Name: darkseeker116 reviewed Chapter 17 on May 11, 2010 04:49 pm
There was a mental gasp as I read the end.
As always, I'm eagerly anticipating more.

Author's Response: Mental gasps are good. :) More soon.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 17 on May 11, 2010 02:36 pm
Niiiice! Draco's being an idiot again. Stupid jerk. I love that Ginny "snarled and slapped" him. Go Ginny!

Author's Response: Draco can be an idiot can't he? But he's under a lot of stress at this point. We will find out more soon...
Name: harrypotterchick4ever reviewed Chapter 17 on May 11, 2010 02:25 pm
ooooo more please!!

Author's Response: More soon!
Name: Nickii reviewed Chapter 1 on May 11, 2010 08:45 am
I'm starting to feel more and more convinced about my theory :D To me it's obvious that Draco knows a lot of things Ginny doesn't, also regarding their relationship.. I really think she went back in time, polyjuiced into Marie, and eventually told him the truth.. And know he's making sure he'll get her in the future as well 'cause he luuuuuuuvs her :D

(close?)

Author's Response: A very interesting theory! Some parts of it are a whole lot closer than others and that's all I'm going to say. ;)
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed Chapter 16 on May 11, 2010 06:39 am
very nice so far

Author's Response: Thanks-- there's much more to come!
Name: erinem reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 05:17 pm
YES! I love it. Ginny needs to do some manipulating of her own...

Thanks for the chapter :). Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Oh, she will. There's so much more to come... ;)
Name: shezachica85 reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 11:06 am
spellbound. i cannot wait for more story!

Author's Response: There will be more soon!
Name: MK Richie reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 10:05 am
First, sitting around in wet clothes is the absolute WORST I don't know how he could sit in a couch for so long being wet. I'd die!

Second, I would like to present my complete disbelief in the "explanation" Draco gives Ginny. My analysis starts here: “Did you have to go very far?” she asked.

His smile twisted slightly. The dimples slid back even further. “Yes. I did. And I did get soaked, didn’t I?” He ran a hand through his blond hair, the shade a little darker now from rainwater. He filled her glass."

How far, exactly, has Draco been? The past? Hell? I'm thinking someplace like that, which would add to the depth and double meanings you've always got going on in your stories.

Next:
“They followed us,” whispered Ginny.
“Very good,” said Draco. “Full marks, Miss Weasley.”
“But how? I didn’t see them coming behind; they couldn’t have possibly tracked our Apparition traces.”
Draco looked away from her. The last bit of the smile disappeared. Ginny’s heart sank.
“Through the Imperius test link,” she said.
He nodded." He looks away, which makes me think he's lying and he just goes with the idea that Ginny presents him--the imperious link. I don't think Harry, Hermione, and the aurors were there at all--aren't they lost in the middle of Gringrotts? How could they possibly make it to Lyme Bay so quickly? He definitely had to deal with Lucius, and if he was out there the whole time leading Potter on a wild goose chase, why would he come back smelling of alcohol?

And lastly, I am so looking forward to the next chapter! Draco is such a calculated actor, it's unbelievable. And now I'm glad because Ginny is joining in on the game, which I'm sure will shake Draco quite a bit. Thanks so much for the update!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! :) Yep, sitting around in wet clothes is pretty awful, but in the interests of sheer deviousness, Draco will do it. ;) And very good analysis of disbelief in the explanation. To clear it up a little bit, Harry & co. really WERE there, BUT... there's a whole lot more to the story than that, as you've correctly guessed. Draco will be shaken and stirred in the next chapter, and I think Ginny's going to at least try to chomp him up in little bites... ;)
Name: harrypotterchick4ever reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 08:05 am
great chapter once again
i love this devious ginny:)
i hope everything is alright back home!!

Author's Response: Ginny is devious, isn't she? Everything is okay. :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 07:11 am
Ginny is such a joy to read. She's so neurotic and paranoid and somehow, super-randy. It's hilarious. I have no guesses or predictions at this time :(. Exams make thinking brain go ow...

Author's Response: I like this Ginny too! Thank you for the Ginny-love. Good luck on all the exams.
Name: wiccawitch reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 06:34 am
Argh! Such a tease! Malfoy that is, and I suppose you just a bit. I can't wait to see how Ginny gets the truth out of him.
Name: pitzi reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 03:17 am
Oh yay! Another chapter! Well, he obviously didn't tell her the whole truth (I led them to apparition point and fell??) but I suppose he also didn't tell a complete lie. Did he kill someone and threw them the corpse to keep them busy?
Also I noticed that we have Ginny in her dream or watever that was (the first time she was at the cottege) soaking wet and Draco telling her she should remove her closes because she's cold and here we have a reverse situation with Draco wet and Ginny suggesting he emoved his closes for same reason. Did you do it on purpose? And the searching look Draco keeps giving her in this and other chapters - it's really intriguing. What's he searching for? Is he waiting for her to figure something out on her own? Thank you thank you again!

Author's Response: Oo! I was hoping somebody would pick up on the wet-clothes parallels. :) And you're right; Draco didn't tell Ginny the complete truth, but no, he didn't completely lie to her either. He's giving her a searching look for a reason, but it's not exactly because he's waiting for her to figure something out. We will find out why in the next chapter!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 16 on May 10, 2010 02:17 am
Truth in the wine? Oh, I'm looking forward to the next scene. :)

Author's Response: Much more to come... ;)
Name: MK Richie reviewed Chapter 15 on May 07, 2010 06:53 pm
Glad to hear you (and the horses!) are okay! =]

Author's Response: I am, and they are. :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 15 on May 06, 2010 01:59 am
Awwww. Looking forward to the real chapter!

Author's Response: It's coming ASAP! I have internet again! Yay!
Name: openskys reviewed Chapter 15 on May 05, 2010 07:48 pm
I was so excited and disappointed, but at you and your kittys and house are safe!

this is me crossing my fingers for an update soon and for you to have your Internet back!
Name: maximumtrouble10 reviewed Chapter 15 on May 05, 2010 02:52 pm
Oh no! I'm glad you're okay, but I'm sorry that you'll have so much extra work because of the stupid water! I hope everything works out, and please update when you can! You know how much I adore your story/stories/rabid or tame plot bunnies with chocolate and candy:)
Name: wiccawitch reviewed Chapter 15 on May 05, 2010 07:10 am
Oh my goodness. I am glad you are ok. I live in Japan but I heard about the flooding. I have family that lives in TN. We perfectly understand that you will be held up on updates. Take your time.
Name: pitzi reviewed Chapter 15 on May 05, 2010 03:14 am
Oh, I'm sorry to hear of your predicament. I hope your life returns to normal really soon! Don't worry about us, we are devoted enough to wait patiently. And tell Draco to stop whining.
Name: Tatiana reviewed Chapter 15 on May 04, 2010 08:19 pm
I'm just glad you're okay. D/G can wait. Thanks for the explanation though.
Name: darkseeker116 reviewed Chapter 15 on May 04, 2010 05:55 pm
You live in Tennesse! Me, too! I'm glad you're okay (and the horses).
Name: drays baby reviewed Chapter 1 on May 04, 2010 03:18 pm
So very glad you are safe! I live on the plateau and we didn't get near the rain y'all did. I have family that lives in Nashville, and they ended up with several inches of water on their ground floor.

Anyway, can't wait to read the next update. Take care!

Author's Response: Thank you! A lot of people did get rained out, so I was lucky.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 15 on May 04, 2010 01:53 pm
LMAO! I'm glad you're dry and that the cats are dry. My cats wouldn't fare very well so I'm glad yours are safe. It appears you are being held hostage (of sorts) by your characters- not that I'd complain about anything Draco related. Not that I don't adore the petite redhead, but if I was trapped in a cabin with her and Draco, I'd chuck her through a window :D. Stay Dry!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I think my basement got a little wet...but it was good to be on top of a hill!
Name: Tatiana reviewed Chapter 14 on May 03, 2010 04:40 pm
Anise. Marie better be Ginny or I'll have to poke her little digital eyes out. The only one Draco's allowed to be that possessive over is Ginny herself. Grr.
Orrrrr, (this theory is striking me now), maybe Lucius drugged Draco with some uber form of Amortentia to make him forget Ginny, and fixate instead on Marie.
Wait! I just had a horrible theory flash! Is that really Draco entering the cabin? He's making Ginny uneasy. Maybe he's Lucius in disguise, and his Malfoy blood is allowing him to enter the cottage. However, I would like to think that Draco's wards are tougher than that.
Poor hormonal sixteen-year-old Draco. Although it's worrisome that he never got to his intended companion--or did he?
Anywho, I can't wait for the real sack-sessions with real Draco and real Ginny. TeeHee.

Author's Response: Don't worry!!! That's NOT Lucius. It really is Draco, but he's in a very, very bad mood right now. We will find out MUCH more about 16-year-old-Draco and Marie, all in good time, my pretties, all in good time (cackles).
Name: dumbledorefan_07 reviewed Chapter 14 on May 03, 2010 10:22 am
I really like where this story is going! Thanks for updating so quickly!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the story is going somewhere specific, because the evil plot bunny has been TAMED at last. :)
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