Name: jamie reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 04:46 pm
I think this was a great chapter and very well written. I love the way you portray Harry, even though I like Draco and Ginny together more. Keep up the great work.
Name: The_Real_Weaslette reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 04:23 pm
I thank you for your lovely sacrifice. I can't imagine what it must have done to you to comit such a murder. But it was for a good cause. :)
Lovely chapter. I love this story, can't wait for another chapter.
Name: Xazou reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 12:30 pm
This story is super. I like it a lot. Can't wait to read what's coming next.
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 12:23 pm
This is a good story, and I like how you managed to incorporate Rowling's Epilogue and still make it D/G!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 10:34 am
more i want to see ginny loves draco more than harry
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 07:20 am
Wow! What an excellent chapter! Actually made me cry! But you made your Harry quite nice.
Anyway update soon please :)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 30, 2009 04:36 am
“You know, my life started the first time I saw you. I mean, you stood out. All of your brothers, even Ron, blended together, but I saw you. I knew my life would never be the same again. For a long time, I thought it had to do with Hogwarts. Actually, it was you.”
THIS was a bunch of crap!
Sorry, but it was, Harry never noticed Ginny and this particular line made me very angry.
I loved that Harry died.It was great.I also loved knowing that he knew, that made him much more of an ass because he wouldn`t let her go!
SO yay!
One more reason to hate him and love Draco.
However, the one time Ginny glanced up, her eyes, by chance, met Draco's. Then she fell apart again. It was in that second that Draco believed perhaps he was wrong all these years. Maybe she did love Harry more!
This was crap as well, i hate thinking she loved Harry more, even if Draco is just being twisted, this is simply wrong!
Ginny can NEVER love Harry more than she loves Draco, it`s plainly wrong!
I haven`t checked yet but please tell me this isn`t the end.I would really hate if the last sentence of this fic caused as much pain as the rest of it!
So yeah, sorry about insulting your idea of a hero Harry, but for me he is just a bitter, loathsome guy who was plainly evil and couldn`t stand the hapinness of others above his own!
This is the thing i got out of this fic.
But it`s not a bad thing, you just made me hate Harry a little more!
=D
Very good writing skills and great drama but i do hope there`s an epilogue where we can see how wonderful Draco and Ginny`s life can be once they are finally together.
oh yeah and a loving hsuband????
NO way that`s Harry!
kisses
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Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 7 on Nov 29, 2009 11:15 pm
that was actually one of the sadder harry potter deaths i've read just because ginny truly loved him. when ginny gets over her grief enough to talk to draco, hopefully it wont be too late. but at least the kids get along. it will all work out but its kinda heartbreaking for draco too if he thinks she loved harry more.
Name: dancingonstars reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 19, 2009 03:26 pm
ahh what facts? i need the next chapter! good story. even though this draco is considerably nicer than most 'canon' fics, it works. good characterizations. and i really like this story.
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 15, 2009 07:21 pm
I have a lump in my throat and my eyes are hot. I'm going to hug my dog.
Author's Response: It's always nice to hear I have moved someone! Keep reading, I should have chapter Seven up soon!!!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 13, 2009 02:26 am
oh...i ove harry but can u just kill him so they can be 2gether now. he needs 3 sons to play quidditch with and he needs a little princess in lily to spoil rotten. they would make such an adorable family if it happens quickly. great chapter. i cant wait for the next 1...*squeals*
Name: Nakita reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 11, 2009 09:47 pm
So sad. I hope maybe someday they can be together. Love this story cant wait for more.
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 11, 2009 08:42 pm
I really like this fic! It actually feels possible unlike most fics...plus I love your ginny, she loves her husband but looooves draco ans I think ginny would feel love towards the man who gave her children...keep writting please!!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 11, 2009 08:24 pm
I'm finding it really hard to like Draco in this. He lost his wife and unborn child and doesn't seem to bat an eyelash, but instead worries about Ginny and how much he loves her. I don't know if I will continue reading this. It's not that the fic is bad; I'm just not really getting into it, and I don't think it would be fair on you to always have my complaining reviews.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way. However as far as Draco go please remember he knew loved his wife both he and Astoria knew that. And As far as you thoughts about the lost of the baby, his lack of careing will be explained. Understand his concern over Ginny, is based in the fact that he did loss his wife and child, he does not want to loss, the odd thing he and Ginny have... her okay even with Potter is still better than no Ginny at all!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 11, 2009 05:51 pm
Aww good story cant wait for more.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 6 on Nov 11, 2009 05:19 pm
oO
I didn't get this:
“You couldn't marry her then, so why wait now?” she asked.
“There were facts I wasn't aware of at the time,” he explained.
But i loved the chapter anyway!
=D
Specially this:
“Like I would ever forget watching you eat that cone. I think it's still one the most...” He glanced at the boys, “...exciting things I've ever witnessed.” He smirked. “I felt it was safer to get you a dish this time; otherwise we might end up on the front page of tomorrow's paper.” His intention was clear and Ginny blushed bright red.
AMAZINGLY done!
Hands clapping for you!
We didn't get to see her touching the cross again!
And it made me sad, honestly, i wasn't expecting for a shag in the stacks but it was still sad not to see her even touch it
Still, there's hope because she still wears it!
=D
And thank you for killing Astoria and(unfortunately) the baby(but it's better this way, seeing as it could be the spitting image of Astoria and that would SUCK!!!)
Now we just need to kill Harry and hope she isn't pregnant with another one of his children by the time he dies...
;)
Can't wait to find out what those last lines mean!
Great chapter and nicely put cliff
=)
kisses
Author's Response: Go back and reread chapter Five for your answers- Yes I thought that was very cute too!!!
Name: The_Real_Weaslette reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 08, 2009 03:40 pm
I love it. More please?
Author's Response: It's comeing I promise. the real slow down is having to get it perfect for this site. I'm work at this moment on Chapter 12. and have realized this story will be long than I planned at the begining. I glad to hear you like it so much!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 08, 2009 03:04 am
Oh Dear!
Thankfully you're 100% now,right?
Where i live there was only 1 real case and the person got better really quickly.
=D
I can't wait for the next chapter then!
i'll be sure to be pestering you about it 'cause it sounds like is gonna be great
=D
kisses
Name: jcap1526 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 07, 2009 01:26 pm
I just feel so bad for Draco, esp when Luc seemed okay with Gin. Sad! Can't wait for more please!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 03:31 pm
*teary eyes*
this chap was short and at the same time...it happened so much
i'm glad Lucius knows, i like this Lucius.
Pity Draco and Ginny don't get much of a chance to be together.
=/
wish more things had happened
Can the next chapter come out soon?
It took forever for this one to show up.
It was nice, but it's so mean to leave us with this cliff, just not knowing if something is gonna happen, if they're gonna end up together...it's frustating!
And by the way, where's the cross?
i missed it terribly!
Hope the next chap is out soon!
;D
kisses
Author's Response: Sorry it did take so long I was sick with H1N1 and not much of anything got done. The cross will return, however with them getting to speak more the need for the cross is not as importanted as before! I hope to have the next chapter up in the next few days!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 11:27 am
im dying for them. it must be so hard to be away from the one u love especially when u kno they love u as much as u love them. so sad. i loved this chapter. lucius has a heart, who knew :D lol
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 10:17 am
Aw. I really love this story.
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 04, 2009 12:05 am
I can't wait to see how you end it! :)
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 5 on Nov 03, 2009 10:33 pm
Well, Ginny has taken the job and Harry is worried. Draco is still being his usual "I love you and only you" self, and Lucius is now taking an interest. I do wonder what will happen next.
Just a side note: I was certainly not trying to be rude with any of my comments. I just feel like 'you' are not reaching your true potential with this story, and I would like to see you do so. :)
Author's Response: I will respond to all your reviews at once, Honestly the first several chapters are onlu meant to cover the time till the epilogue, then the story will really get started, this is just your back ground I promise!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 4 on Nov 03, 2009 10:23 pm
Well that was depressing. I'm still not really sure how I feel about this story. I'm getting irritated at both Draco and Ginny, but more Draco. I'm not a romantic enough to feel he's justified in his behaviour. He's only hurting them both by dragging this on and constantly saying how much he loves her, etc.