Name: Embellished reviewed Chapter One: The Ache of Love Unrequited on Sep 07, 2009 06:11 am

I'm intrigued by your story. I like your Ginny, and her realization about her feelings for Harry seemed very natural. I'm looking forward to finding out how the dream/memory in the prologue ties into the rest of the story, and how everything develops. Thanks for posting, and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really having a lot of fun fleshing everyone and everything out. This is the first major story that I've ever done, so I'm a bit nervous and giddy all at once. Thank you! :)