on Feb 07, 2010 08:30 pm
so sad ..
on Feb 02, 2010 07:51 pm
Beautiful piece of angst. It was woven perfectly from start to finish.
Lovely, lovely work.
on Jan 30, 2010 11:04 am
That's...wow. Moving without shattering me into dysfunction.
on Jan 30, 2010 01:25 am
wow! it was so good (as it always is i might add) but sad too -i hate it when draco dies! keep up the good work!
on Jan 29, 2010 09:45 pm
on Jan 29, 2010 08:59 pm
This was sad, why couldn't she save him.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. In my little world this just sort of had to end with him dying. I started writing it knowing he would die, knowing it would be sad. So...sorry. I hope you still liked.
Name: Temptation Bites
on Jan 29, 2010 05:53 pm
Wow JanuaryBaby, this story was quite different from your others but still as good.
Again, you have a remarkable gift for writing. It was great!
And as always, KEEP WRITING.
Author's Response: I felt sad when I wrote it so... I am glad you liked it. I will try to be more happy in the future:)
on Jan 29, 2010 12:58 pm
=/ You need to put character death in the warnings. Since it wasn't there I read this hoping for a happy ending, but ya... =/
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry. I will go correct this straight away. Thank you for telling me.
on Jan 29, 2010 08:48 am
I hate to love this. I really do. Could there be a sequal in the works? Maybe from Draco? I can see it now! He's battle Ron, words they exchange, the final blow. His thoughts and feels.. =]
Author's Response: Maybe...I will consider a sequel but if it does eventuate I can promise it won't be for awhile yet. I have some other stuff I am working on.
Name: like a falling star
on Jan 29, 2010 07:39 am
heartbreakingly sad and sweet!!
Author's Response: Thank you. That's the feelings I was going for so I am glad I got that emotional response from you.:)
on Jan 29, 2010 07:03 am