Name: Frust-sheep reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 24, 2010 04:39 pm
Oh this was beautiful! The line about his ego was priceless. ;) Anyway awesome job! :)

Author's Response: That's one of my favourite lines too. :)

Author's Response: That's one of my favourite lines too. :)
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 17, 2010 07:06 pm
a nice one..  a beatifully written story!!!!
Name: SlytherinBabe reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 14, 2010 08:36 pm
wipes eyes awwws so cute at the end. likeeee

Author's Response: Thank You. I'm so glad you liked it.

Author's Response: Thank You. I'm so glad you liked it.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 13, 2010 04:23 am
He he he
yo make me blush!
I'm so glad you liked my review and it makes me so so happy that you wrote this for me.
Really, this jus made my day!
Thank you so so muc for this!
Andplease write more, you have them s perfect, it would be a shame NOT to write more.
Thank you so so much for this!

Kisses, kisses,kisses
Name: Temptation Bites reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2010 04:58 pm
WHOO! The amazing JanuaryBaby strikes again! This is such an amazing story, of "love making" instead of just sex.
Draco and Ginny have a beautiful relationship and this story is just filled with love, humour and well Draco clotheless. Your writing skills are fantastic and the story just flowed beautifully.

Bloody fantastic if you ask me.


Temptation Bites
P.S who cares about "normal" life :P

Author's Response: Thanks, it appears somebody has been reading my bio. I agree with the sentiment. I love how you said love, humour and a clotheless draco in the same sentence. May you dream of Draco naked tonight. :P
Name: yomoedmb reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2010 12:07 pm
I love this! It's so sweet and poetic in a way. It's just beautiful and how I would hear Ginny saying things.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Name: Daniela1 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2010 04:46 am

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2010 04:09 am
A good marriage is a mixture of love, respect and sex. Because when you reach my age, you want a man who can kiss your neck and distract you from making dinner. ‘

Molly's advices were great, but really...this one is a keeper.
I've already added to my quote notebook.

Then I lower my eyes to his shirt. Damn it, why doesn’t it have buttons. In all the books I’ve read, the shirts had buttons that the heroine could undo slowly and sexily, sometimes with her teeth.

That IS a bugger!
All the romances i read have button down shirts!
This really doesn't help!
plus, it forces conversation and should she attempt to remove his shirt, with him being taller and all that it would lead to some laughing or gigging[on her part, of course]

Note to self:give little hints to boyfriends that i love them on button down shirts so that i never have to gather up any bravado to say sth like: ’I think less clothes are in order, right now.’
Just make sure they are always wearing the ones with button, and if they don't take the hint by me saying how much i love them, i sure can get enough bravado to say; i prefer when you use the one with the buttons.

Thank you for reminding me of this, i had never really thought of it!
;p [despite the funny face, i AM being serious!]

His chest is covered in a criss-crossing of thin scars. They’re ugly and raised, and it must have taken a lot of courage to show them to me. Draco, who is so proud of his appearance, must hate them.

Poor Draco!
He must feel so awful about them!

Indecision washes over me. Should I undo them? Then what? However much I may soon love Draco, I don’t think I’m quite ready for that. Draco solves my dilemma. He pulls me gently to my feet, and then his lips are touching mine softly, again and again.

I'm glad he didn't "force" her by just waiting to see what she would do.
Instead of standing there and let her come up with all the moves, he was an active part of thi, knowing when to wait and when to meddle.
Everything is going just so right and romantic!

his lips form that half-smirk that makes him look so beautiful.


Draco also has that lean muscled seekers build that I’ve always found attractive.
Well, we sure have that in commmon!

And if his body is anything to go by then it would seem that he is really enjoying himself. His, I don’t really know what to call it; cock, penis, dick, is… big.

i seem to have this problem as well, it's hard to put your thoughts in order when you're not sure how to name sth.

Draco notices my glance. It would seem I am lacking in the subtlety department.
*clears throath*
she's not the only one...

He colours a bit, and I find this ridiculously attractive.

is it weird to say that i completely agree?
i guess it's just really sweet to see such a confident guy blush over a look.

‘Ssshh, Ginny baby, I ’m so sorry. Merlin, I wish I didn’t hurt you. We shouldn’t have done this. You’re so small, too small.’
‘Shut up,’ I say. I don’t like hearing him regret what we are doing. The pain is lessening, and I rock my hips experimentally.
He gasps. ‘Ginny, don’t do that. Just...don’t do that. It’s hard to stop myself when you move like that.’
‘Then don’t stop. It doesn’t hurt as much now,’ I murmur as I move again.
‘Are you sure?’
‘Don’t be a pillock. Of course, I’m bloody sure. Now, move,’ I encourage.

I guess this conversation sums it all up.
it shows their insecurities, his love,her strenght then his strenght, her love and finally[without which no D/G love would be complete] their banter.
I love it!

Draco’s weight is now fully on me, but I don’t mind. I feel secure in his loose embrace.
THAT feels wonderful, one of the most edible feelings ever!

I came twice. Most of my friends say that girls don’t usually come at all the first time, and I came twice. I feel like shoving it in their faces.

Hehe, that was funny, her desperation into achieving this.
It's like she's amazed at her own accomplishment.
plus her wish to rub it in her friend's face, her look[the face you picture yourself having when you can't really pull a face because there are other people around] must be priceless.
Just shock and smug all over!

Draco Malfoy is officially a magnificent lover. Not that I have anyone to compare him to, but I’m starting to think I don’t want anyone else.

isn't taht just a great thought to have?
it's a proof of her love for him.
I think it's wonderful and just...perfect!

His eyes flutter closed, and a look of absolute satisfaction covers his face. ‘Twice...really?’
‘Go to sleep, your ego’s big enough already,’ I murmur.

THAT's the smug look i was talking about and i'm pretty sure he has it all over his face, from eyes to lips to wrinkles.

Temptation Bites and choravenclaw also deserve a big thank you for being far too excited about a prequel.

i was way too excited about a prequel, it seemed like the perfect thing and guess what?
you have lived up to all my expectations and much much more!
i absolutely LOVE this!
It's already in my favorites!

Yes, it has a sex scene, but it' not smutty AT ALL!
it's all love and destiny and feeling warm and fuzzy and great about it and i just loved it!
It's great and perfect and you did wonderful!
THank you so much for this, it has been so so long since i last found a fic that was absolutely about making love and not even a little bit of dirty words, taking control over the other and just being naughty and smut.
It's been 2 years since i saw one that was absolutely about love and you've made it really really made it.
I'm a D/G enthusiastic and this is only the third fic that fits nto this cathegory so congratulations, it was wonderful and in love and just beautiful!
Thank you so so much for this!
[wish i had a name for you so that i could thank you properlly because you really deserve it for this one...what's your name?]


Author's Response: Thank you so much. You were really the reason this was written, so I am super happy that you enjoyed it. You went and picked out all my favourite lines in your review, and you made my day while I read it. You are officially my favourite reviewer. Big Kisses
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2010 12:49 am
I don't have much experience writing higher ratings, but from what I have read this was really good! I love that Ginny finally has the moment where she lets herself fall in love with him. :D The entire end was part was sweet and funny all in one. I had read Scars before (although I probably forgot to review...) and this was a great pair with that story. Good job on both stories!

Author's Response: Thank You. I wanted it to be romantic rather than smutty, if y'know what I mean. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 11, 2010 11:41 pm
This is so beautiful. It's the kind of sex I would associate with making love and not just "sex". Draco is really such a sweetie in this one. Good job!


Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's exactly what I was trying for. I'm glad it came across:)
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