Name: The_Real_Weaslette reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 08, 2009 03:40 pm
I love it. More please?

Author's Response: It's comeing I promise. the real slow down is having to get it perfect for this site. I'm work at this moment on Chapter 12. and have realized this story will be long than I planned at the begining. I glad to hear you like it so much!
Name: jcap1526 reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 07, 2009 01:26 pm
I just feel so bad for Draco, esp when Luc seemed okay with Gin. Sad! Can't wait for more please!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 03:31 pm
*teary eyes*
this chap was short and at the same time...it happened so much
i'm glad Lucius knows, i like this Lucius.
Pity Draco and Ginny don't get much of a chance to be together.
=/
wish more things had happened

Can the next chapter come out soon?
It took forever for this one to show up.

It was nice, but it's so mean to leave us with this cliff, just not knowing if something is gonna happen, if they're gonna end up together...it's frustating!

And by the way, where's the cross?
i missed it terribly!

Hope the next chap is out soon!
;D


kisses

Author's Response: Sorry it did take so long I was sick with H1N1 and not much of anything got done. The cross will return, however with them getting to speak more the need for the cross is not as importanted as before! I hope to have the next chapter up in the next few days!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 11:27 am
im dying for them. it must be so hard to be away from the one u love especially when u kno they love u as much as u love them. so sad. i loved this chapter. lucius has a heart, who knew :D lol
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 10:17 am
Aw. I really love this story.
Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 12:05 am
I can't wait to see how you end it! :)
Name: Boogum reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 03, 2009 10:33 pm
Well, Ginny has taken the job and Harry is worried. Draco is still being his usual "I love you and only you" self, and Lucius is now taking an interest. I do wonder what will happen next.

Just a side note: I was certainly not trying to be rude with any of my comments. I just feel like 'you' are not reaching your true potential with this story, and I would like to see you do so. :)

Author's Response: I will respond to all your reviews at once, Honestly the first several chapters are onlu meant to cover the time till the epilogue, then the story will really get started, this is just your back ground I promise!
Name: DGgirl reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 03, 2009 09:35 pm
This is an interesting story, but to be honest, it seems kind of bland. The characters just seem to spout off their feelings like reading dialogues off a page without even considering their surroundings or the people they are talking to. I think you need more imagery. It might also help you to create sort of a character profile for all the main characters, and define their personalities, how they behave around certain people, how they talk, etc.... it will help make this story much more realistic than it is right now. Good luck!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 5 on Nov 03, 2009 08:57 pm
aww, this is cutee. i like that lucius isn't evil, b/c he's really more of a family man at the end of DH than an evil death eater. i feel like draco and ginny are turning more into friends, and while i want to hate harry, he's honestly a nice guy, so now i don't know what to think. good job and please update soon.

Author's Response: I will admitt I really have a thing for Lucius, I even have written several stories posted elsewhere with Lucius and Ginny. I have always liked him! And Yes Harry is not the bad guy here(as I have said before)
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