Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 10, 2009 07:10 pm
yay, more Beneath the Surface! i liked the chapter, but i thought that there wasnt much going on. though i am liking the flow of the story. go you :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 09, 2009 11:39 pm
Love the chapter! I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 09, 2009 02:21 pm
good job. but i want some action! haha. update
Author's Response: Lol! Action, eh? I'll see what I can do... Thanks for reviewing!
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 09, 2009 11:29 am
I love the Draco/Ginny dynamic in this you know and they are so stubborn and child-like which is super cute . I wait for an update each time .
This was well written, I loved the way you described Ginny's hair,it's such an important part of her personality.
The only problem with this chapter was that it was short :(
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Sorry about the length; was a bit under the weather... I'll do better next time, I promise! ;)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 09, 2009 08:30 am
This was incredibly short!
Please tell me we will have another chapter up soon!
I loved the fact that Draco FINALLY saw Ginny!
He knows she's there, he acknowledges the fact that he's actually enjoying her company!
Plus he has noticed her body, and even find her HAIR attractivE
So yeah, i loved thi, even though he killed the moment!
;p
kisses
Author's Response: I'm sorry it was short; I've been sick these couple of days and didn't feel up to lengthening. The next one will be longer, though! I'm glad you liked it anyway, and I'll be posting again before too long!
Name: bellatrizM reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 11:34 pm
i like that they kinda provoke the migranes wityh their "fights" or more like arguing... it makes the story srtonger somehow.. liking it a lot
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 10:49 pm
he's going to drive himself nutters and then blame it all on her [lol]. then she's going to have to take care of his insanity as well as his migraines, virtually ensuring that he never gets rid of her. all we need now is for him to get really jealous of her date with blaise and then his head will explode. poor draco. definitely the worse patient ive seen though. great chapter, cannt wait for the next one :D.
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks for reviewing! I have a feeling you are going to really enjoy the next few chapters! ;)
Name: lilactree reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 10:09 pm
Decent conversation eh? Sounds more like the initial stages of flirting to me... even if it was about detestable personalities :)-YAY (Still worried about THE Irresistable Zabini Charms however...) Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll be updating quick as I can!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 10:07 pm
i really really love how draco is starting to see ginny in a different light. and suddenly *poof!* she's the sexy nurse with those nice legs and hips. yes! hopefully, we can get some nice lip action between them now...or maybe even more. haha, can't wait!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 10:00 pm
I am enjoying this story very much thanks for updating it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 09:46 pm
I would like to say thank you for making Ginny have knobby knees. She is not perfect. lol Also sometimes it feels like they change moods a bit too quickly. It's not really bad at all because it is explained, but sometimes it just felt a little too fast for comfort. If that makes any sense. Or it could be my brain not working fast enough to register it. :D Again good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And you're welcome for the less-than-perfect Ginny! I'm sorry about the quick mood changes; I'm still early in my writing career and still learning how to make my stories flow smoothly. The more I write, though, the better I get, so before long, it'll be easier to keep up with me. ;)
Name: unseensorrows reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 09:41 pm
I love how you actually address the other parts of the story besides their potential attraction. It makes it a much more developed story and it seems all the more realistic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Coffee Personality on Dec 08, 2009 08:49 pm
Aww, I liked this chapter. Draco is so adorable in all his stubborness. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! Isn't he, though?! I'll be posting again in about a week!