Reviews For Marriage
Name: CCC reviewed Marriage on Aug 28, 2009 02:15 am
I think you took my review the wrong way. I didn't say I didn't like it. I just said your characters were extreme. You managed to write them in a way where I thought they needed psychiatric care and possibly some happy pills. As a reader I felt concern for them because eventually one of them would probably kill the other. Then the remaining one would probably commit suicide. If I put this much thought into it then you did your job as an author. You made me care/worry for them. Also, I thought the way you changed back and forth using different font to show the two conversations was a great idea.

Author's Response: Ha! Thanks.
Name: peppermint reviewed Marriage on Aug 28, 2009 02:03 am
I like it in a very scary type of way! In fact, I’d love to know a lil more background of how all this came to occur, and what happens next. This might be me being wishful, but are you going to ass more chapters?

Author's Response: No, I'm sorry, I will not add anything more. This was a bit of a drabble that I edited into a presentable cutout of DG, and I'll leave it that way. Thanks for your review, and I'm happy you liked it!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 09:10 pm
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This was really great
Ãt first i thought i'm gonna review saying i didn't understand a thing besides the fight, and thne i read it all the way to the end and all i could think was: This is beautiful
And it really is!
Congratulations!
This was definately a new way to write things!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: HarrysMiOne reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 06:32 pm
that was really good but kind of confusing... i wasnt really sure what was going on... is this a one shot? cuz i would love to read more!!!

Author's Response: Yes, it is a one-shot. Thanks for the review!
Name: CCC reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 03:24 pm
I think they took dysfunctional to a whole new level. Yikes.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like it. In my book, passion is a good thing, and if that is the string keeping them together, then they can be as dysfunctional as they like. :]
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 02:48 pm
wow that was painful, but in the best kind of way. their fight seemed very much like something that could happen with these two, as well as the 'make up' was. excellent job on capturing all the wonderful craziness of d/g in such a short oneshot!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to see a minority of reviewers who thought this seemed very likely to happen to DG.
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 11:12 am
This is nice, in a dark and depressing sort of way.

Author's Response: Ha, thanks.
Name: shadieladie reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 08:51 am
well that was an interesting beginning.

Author's Response: Thank you?
Name: Safira33oo reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 06:59 am
lovely . But I hope the marriage should be better.

Author's Response: Don't we all! Thanks for the review!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 02:31 am
That's a pretty awful marriage. The making-up was sweet, but it's difficult to imagine that it will last when they're so cruel to each other when they're together.

Author's Response: I think all couples fight ugly, but the ones who really have something between them make it through. Thus, Marriage was formed.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Marriage on Aug 27, 2009 12:19 am
BEAUTIFUL!
pity it's one shot, this was really great!
I loved it!
Thank you for posting it!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: You're such a lovely reviewer! Thanks for commenting!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Marriage on Aug 26, 2009 11:33 pm
This was really interesting and good. I think maybe you should explore the finer points a little more with a sequel or companion, but overall, good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: francaise3 reviewed Marriage on Aug 26, 2009 10:43 pm
I loved it.. and would definitely want to read more on this.. why are they married? What should or should not be forgiven? I need more! *wink wink*

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ha, unfortunately, I myself didn't think it through that deeply, and I think with DG you could find thousands of explanations.
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