great story!! onward to see what next...
Wow, this is amazing. The characters are perfect. I think you're really on to something here.
Author's Response: Thanks, haha I'm glad you noticed the characters, I think characterization is one of my strong points :) Look forward to future reviews haha!
Good chapter, though there are a few errors, such as 'room' instead of 'broom', etc. The characters are really coming to life. I enjoyed the argument between Bella and Draco. It seemed just like your usual family argument, even though it was about something serious.
I can see that Lucius is going to take the role of being the 'bad' father in this. And I see we'll be getting some D/G action in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, you will deff. be seeing a great deal of character development as the story progresses; they really come into their own. Aha, I also enjoyed the banter between Bella and Draco. It's one of my sister's favourite parts as well. Let me know how you like the D/G action. Your reviews are very honest and thorough. I love reading them! Which reminds me, I have yet to review your story! Off I go... Imaiya
Very good, please update this story ASAP!
I love how in-character your versions of the characters are! Roger was cool, will we be seeing him again?
I look forward to seeing how you tie in D/G so soon! :) Best of luck!!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm trying to upload chapter 4 as we speak...it's going to be a biggie!
Hahahahah, i loved the peacocks. i remember reading it in DH and thinking, "Peacocks??? That's so...Malfoy." i loved how you incorporated it into your story. oh, and yay for d/g action next chapter. please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I will deff. try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible.