Reviews For Last Chance
Name: Incognito reviewed Here Goes Nothing on Jan 25, 2010 01:21 pm
If it had ended bad, just out of curiosity and from one writer to another, how do you think it would have gone?

Well, Ginny could have just said no and never given him a second chance. She would have been justified, and I would have still been content with the piece. Of course, I would have probably ended it (if I wrote a bad ending for the two) with either Draco dwelling on the consequences of his actions some years down the road or perhaps wrote something to the effect of how star-crossed lovers are never meant to be, or how it wasn't their time, perhaps in their next life. However, I like your ending because I, too, am a romantic at heart. ^^

Author's Response: I can totally see that. And Harry/Ginny fans, or just anyone against D/G, would've been good with that. And hey, if it had been written well, mayeb it wouldn't have been so bad. But, like you said, romantic at heart and bad endings just won't do for me. LLOL! ;D
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed Here Goes Nothing on Jan 12, 2010 03:16 pm
This is sooooo good! Can't believe your not going to tell us what happens next!! grr lol
anyway trhanks for the great fic :):)
I read it in a very boring class today and it made my day!

Author's Response: Sorry! I've had requests for a sequel, and while admit it is a good idea, this wasn't intended to be anything more and I won't write more unless inspiration strikes. I'm so happy you liked it and so much more so that it made your day! I love hearing that! I think you may have just made my day! LLOL! :D
Name: Incognito reviewed Here Goes Nothing on Jan 12, 2010 01:36 pm
My critical side tells me that this could have use a little SPaG check, but my sentimental side appreciates the emotion in this. It is raw and real and how a conversation based on trust and 'chances' would turn out. I would have been satisfied with a good or bad ending. I empathise with both Draco and Ginny.

Author's Response: Your critical side is probably correct. LLOL! I have some things I need to work on, I know. If it had ended bad, just out of curiosity and from one writer to another, how do you think it would have gone? I've never written a story in which it didn't work for them and it's hard for me to imagine.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Here Goes Nothing on Jan 12, 2010 11:52 am
i like this. the begging, groveling draco is surprisingly sexy. i liked that she bared her heart but didnt get violent or weepy. i like that he bared his and it was sincere without being overly mushy. great job, great story

Author's Response: Sexy? Definitely. I'm glad you agree. I try when I write to make them my own without changing their character too much but it's really hard! I'm glad to hear you think it was good!
Name: bluelover reviewed Here Goes Nothing on Jan 12, 2010 02:15 am
I love it!!! That was sweet. At one point, I was a bit worried that Ginny won't give Draco another chance...but true love prevails *sighs dreamily*

Thanks for the story and I look forward to read more of your work =)

Author's Response: Thx! Yeah, I am a total romantic and could never write something in which they don't get and/or stay together. It just doesn't seem right or even possible! I have more stuff planned and look forward to hearing from you again! :D
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Here Goes Nothing on Jan 11, 2010 11:59 pm
aww, this was so cute! My favorite line was, "e loved the smell of her hair and after she left he used to sleep with her pillow tucked against his face so when he closed his eyes he could almost fool himself into thinking she was still with him. It was pathetic, he knew, and yet he couldn’t stop, even though her scent had long since faded from the material. It was driving him crazy." It's adorable imagining Draco like that. Good job!


Author's Response: Thx! I luv making him that way, but it's soo hard to do without completely ruining his character!
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