Name: Desertisle reviewed Bad Day on Jan 12, 2016 10:07 am
Love this story. Sad, happy, hopeful. Great read.
Name: roxors reviewed Bad Day on Jun 11, 2010 08:48 pm
Great story! I read it in one go!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Feb 02, 2010 02:59 pm
hehe
then you made your point!
I really despize her!
About as much as i do Harry i fic world!

kisses

Author's Response: Lol!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Feb 02, 2010 08:56 am
=OOO
i can't believe it!
=''(

fire her and screw up all her of job pssibilities!

GGGGRRRRRR!
I'm mad at that nasty shrew!

Can the nightbus please kill her?
or maybe Draco should anish her form the manor and send her to a train trail and then the train will roll on top of her and she'll die a blooy bloody death!
Plus a painful one!

gorry, i know.
but i like the idea...


kisses

Author's Response: Lol! You really don't like her, huh? Good, that was the idea.
Name: 4everdandg reviewed Bad Day on Jan 27, 2010 11:17 pm
thank you so much for explaining about Narcissa and Draco...

still waiting for the next chapter... **wink**

^_^

Author's Response: You're welcome! I'm typing up that chapter even now!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 26, 2010 09:21 am
hehe
i'm sure there won't be need for more chapters, but i usually ask for one.
i think one of the fews that got me satisfied was Rainpuddle's collection because she wrote about D/G, their kids and their grand kids
it was the only time i didn't ask for more...althougt i did beg her a lot for cookies and smutty biscuits[wich i got by the way! =DD].


nope, my sister is absolutely normal!
Can you believe it?
it's like evil twin/good twin thing.
;P

Author's Response: Lol! Well, I'm certainly going to make up for only having four more chapters plus an epliogue by making them the best chapters in the story. Especially the epilogue. I love my epilogue! I'm posting the next chapter now, so you won't have long to wait for it!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 26, 2010 02:19 am
hehe.
yes,typical me,, always asking for more chapter!
;P

=O
you can't write smut!
=OO
What a waste of your talents!
Tell that silly brin to stop shutting down!
Such a wonderful writer with an amazing way for words should NOT shut down!
You need to be able to at least write smut-ish scenes.
You're too brilliant to NOT write a love scene!
Something truly in te romantic side, not in the naughty side.
Like Reiko Naoe did in Serpent's bride.
Go read it if you haven't already.
it's a complete love scene, you don't even know they are talking about sex, for me that's one of the top fics, a true CLASSICAL!


WHAT???!!!
Your giggls of embarrassment will soon turn into a shrieking girl running around with another one[namely me] chasing her down!

that means we only get 4 chapters!!!!
NOOOOOO!!!!!
i can't!
it's too little!
I'll go crazy!

please don't tell me that's all there is!





ok...
*breathes in*
*breathes out*
*breathes in*
*breathes out*
*breathes in*
*breathes out*

How about if it's not enough and i promisse i'll be fair about this one, i'll even call my sister[she's the one who got the good senses and not even a little bit of craziness] and ask her to judge if the ending is right or we need more...
Anyway, if the ending is not enough then you wrte one more chapter just to end things smoothly?
i know with the way you wrte it won't be necessary and you'll do the perfect hppy eding of a fairytale turn true, but i just wanna be sure you'll give me more if this time is not so.
What you say?
Deal?



[i think i may have multiple personality desorder triggered by reading...]
kisses

Author's Response: Lol! All of your personalities are crazy, though, so it's not too bad that you've developed multiples. ;) Are you sure your sister isn't crazy? She is related to you, after all... Anyway... I might be biased, but I think that the epilogue after the next four chapters is an absolutely perfect way to end the story, so I doubt there will be much need for begging more chapters.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 25, 2010 09:15 am
*inocent look*
i was just gonna ask for a cookie when this fic was over...actually, i was hoping for a SMUT cookie.
Just some kitchen scene that could be really hot and romantic...

Now i'm not so sure i should ask for this...
you see, you already have the same weakspot as me so i'll probably get another kitchen scene soon.
+D
Plus, there are 14 chapters, plus an epilogue to go so i'll bind my time.
;p
Especially because i wanna see if the cookie will endeed be necessary

Seeing as it's me, i'll probably ask for one because there's never enough!
^;~

TOMORROW???
YAAAAYY!!!!
+DDDD

Thanks beth!
I can't wait for it!
+)


kisses

Author's Response: Aw, Manu. You would ask for that, wouldn't you? Here's the thing. I wouldn't be able to write smut. My brain shuts down to the bare minimum functioning capability when I /read/ it, so writing it simply wouldn't be possible. 'Plus, there are 14 chapters, plus an epilogue to go so i'll bind my time.' Well... *giggles in embarrassment* I was looking at the wrong notebook when I said that I had 37 chapters for this story. I only have 27. Oops? Lol!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 22, 2010 04:44 pm
You wrote this a YEAR ago???
And you're keeping it from me??
=OOOO
you're pure evil!!!
Put a bow around his neck and send Draco too me through FEDEX ASAP!
You just being evil to him and keeping him from the world for over a year, i just don't accept it!
It's my turn now!
HMMPH!


Well, i did tell you i spent all afternoon with boys...they are much like the marauders, only older and just love the sexual innuendo jokes.
;P

Well, it was a big change, but they have these feelings for a while now and they were keeping them surpressed.
When one gaveaway, the other just coldn't resst.
;D
I think it's very fitting!
^;^


YOu evil little witch!
YOu RE going to turn my bones ino mush!
I just get crazier and crazier over Draco!
^;^


kisses

Author's Response: Lol! I was posting When No One Else Was Looking! I didn't want to try to keep track of two at once, especially since I was still working with harrypotterfanfiction.com. Updates would have been too far separated for my liking, let alone yours. ;)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 20, 2010 10:18 am
Hehehe
*blushes*
Nw you know how i feel, my mum and sis think i'm a complete lunatic for laughing, cryig andgasping and all sorts of other things while reaing your fics!
^;~

Well, i'm trying my best to breathe!
You just keep making me breathless by writing such a wonderful things.
Besides, i almost had a heart problem because it skipped a few beats and then started beating really fast.

*pulls Draco out of your lap and glares at you* He's mine.

*SNORTS!!*
You're truly wonderful Bethany!
And really makes me laugh and snort in a very un lady like manner my mother detests!

I think this might be a rather common dream among females. I mean, come on!

Hehe...i never dd mention what i was planning to do to him before the waking...
*whistles and looks around*

Hehe, he's just too great!
=D

Hey Beth, have you sent the next chapter yet?
I'm crazy to see the waking up...and i'm in doubt which one is better...they waking up and getting all cuddly or Blaise walking in on them...
HMMMM... can' wait to see what you have boiling in your cauldroun...
^;~


kisses

Author's Response: *giggling manically* You're gonna love this next chapter. Oh yes you are. Haven't posted it yet, but I'll have it up as soon as I can tomorrow. :D
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 18, 2010 02:32 pm
*pouts*
Tuesday DOEs seem far away, it's only mid afternoon and i have to sleep a WHOOOLE night in oder to have the next chaper here!

=OOOOO
Ok, i had skipped a line.
how come you've never been kissed?
That's absurd!
And how can you have a boyfriend and not kiss him?
[you should probably answer this through facebook]


kisses

Author's Response: Yeah, facebook. Will do!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 17, 2010 06:00 pm
I've never been kissed, see, so I have absolutely nothing to go off of and I was so sure I was going to ruin it.

*Scraches head, tilts head to the side and looks at youlike you're crazy*
Never been kissed?
Are you on somethign?
You completely got me lost there

[i think it's because i need voice intonation to understand thins]

*looks confused from side to side trying to find answers*


Of course i'm not angry about Gin running!
it was gonna be akward if shestayed, especially because they would stop at some point...this way she just postponed that moment.

Plus, it's like you said, she has no idea he likes her so she might as well think he's taking advantage of her and that he's doing it because he thought she would be saddned or fragile after visiting her last alive brother[who happens to be lunatic]


Only you would think that this confrontation is easy to write!
I have no idea what i'd say or do...although i was in a similar situations a couple of times and once i apologized and said forget about it ever happened and the other time i just pretended it never happened...


TUESDAY???
but that's SOOO far away!!!
Can you at least send it monday night or tuesday really early?
I can't wait to see what happens!!
=)


kisses

Author's Response: I'm glad that everyone seems to be taking it so well. I only had one real complaint about making her run. And nothing confusing about what I said about having never been kissed. It's pure and simple truth exactly as I said it. I have never been kissed. With my first boyfriend, the most we did was hold hands and my current boyfriend lives on the other side of the bleeding country. *shrugs and sighs heavily* Tuesday's not so far away. Just one more sleep, see, and the wait will be over. :D
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 16, 2010 11:50 am
oh!
when is the next chapter coming out?i almost forgot to ask.

kisses

Author's Response: Right now, actually. It should validate pretty quickly after that. It usually does on the weekends.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 16, 2010 09:32 am
i always thought i was going to take a year off.
Last year, during July vacation i went to Ireland to be an Au pair but when i got to London they thought i wanted to live there so i was sent back home and didn't even get a chance to get out of the airport.
;they just deported me!
NO reason at all!
=O

SO i came back and went back to college, now i'm just studying, but soon enough i'll find way to travel around for at least a month.

WHat about your plans?
Besides college


OH!
If you want just answer through facebook.
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?ref=profile&id=546678651


kisses

Author's Response: Facebook would be better, as reviews are rather an odd place to have a get-to-know-you conversation! Lol! ;)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 16, 2010 05:06 am
hehe
Hmm...i study gastronnomy in college
Your turn!

Author's Response: I hope to attend college this fall (late start, took a year off) to study English. I want to break into the field of editing... books, newspapers, magazines... I really have no preference.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 15, 2010 05:12 pm
=D
a great writer and a great reviwer[not to be concieted, but you were the one who sad it] tend to have lots in cmmon!
=D

Send me an owl sometime, talking abo anythign and nothin at all, i'm sure we'll get along greatly!
=D
[i don't send the fist one because i suck at this starting topics thing]


kisses

Author's Response: Oh, goody! Another thing we have in common! Trouble starting topics lol!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 15, 2010 03:47 am
Hehehe
You asked for it!
Don't me mad wen you see your whole chapters here with quotes at every line.
I just squee with happiness every 5 o 10 seconds when i'm reading.

I'm so glad i make you laugh and ejoy my reviews and please use a bigger room for yor computer,maybe take it outside because i'll not stop making your ego grow!
You absolutely deserve it!
=DD

I KNEW IT!
I knew you had an evil mind about you who just wannts a grat ego stroke as killing someone with words!
=O


Well, about Gin, i DO love her, but for the greater good[and a reason to be nursed and carried around] and a chance to have more skin contact and time spent together with Draco i simply have to get her a few minor injuriess or a simple illness.

FOr this fic, we have a sick Draco which is infinitely cute,especially because there's always the excuse that he was delirious.
Plus is the perfect excuse for Gin to touch him,talk to him,kiss! him[nope, i don't believe in moral standards when a D/G kiss is involved], treat him as a child[which may sound twisted but it's only one more thing to tease him about when he's better] and do all sort of things that you could probably come out with.
Not to mention that Draco can get away with pratically everything for being sick,such as the hand in her thigh[you wrote leg, but in my head it was mid thigh].


You got the absolutely RIHT idea, my dear!
The reason why i ask for frightened, hurt, sick, injured, sad, stalked-and-in-need-of-proteciont is that i want her to have more time spent with Draco and even Blaise.
=D
YOu just reminded me of my challenge fic, which isn't etirely mine, that i'll b launching here soon!
I reall wish yo could wrte it,i think you'd be the perfect writer for it.



Thank yu so muh for your responses, they make me so so happy, the only reason why i review is because there are writers as wonderfl as you are. Notonly do you write great, phenomenal fics but you also send great responses to the reviews whihc only makes me wish to review more and more.
=D

And thank you for your compliments!
THey mke me blushand laugh really loud all the time!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Lol! You really are the greatest, though! I think you and I could be great friends! When I was writing the part about his hand on her leg, I also imagined mid-thigh. I think it's funny how we seem to think alike so often lol!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 13, 2010 04:03 pm
Hehe
Oh yeah!
What a team!
=D
My sister told me i'm a completely lunatic for sending such a huge reviews and that the author probably din't even read it because they get tired of it.

OH!
i hope you didn't catch a bad one!
You have to be in perfect shape!
=D

YaY!
I get longer chapters!!!
=DD
Athough what i would really really love is to have the kiss chapter dedicated to me!
^;~
[yes, i know i'm asking for too mcuh! But a girl gotta dream]

"Almost as if I were standing there listening in on their conversation."

I know!
i think they are real and you listen to them talk and write everything down.
OH!
You have them locked up and are using them only to yourself!
=OOO

"Blaise is just Blaise and super-awesome in all of his Blaise-ness!"

Oh yeah!
Blaise is just AWESOME!!!
=DDD

TOMORROW???
YAY!!!!
+D

Homeschooled is so cool!
i wanna do that to my kids!

Hehe, you're lucky you get to spend that much time at hoe, i love staying home, but people kee taking me to places.
I just explodesometimes and go like: UGH! I DON'T WANNA GET OUT!!!!

Anyway, it's really great what youdo for your siblings!
=D


Tomorrow?REALYY?
YAY!!!
You make me so happy!!!


Oh don't worry!
I'll make sure not to hold my breath for too long...besides, i hold my breath for a long time and then something happens and my heart beats really, really fast and then everything goes back to normal!

Ijust need a few kisses and then i'll be super happy!
and my brain will get a lot of oxigen!
^;~


kisses

Author's Response: Lol! No, I definitely read every single word of your reviews! Sometimes twice lol! As to keeping Draco and Blaise locked up, I would never dream of doing that. DON'T OPEN THAT DOOR!! Anyway, where was I? Ah, yes. Ask and ye shall receive. The chapter containing their first kiss shall be dedicated to you, my most faithful, most enthusiastic reviewer! Yay! Three cheers for Manu! *begins dancing in huge circles and throwing confetti* And yes, I will update tomorrow unless something really unavoidable comes up. Like if I die lol. I think that's the only thing that could keep me from writing! ;)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 09, 2010 12:43 pm
Oh!
I'm so so glad!

I also hate people who leave their fics and not even bother answering reviews!
I get so frustrated!

Hehe, it was quite a lot of talking and begging to have you finally quit that horrible site!

well, of course you are gettng great reviews!
A great story deserves nothing less!
And also, that goes to prove what a great author you are[if you weren't already aware of that].And that you should definately write more long stories because you have the talent!
=D


'You can feel the exact place he has touched, the perfect way he felt, smeled, acted, everything.It just a wonderful feeling for quite some time and amemory that brngs a smile to your face, then it becames frustrating and gets you angry, then goes back to being wonderful...it's a really crazy mix of feelings.'

Well, let's just say that 've been in situtions like Draco is now far more often than anyone should be.
a crush with a friend?
I guess everyone has had one...several crushes on several fiends
Oh yeah, that's just my mean heart wishing to be broken...

[Really, it was about 7 or 8 friends already, i guess i simply can't be friends wit guys. I give advice and turn them into the perfect man, o they already are, but they only see me as a friend and i go and delude myself...]

anyway...i'm dying to see what will happen next!
It's so exciting, i feel like i'm blindfolded on the edge of a precipice, not sure where to move so that i can fall already or walk a little before actually falling!
[got kinda dramatic,huh?;P ]

kisses

Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, just a little dramatic lol! The reason I copied that paragraph from your review was to tell you that it was exactly the emotion I was trying to convey through that part of the story. Almost those exact words were going through my head as I imagined Ginny sitting there on her bed, unconsciously thinking of him. For some reason, though, it didn't post the rest of my response.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Jan 06, 2010 04:24 pm
Hehehe
Oh yeah, poor Draco, he has to suffer so that we, wicked people that we are, can have some great fun.
;P

Well,he did stumbled around his words and acted like a babbling baboom.
;p
He sure deserves to be called on it!
*yeah, i'm mean!*

TOMORROW????
YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!
+DDD

You just made me really really happy!

And i'm glad i made you laugh!
=D


kisse

Author's Response: Oh, yeah. Just wait 'til you see what I have in store for the poor man. ;)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Bad Day on Jan 06, 2010 02:00 pm
lol well i was falling asleep but i found that when i started writing, i just couldnt stop. draco playing nurse-maid was just about the cutest thing ever.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know how that is. I try not to start writing once I get tired or I'll end up staying up all night and being quite the zombie the next morning. ;)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Dec 21, 2009 01:20 pm
Hehe.
I'm a great reader of Extremely naughty fics, very responsive and all that, but writing it?
OH i wouldn't even know how to begin!
=S
For me extremely naughty only in conversations and descriptions of real life...on fic world?
I'm just terrible so i stick to editing and reviewing!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: So, I was looking at the homepage today and guess what? Submissions are closed for Christmas. So, unfortunately, even if I had typed up the chapter already, I would not have been able to post it. And I won't be able to post it until either the fourth or fifth. What am I going to do with myself!?
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Dec 21, 2009 09:20 am
=D
i'm really really glad you won't be leaving your stories after Christams!
;p

I give you my full support to write and publish a novel!
^;^
And i'll make sure to buy at least one.


As to the fic, i was re-thinking it and i thought...why have ONE great author writing it when i can ask many of the to write the chapters and have a lot of geniuses working together???
Soo...when you have the time you could write a chapter and then i'd ask[more likely beg] other authors i absolutely love to write this or that chapter.
The fic is called Protection by preety Malfoy.
And it seems kinda silly but i assure you i have a deep love for it.
^;^

Thank you fo rbeing honest and telling me you can't right now rather than making empty promises!
;)

there's a sekeleton for a definately to extremely naughty fic envolving some key points.
Would you ike to give this one a go?
It kinda showed up when i was talking to a friend about her sex life hense the need for naughtyness.
;P


I'll TRY stop chewing my nails.
Hehe


kisses

Author's Response: Yeah, I wouldn't be able to write extremely naughty. I have a hard enough time keeping my wits together while reading it lol!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Dec 21, 2009 04:35 am
HEHE
I'm so so glad i made you happy!
=D
*blushes*

Well, the worlds were flowing all around me like they had left the computer screen and started enveloping me all over, i felt like i was Ginny and i could see the memories and i could feel and almost touch them.
it was so real!
It'samazing!
So no it doesn't sound wierd that you felt that way because i felt almost like that.
I actually went back and read it again just to make sure some of it wasnt my imagination.

Well, about the challenge, i read a fic many years ago about Draco and Ginny on astronomytower.org, and i completely fell in love with it.
The thing is the site went down due to some problems and they lost many many fics.
The fic i was reading was around chapter 14 or so, but they lost it so i contacted the author as i had done before to coment on the fic and giive some ideas and such.
Anyway...she had to re-write the fic because it wasn't archived anywhere. She only made it to the first chapter and she even answered me and a few others about it but the she disappeared!
I sent her e-mails, owls and tried contacting her in anyway possible but there's no response and she hasn't posted anything either.
I think she gave up on all things fanfic related or something drastic has happened to her.[she lived near where the hurricanes hit in the US, i think Lousiana]
I've been stirring the idea in my mind of using the first chapter and giving a great author that i trust the chance to re-write this fanfcition.
I would provide the skeleton seeing as i've read this fic about 30 times[no joke here] and we'd put on the disclaimer who wrote the original fic and what we're doing, kinda like explain the project.
It could be just the skeleton provided by me and the actual writing by one or more authors.If she's ever perusing the net and finds the fic we'd let her know what we had done so that she would acuse us of plagiarism.
It's a bit risky and you may say ABSO-BLOODY-LUTELY NO!!!! to this idea but i really wanna see this fic again and more importantly the reason i want it is because i've told my sister about this fic thousands of times and by the time i could barely read in English so she could hardly prononunce a world and now that she can read and write she doesn't have the fic anymore. So it would be a gift to her.

i jut realized how messed up it all sounds and i didn't have time to organize this.
plus you probably hate someone micromanaging you and your writting, BUT if any of this sounds appealing to you you just let me know and i'll tell you more about it, ok?
=D
And thank you for taking the interest to want to know about it.
=)

TUESDAY????
REALLY???
[nope, i don't have personality desorder i just forgot to coment on this so i'm back to fan mode].
I would loooove for that to happen!
Can you please send it to typing now?
i'm chewing my nails off[literally, for my mother's displeasure] just by thinking what will happen next now that they both look at each other differently!

i can't wait to read it!
Please please type until your fingers bleed and then type with your toes!!!
=O

ok, so don't do this...send it to someone else to type and bleed all over it as i don't want you too tired or harmed in any way.
But please send the next chapter soon!
=DDD


Thank you for this bit of information...although i probably won't sleep and will bug you half to death!
;P


kisses

Author's Response: While I would love to help you out on your idea, I really don't have the time to start a whole new chaptered fic right now. I already have five or six in the works at the moment, not to mention an actual novel I'm trying to write for publication purposes. If you'd asked for a one-shot, I definitely would have jumped on the opportunity. I've had a bit of writer's block for a while and a short little project would be good to refresh my creativity. What story was it, by the way? I read a bit over there, but so many of the stories were left unfinished that I pretty much abandoned the whole site. Anyway... please don't chew off your nails. I've done that and it's really no fun. ;) I'll keep the updates coming, I swear it, with no need for self-harm from any of my readers. I may take a short break after the next chapter, what with Christmas being here and all, but it won't be a long one. I hate to stay away from my stories, I really do!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Bad Day on Dec 20, 2009 10:17 am
Hehe
what a right pair we are!
one making the pther anxious!
=P


kisses

Author's Response: Yep! Lol!
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