself... Sorry couldn't help, but think that!
Name: Lynnamae reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 07:49 am
Glad you updated :). This story is quite intriguing. Can't wait for more!
Name: johygurly reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 18, 2009 07:34 am
Peter Brueghel, huh? Is he your favorite or something? I'm an art history major, so I cant help but to point it out! But, yea, I'm liking this a lot so far, very intriguing!

Author's Response: lol he is absolutely not my favourite, but his art is pretty twisted and I felt it fit the mood of the story. Glad you're liking it though -- thanks for reviewing!
Name: KarmaKiller20 reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 07:18 am
ah, it all makes sense now. hmmm... i wonder who it is tho.....
Name: choravenclaw reviewed 2. Forbidden Fruit on Jul 18, 2009 03:22 am
WOW!!!
THAT was certainly unnexpected.
Just as i was about to say that i loved the way Draco is being so charming...BANG! it was all fake!
CLAP
CLAP
CLAP
AMAZING!
VERY well done!
I hope to see an update soon!
;)
Great fic!

kisses
Name: tehlortrash reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 17, 2009 02:48 pm
this is incredibly well written, this line caught my attention particularly:

"No longer did shadows find a resting place in the hollows below his cheeks or in the creases around his eyes."

looking forward to more, thanks.
Name: Lynnamae reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 17, 2009 02:01 pm
I really really liked this. Hope theres more to come! :)
Name: gracie reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 16, 2009 08:09 am
I loved it !
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 08:47 pm
I'm SO glad there's not going to be an Edward Cullen in this fic. Draco's the thing we want.

Looks good, so far. Though I don't understand "one of the nicest clubs in London" being a strip joint.

Author's Response: It's not a strip joint. The girls are just scantily clad. I may have to clarify that in the later chapters if it wasn't clear. Thanks for reviewing
Name: 4everdandg reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 06:02 pm
I hope you post the rest of the story soon... can't wait!
Thanks!
Name: lila2 reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 05:45 pm
i love it!
Name: Akt5us reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 01:23 pm
I like the story and I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: Jaden Malfoy reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 09:31 am
Yay, I love it! I'm so glad it turned out so well. I can't wait for more :D
Name: aizak reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 09:15 am
I love the way its written although surprised as to where Ginny works.
Name: ninquenis reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 09:13 am
I really like this. Can't wait to see what happens next. Favorite part was Ginny's admission the twins weren't too fond of Harry's new girl.
Name: KarmaKiller20 reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 06:32 am
heh. for the first split second, i'm like, "where do i know that title from?" (new moon was my least favorite.) but anyway, i liked this chapter :) i can really imagine the guys not being able to take their eyes off of ginny dancing. and of course, draco was all gentleman. so i'm confused about something. i'm not sure if i read it and didn't catch on, but does her family not know she works there?
Name: jcap1526 reviewed 1. New Moon on Jul 15, 2009 05:33 am
Nice first chapter, can't wait for more!
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