Name: christine kelley
on Feb 10, 2010 07:58 am
Hey I finally got around to reading this :D
I liked it a lot, especially how it was detailed but not overly descriptive. And I can't wait to see where you're going with all this. The only thing I would change is the battle between Draco and Voldemort to last longer. Overall I like it very much and you're doing such a good job. :-)
Name: Jack Tamara
on Jan 15, 2010 08:12 pm
I'm so glad that Draco was the one to kill voldemort, and not harry. I mean, come on, harry is so predictable. I'm glad draco did it though. My favorite line was , "Stupefy? Was I stupefied when I cast that? I’ll be killed for sure!" Hahahah, that just made me laugh so much. Good job on this and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I mainly did that just to kill Harry off so there wouldn't be an issue with him and Ginny being an item. >.> I'll update as soon as my beta gets back to me!
on Jan 15, 2010 10:21 am
Stop apologizing for this being your first fanfic. It's great so far and you will be, too! Can't wait for the next chapter and I like your Draco already.....
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been doing technical writing for years so I'm just worried about how my creative writing is, I'm really glad you liked it!
You'll be seeing plenty of Draco in the next few chapters, I'm glad you like him. I've been a bit worried that he might be a bit too OOC and not really believable. :D