Reviews For First Times
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed First Times on Mar 10, 2010 06:00 pm
I like this. Blaise and Hermione are such schemers. I would have loved to see their reaction to each other after that realization. They both said "Oh Merlin". If that's not a sign that they are becoming one entity, I don't know what does. Lovely story. Definitely has promise for a novel-length fic based on it.
Name: laurelin reviewed First Times on Mar 03, 2010 12:10 am
I absolutely loved it, especially the back and forth with the Hermione and Blaise scenes.

"The company's doing well, Mother's taking my lack of children as a sign that I don't love her anymore, and Weasley's campaigning to have her picture added in the dictionary under 'ridiculous'."
Just brilliant!

Author's Response: Haha, could you tell I had a little too much fun with the dialogue sometimes? Only Draco would be able to pull off that sentence with a deadpan expression, you gotta love him. :)
Name: openskys reviewed First Times on Mar 02, 2010 05:59 pm
Please make this a series I want to know more abou their lives!!!!!

Either way great fic!

Author's Response: Sorry, no series, just snippets, but I'm glad you like it!
Name: Akt5us reviewed First Times on Mar 02, 2010 02:02 am
I really like this! I love the little snippets about how they change for each other! I hope you will post up the other parts of this story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! It's not really a complete story, it's just a weird head canon, so I'm not sure when/if I'll post other stuff, sorry.
Name: babigurlchels reviewed First Times on Mar 02, 2010 12:38 am
very cute! I especially liked the kiss segment.

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, the kiss part is what started it all. :)
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed First Times on Mar 01, 2010 05:48 pm
i love it! Great characterisation. Any chance of a few more drabbles? Really liked these

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't know about any more, but it's a possibility.
Name: CCC reviewed First Times on Mar 01, 2010 04:33 pm
I love how he ponders saying her first name and what it will mean.

Author's Response: Me too, the surname conundrum is one of my favorite things to think/write about DG. :)
Name: ginnywitch reviewed First Times on Mar 01, 2010 02:23 pm
I Love Blaise Zabini!!!!! Please write more of this arc!!!! It would make my life better....

Author's Response: Haha, yes Blaise is rather fun, isn't he? Don't know about more, this is really more of random drabbles than anything.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed First Times on Mar 01, 2010 12:18 pm
hahhaha. very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: slitherhither reviewed First Times on Mar 01, 2010 03:07 am
Really delightful! Thank you for sharing it. Great images (the burning bridge, in particular) and dialogue.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, whenever I write Malfoy he ends up thinking in overblown mental images whenever he's stressed. :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed First Times on Mar 01, 2010 01:26 am
I'd love to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks, I like your reaction, but there probably won't be more for some time at least. This was mainly written because I just can't seem to find the kind of arranged marriage fic I'd like to read out there.
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed First Times on Feb 28, 2010 09:57 pm
I cannot believe there aren't any reviews. This story is great. I loved the how it took Blaise and Hermione to help Draco and Ginny realize their feelings for each other. I can't help but wish this was not a one shot, but it stands on its own quite well.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! And of course it would take their friends to get them to realize how they feel, they're both just so stubborn. :)
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