Name: lilactree reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 24, 2010 12:59 am
I really liked the plot in this fic, fast paced and all. You absolutely nailed the fire and ice characters that we all love. They only thing that struck me as slightly off was Ginny's maturity. She had some mannerisms of her teenager self (heated/dramatic) rather than her mid-20s self (passionate/self control).
Though all in all it is an enjoyable read. Can't wait to read more stories!!!
Name: Boogum reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 21, 2010 06:28 pm
Lol. I love your Ginny. She's so funny. Nice to see Draco can still have his moments of niceness without losing his Draco-ness.
Name: Boogum reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 21, 2010 06:23 pm
Ouch. That's got to hurt. Poor Ginny.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 09:36 pm
A lovely story. I loved the ending, but I wish it was a little bit longer. I like your writing so I'm off to to read your other story.

P.S. I like the name you had for this story on, really cute.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 08:28 pm
a lovely ending to a great story....
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 20, 2010 08:13 pm
i am loving this story...
Name: libellule reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 02:29 am
Draco Malfoy is whistling? Hehe... He must have a very nice day :)

Thank you very much for a great story!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 01:56 am
I did enjoy it, though it was a bit too lovey-dovey for my tastes at the end. Still - great story!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 07:42 pm
“We’re going to dinner tonight.” Lucy raised an eyebrow. “He left a note on my pillow.”
Lucy feigned gagging and both laughed.
“And you don’t remember what happened?” Lucy asked.
“Not entirely.” Ginny was blushing again. “But I woke up in my bed.”
“Wearing the same clothes as the night before?”
“Well, now that you mention it, I was wearing my pajamas this morning, but I don’t remember putting them on...”
Lucy whistled and Ginny had the decency to blush so severely her face blended neatly with her hair.

ok, you HAVE to write a fic about THAT!
Telling us all the minor dirty little details that made the night that much more amazing!
Also, it would be nice if Ginny could remember, having a night with Draco and forgetting about it doesn't seem all that fun...

He remembered the way they had stumbled down the hallway and into her bedroom, never breaking their kiss. The way her hair had fanned out around her head as they tumbled onto her bed made his breathing difficult. He remembered the restraint it had taken him to leave her when he had realized she was far more intoxicated than he. The last thing he had wanted was for her to do something she would regret.
He had pulled away from her lips and held her closely to him, gently stroking her hair. In moments, she had fallen asleep and he [ suspence song ] had transfigured her work clothes into pajamas and scrawled a quick note.

Is pure evil!
Ok, so it's nice to know Gin didn't forget about an amazing night with him, but...We don't get a smutty biscuit!!!![whinning loud voice]
I wanna a smutty biscuit for this fic!
One just for me and my crazy thoughts and reviews and crazy dances and laughng, crying, gagging and all sort of amusing things i do in front of the computer while reading a great fic!

He smiled and took in her casual jeans and sweater.
“Am I?” he grinned, grabbing her hand and pulling her to him.
“Yes, and I just got home,” she protested, successfully dodging him as he bent his head for a kiss. “I won’t be ready to go for a while. I helped mum in her garden earlier.”
She stepped out of his embrace and turned towards her bedroom. In three steps he had pulled her back into his arms again.

ok, i HAVE to say this:
I LOOOOVE the banter banter banter between these two and you write it so greatly!
i just love it!
And i really love this playfull, i-know-i-can-have-you Draco.

“By the way, why did you leave last night? I seem to remember things being rather heated.”
“Ginny Weasley, you were very smashed. Are you angry at me for being a gentleman?” He was joking, but his casual response only added to her sudden anger.
“A gentleman? You left a very hot and bothered witch completely high and dry last night!” she snarled, trying to free her arms from his grip.

Now THAT's the Gin i know and love, the one with quite a mouth and a lot of atitude.
plus a gentleman acting Draco is just too great to pass up!

He propped himself up on his elbows to protest her sudden departure, but stopped when he saw her hands move to the button on her jeans. He sucked in a breath as she slowly undid the zipper and pushed her jeans to the floor. He barely registered that her underwear matched her bra before she stepped out of her jeans and crawled back onto the bed.

Some time later they lay tangled together, breathing heavily and sweating. When his breathing had returned to normal he rolled to the side and pulled her against him. He wrapped protective arms around her petite frame and planted a soft kiss on her forehead.

ok, so i don't know how appealing this idea my be to you but...can i get an early birthday present and have the companion fic that shows what happens between Ginny crawling in bed and laying together???
I really love Ginny's attitude in this fic and Draco is just so so sweet i can't forget every little thng he does!
I really wanna see these two together for at least a little while longer!!!

It was Sunday evening and Ginny had just escaped her brunch with Hermione and Lucy. Draco had been waiting in her kitchen and was now dragging her to the bedroom.

I really wish they had started sth in the kitchen!
i loooove kitchen and shower scenes!
Can we please have one?
i know this fic is finito[which i totally disaproove of, because i think with 2 such great characters we deserve to see at least one more chapter that will be just about the two of them, maybe in a weekend get away or sth.]

“Well, Malfoy’s usually get what they want,” he answered. “Now stop smirking at me.”
“And what does this particular Malfoy want?” she asked, leaning back and looking into his grey eyes.
“You. All of you, and for a very long time,” he whispered, suddenly serious. He found her hand and laced her fingers with his.

He's too sweet!
I love the possessiveness and the cocky arrogance!
It's just so perfect!
Have i mentioned i love Gin?
She's just the perfect woman for him!
This Ginny is absolutely amazing and simply great!

I think I may be falling for you.”
His eyes grew wide before a smile curved his lips.
“I believe that may be catching, because I could be falling in love with you, too.”
She stared at him for a moment, relief flooding through her chest.
He smiled at her then and pulled her to him, covering her lips with his and wrapping his arms around her.

WHERE can i get one?
i swear, i want this Draco for at least one weekend, he could carbonize or self combust, or just disappear in the middle of the night but i'd be just too happy just for knowing such a perfect guy exists[of course i'd go insane and poor trying to track him down all around the globe but it would be totally worth it!]

THis was the most sweet, perfet chapter!
perfect to be the last one, or the one before last[crosses fingers and hopes you'll understand i'm asking for onw more].
This was really really perfect, thank you so much for it!
It was truly wonderful!
I love Gin's relationship with Lucy and even more the one she has with Draco.
He's strong, sweet, caring, hot, rich and absolutely perfect.
She's a strong, confident, independant woman and just perfect for him.
I loved every minute of this, every line, every word.
It was just perfect!
Thank you so much for it!
i can't wait to see the next[extremely naughty] fic!
the best of luck and i hope it's out soon!
Thank you one more time for the great chapter!

Name: darinmeg reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 07:29 pm
Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 05:48 pm
Bravo! Wonderful chapter...I can't wait to see what her family and his thinks about this. Good Luck! :)
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 05:38 pm
My highlight the past couple of days has been this story!! IN LOVE!! Great writing!!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 04:58 pm
ahhh, draco is so cute! And you should definitely post your other fic on here, becuase I like that one even MORE than this one! I bet tons of other FIA people would love it too. Good job on this fic !

Name: libellule reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 19, 2010 03:48 am
“(...)I absolutely refuse to allow you to have sex fantasies about that Malfoy git in our office!”

No one can blame Ginny for daydreaming about Draco :)

I really like your story

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 07:53 pm
I loved this chapter. Their interaction was great - 'I’ve had a busy day...I have a lot more work to do. You know, owls to send, stories to write.' 'Owls? Are you upset that I didn’t owl you?”'
He smirked. Merlin, how she loathed that smirk. 'Don’t be ridiculous.'

I really liked when they had dinner. They were connecting so well. The way that they both asked the same question -
about being happy and then replied to their answer the same way 'Liar'. And Ginny summed up how they felt nicely: 'You’re surrounded by people, but you’re lonely...You have the things you always wanted, but you’re lonely. You lie down at night, and you’re alone. I know, because it’s how I feel as well.'

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2010 03:15 pm
i love reading your resposes to my reviews!
You're always so enthusiastic!

I'm so so happy i made you laugh.
i go really crazy and scream, make fces, laugh, cry, gesture with my hands and all sorts of things while reading so it's great to know i got a reaction out of you with my review!

sadly i know there's only one more chapter!

but on a good note i have a great "promise" you made:
I appreciate your suggestions and will tell you if you can hang on for this story (there are only two more chapters left) then hopefully I will be able to post another story and that one will be rated extremely naughty.

I can't wait tosee this new fic!
i'm super excited abut it!

Can the next update please come ot soon?
During this weekend the cabal was off or sth so it's slow and i really wanna see wha happens next!
Yes, i'm nervous about it, and biting my perfectl just manicured naisl off!

So, please, een if it'sjust for the sake of my hearing[mum is complaining about the nails], update soon!


Author's Response: Thanks again!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 02:58 pm
This is so cute! I really loved the ending. this had the perfect combination of physical and emotional balance of chemistry between the two. I also wanted to tell you that I found your other story on Standing in a Circle of QUiet, and I really liked it! It had a really good mystery and I found myself questioning Draco's true loyalties. That story was just so cute and made me all fuzzy inside. I just thought I should tell you that. :) GOod job and please update soon!


Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! And I'm flattered that you tracked my other story down. I've been revising it for a while now and was thinking of posting it on here, too. If you have ANY suggestions, corrections, etc (I know there are some plot holes and I'm working on them) I would REALLY appreciate it!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 12:31 pm
Wonderful! I can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 12:27 pm
“Dinner, maybe? You’re the one who said you had another story to write.”
“I do have another story to write, but I’ve been writing all day. Maybe we can meet up sometime early next week? I don’t mean to seem ungrateful for your cooperation, but it’s the weekend, and-” He raised a hand to stop her.
“I understand. I’ll contact you Monday morning,” he replied, turning and preparing to cross the street again. Was that disappointment in his voice? she wondered.

Poor Draco!
He really made an efforrt and she completely blew him off!
I hope she remedies things or i'll be really pissed with her!

“Wait!” she called out to him before she could change her mind. He stopped and turned to face her. “We, well, I suppose, if you aren’t busy or something,” she paused, feeling silly and took a breath before starting again. “I don’t have any plans, really. I was just going to go home and make some pasta. If you aren’t busy, you’re welcome to come along.”

i'm back to loving Gin-gin!
PLUS, i looooove when there's cooking involved in any fic, even if it's a batch of cookies it already makes me happy.
I just think there's something really sexy about it.

Ginny had been cooking for a while now and everything was nearly finished. When they had first arrived at her apartment, she had felt slightly unnerved at having Malfoy in her personal space, but he had resigned himself to the living room, fascinated with the Muggle television set her father had given her when she moved in.

I'm mad at Arthur for giving her the TV!
I thought she would be cooking and he would be sitting by the kitchen table or sth and she would ask him to taste the sauce or another thing like it taht would leade to a kiss.
[OOOHH!!! Could we have that scene later? PLLLEEEEEASEEE?????]

she had removed her robes and heels while she cooked, rolling up the sleeves of her white dress shirt. The topmost buttons of her shirt were undone, giving Draco a glimpse of her creamy flesh. Her shiny red hair was falling around her face in gentle curls.
The alcohol made his vision blur slightly and she looked almost angelic. He wanted to reach out and touch her face, but was afraid the action would break the spell she seemed to have over him.
“What about the youngest Weasley?” he whispered. “Is she happy?”


THIS is the kind of scene that even when a kiss DOESN't happen, it's totally worth living!
Just the rush of of having him look at her, aprasing her whole body.
Then he goes and says something like this!
I can't believe she's still breathing!
only under the infkuence of alcohol she would be able to take this without melting or throwing herself at him!

“You’re surrounded by people, but you’re lonely.You have the things you always wanted, but you’re lonely. You lie down at night, and you’re alone. I know, because it’s how I feel as well,” she said in a voice so low he had to lean towards her to hear.

What an invitation!...and a confession.
It's nice to see them as equals instead of completely different people.
They understand each other and know how they feel.
I think it's great!

Everything was fuzzy and he knew it was hopeless to try to make sense of anything. The close proximity of her body was doing things to his mind, or maybe it was the alcoholic haze, or her scent. Or the way her impossibly soft hand lightly brushed his cheek, or the way she stole his breath when she pulled his head down to her smooth lips.

i can't believe you stopped HERE!
The biggest one i've ever seen!
Can you please update soon?[preferably within the next hour or so]
I'm going insane here, trying to find out what's going to happen?
Is she gonna push him away?
Is he gonna "come to his senses" and stop?
Are they going to kiss?
If they kiss is he going to apologize?
Is she going to end it and say it was a mistake?

i'm too crazy with ideas of what could happen!!!
please don't take so long to update, now it's a crucial moment and i'll go completely insane if i don't find out what happens soon enough!

GGRRRREAT chapter, loved almost everything about it
Scratch that, i loved everything aboutit, excpet the fact that Arthur gave Gin a TV and Draco just sat there watching it, the pasta sauce is not my favorite either...THe cliff got me crazy for more, but that's not exaclty a bad thing.

Thank you so much for this!
It was really really great!
I loved every sceond she spent with him and with Lucy[i just love their talk/banter]

Please don't forget about us and update soon!
i'm dying to see what happens next!


Author's Response: Worlds. Best. Reviewer. Thanks so much! This review actually made me laugh out loud a couple times! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a thorough review. You're the best! On a sad note: only one more chapter to go!
Name: Madmoose reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 07:35 am
WHY?! why did you leave it there? ooooh you evil writter you! lol! Fab chapter - really interested to see where this story goes - looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I guess I am evil, even though I didn't intentionally mean to make it a cliffhanger. Thanks for reading!!
Name: WHITEWITCH3 reviewed Chapter 3 on Jan 15, 2010 11:03 am
I love this! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Name: scentasia reviewed Chapter 3 on Jan 13, 2010 05:04 am
you just made my day!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I'm glad I could help! Thanks for the review!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 11, 2010 03:32 pm
can the next day be like later tonight or tomorrow?i'm so excited about this fic, you just have Draco and ginny so perfect!
They are the most original, perfect character and no OOC EVER!!!
I'm impressed everytime i re-read a chapter!
It's like they are real people and you know them, get into theirheads and everything, just WOW!
You have them perfect!

Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 11, 2010 03:30 pm
Only TWO more???

Please tell me at least you're working on another really great fic for us lovely readers and faithful reviwers!
*bats eyelashes*

An extremely naughty fic!
*nods head like a bubble head toy*

I can't waitfor the new chapter!
You jut made me so happy, i wanna see it as soon as possible!

Name: lila2 reviewed Chapter 3 on Jan 09, 2010 09:22 am
OMG love it! update soon

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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