That was beautiful and also very sad loved it.
Okay, so that made me want to cry a little. In a good way. It was so beautifully written. I could see it all like a moving picture in my mind. Fabulous job.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's always gratifying to hear that you see it how I envision it! MTL
This was quite sad but very beautiful :)
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you ejoyed it! MTL
That is so sad.
I think you did great showing a more mature Ron
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! MTL
beautiful!!
i like that you made ron nice. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! MTL
Oh sorry, If you have a lot written please start POSTIN'!!
Author's Response: Thank you, for both comments! I've just submitted a humorous oneshot, which will hopefully be validated! Thanks for taking the tiem to review! MTL
(Im not a big fan of character death fics, that being said, on to this specific story)
That was epic, you know how to manipulate peoples emotions exactly the way you want too, Loved it.
Btw,Quirky Vixen nailed it. And you need to write more, you have the skills for it.
STT
I don't think there is anything I can add to what people have said already about this fic. It is beautifully heartbreaking. I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I know I reviewed at the other site and told you how much I love this story, but it bears repeating.
This story is fantastic. It draws you in with both imagery and sympathy. We don't get a lot of detail about Draco and Ginny, but because we get it all from Ron, it makes a stunning emotional impact.
And you have done poor Ron justice. He is always portrayed so one-dimensionally and you have done a wonderful job of giving him life as you take aways Ginny's.
Once again, superbly done angst. You are the Mistress, Emma.
Author's Response: scuba!! I feel most special that you have reviewed this not only once, but twice! I hope to post the oneshot I wrote for you here, as well. I always love to recieve your reviews! Thank you, ever so much. Emma
Oh my God! how did you write that????
It's I dunno.....I have no words to describe the feeling that you have generated..... You have so beautifully captured the beauty of grief......the beauty of the sadness caused by the death of two perfect lovers...it was just incredible, i just can't get over it.....and your originality is apparently in the way you have written it from Ron's POV...which definitely is a first... I loved Ron in this...my heart broke for him towards the end when he says, 'I tried to make them perfect'..
Thank you very very much for that brilliantly written beautiful piece...
I hope to read more of your work...
I hope you would write something happy for a change yeah? :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! It's such a relief that people seem to /so far/ enjoy it from Ron's perspective. I do actually have a hunerous oneshot that I'm debating posting here to, but we shall see!! Thanks again! MTL
Lovely in its sadness and imagery.
Author's Response: Thanks! MTL
Very moving, very well-written. Ron's reaction was heart-wrenching and perfect for the situation. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad it seemed to work nicely! MTL
I cried a little. Poor Ron... This was beautiful, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, I did feel a liitle sorry for Ron.. but not enough to change my mind! MTL
Definitely worth it. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you!! ^.^
That was very beautiful. I could see the artisticness that drew Ron.
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ MTL
Oh Emma, this is so beautiful. The imagery was perfect. Such a sad, poignant narrative. I love you for having Ron tell their tale (and his own). So few use Ron this way and make it believable!
There are so many wonderful, poetic lines, but for me this narrative by Ron held fast with me:
He had left them where they had fallen, not daring to disturb the peaceful picture they made, so at odds with the way they had died. A tear slipped onto a single eyelash, balancing on the end as it tried, trembling, to defy gravity. A moment later, it fell. Proof, he thought, that you could not defy the laws of nature.
Brilliant. One of the best angst pieces I have read.
Even in death, they had not let go of each other.
Such an indelible picture of the two star-crossed lovers. Well done, Emma. Well done.
~Lia
Author's Response: Lia! I was rather pleased to see your name on the review list! I am so relieved that so far people seem to have liked Ron as the narrator - it was a bit chancy using him, but worth it, I felt. Thank you for your lovely, lovely words. Emma
That was really, really awesome. I actually started tearing up during this and that hardly ever happens. I love a fic you can see as you read and this was one, great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Nice to get feedback, especially when it's good stuff about imagery. Thanks for reviewing! MTL
hi,
this story was perfect! the words to express their death, their surrounding...and ron's feelings...sad, but wonderful...
hope to read more from you...
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, so glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully will find the courage to post something else soon! ;) MTL