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on Mar 22, 2009 11:59 am
That was powerful and terrible. Great job.
Nusreta reviewed .
on Aug 25, 2006 06:32 am
That is really amazing!
peter parker reviewed .
on Sep 24, 2004 02:11 am
thats was kick ass, I'm glad i got in trouble at school for reading this. :P
nita reviewed .
on Sep 12, 2004 01:47 pm
So sad, but a good write all the same.
painterchica reviewed .
on Sep 09, 2004 10:45 am
Very nicely done. Incredibly depressing but, hey, it's perfect for my mood. Loved it.
Name: No Stranger
on Aug 27, 2004 10:22 pm
Great poem! Hooray for angst! Keep on writing!
Sandie reviewed .
on Aug 10, 2004 08:20 pm
Awww..That was so sad, yet I loved it so much. That is a great D/G poem..So angsty. I love it! ^.^
Author's Response: Angst is... interesting to write. Thank you!
Mockingbird reviewed .
on Jul 13, 2004 11:39 am
It amazes me how brutally honest and heart wrenching poetry can be. As if you know that the author pulled something from deep inside themselves and had the courage to write them down. If thats where this poem came from I have to say I admire you; and even if it didn't I would still have to say I admire you. I would have never had the courage to write something like this. The fact that I could understand emotions like these with clarity so I could write them down and convery them with such eloquence would scare me. So, with out any further ado and rather scary rambles I would like to say that I really appreciate your poem. I mean, when it comes down to it thats all a writer wants isn't it, to be appreciated?
Author's Response: Thank you. It was deffinatly hard to write this. More so than I originally thought. And yes; to have my work at least appreciated is probably the most important thing to me. I do not like offending people, in fact, that is what most worries me about my writing. I'm so brutally honest that I think it scares people sometimes, so I normally try to tone it down. I based a lot of that poem on my past experiances. For instance, Ginny's death, I've been there, tried that, and it seemed important that she not just curse herself to death. It had to be something that people could connect to for me. But thank you for your review, I'm working on a story at the moment that I want to get posted soon, I hope you'll take a look (and be brutally honest when and if you review).
Deirdre O'Kelly reviewed .
on Jul 11, 2004 10:15 am
Awww! That was beautifully tragic.
Author's Response: Thank you! Tragic seems to be the center of my focus these days. Damn society!
meag reviewed .
on Jul 10, 2004 08:39 pm
how romantic and tragic!! :'( him with his affair and her suicide, *sniffle* so sad!! this was beautiful as poetry, bravo!
Author's Response: Affairs seem to be the mode today for men. I hate it, but it seemed fitting.