Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Prologue on Jan 21, 2010 08:08 pm
ooh, I really like it! You've managed to hook me with only the prologue! I just have a few questions: is the girl in here talking about Narcissa or Ginny? I really want to believe that it's Ginny...:) and also, if it was Ginny (or Narcissa), is she already married? Because I originally thought that this was about her wedding day, but then in the last line, the guy calls her Mrs. Malfoy, which would indicate she was already married.
Besides that, I really enjoyed this, and I hope you update soon!
XOXO, JT
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Prologue on Jan 21, 2010 07:37 pm
this is so exciting...nice way to begin. im hooked and its only been 615 words... :) plz update in a timely manner. patience for a good story isnt one of my many virtues and i just know this is gonna be a good one. any story with blaise as a boy tends to be good. cant wait *squee*