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Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed The End Of Days on Feb 17, 2013 05:47 pm
Ok wow this was waaaaay too twisted for me. For half of it I was expecting it to be Blaise the whole time, oh man this was like watching dexter, but without the "they deserved it" factor.

STT

Author's Response: I love Dexter, so I'm assuming this is a good review and not bad, haha.
Name: infiltrate the enemy fat kid reviewed The End Of Days on May 14, 2011 02:30 am
Wow that was simply chilling! I think I expected the first couple of chapters not to be a casual and flirty as they were but really what they did was really pull me in.

The first kill I was certain the killer was Draco (especially in light of Ginny's initial rejection) but then you sort of lulled me into a false sense of security because it seemed like he really cared about her (I realise now maybe he was just savouring her?). Then I thought it was Blaise but thought that seemed too... I don't know... cliché? I think I also thought for a moment it was Harry but because you hadn't mentioned him so he got ruled out for being too random. I might have even thought for a split moment that it may even have been Ron but that suspicion died as swiftly as it was born.

Overall, I really enjoyed this! Well, as much as one can enjoy Draco killing Ginny fics. I think after finishing the whole story I almost wished it you had unravelled the ending slower or that Ginny had taken heed of her initial suspicion or the chills when Draco revealed his empathy with the killer but really I find myself unable to fault these quirks because I don't think it could have worked out better than how you wrote it.

So... I think this review is long enough now. Ha ha. Thanks for this story! :)
Name: steppin_razur reviewed The End Of Days on Jul 13, 2010 06:09 pm
Wicked ending. I was not expecting that when I starting reading.
Name: roxors reviewed The End Of Days on Jul 11, 2010 10:08 am
what??? Draco malfoy is the killer! I didn't want it to be true!
Name: Jessica22 reviewed The End Of Days on Jul 04, 2010 11:01 pm
Wow that was so intense. The ending surprised me so much. I was sure it was Blaise! Good work though.

Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure how the ending would go, and it seemed lots of people didn't understand it.
Name: thistattooedbody reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 09:06 pm
Wow, that was... creepy. But I guessed it was Draco. But she didn't reject him, so I don't quite understand that bit. Not too bad, though, I suppose.

Author's Response: When she told him in that one chapter she didn't want to be with him, his brain twisted and he went slightly mad, so to speak.
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 05:48 pm
LOVE IT! I love that he is kinda crazy Draco. You don't see it often. I guessed that he was the killer in chapter 1, but I changed my mind a million times and never suspected him in the end. He is very split personality in a way. Really we only see glimpses of his "evil" self, well except for the end. I'm glad I couldn't predict the ending and that Draco wasn't as nice as we like to imagine. Amazing story! :D

Author's Response: Thanks very much :)
Name: silvertatooine reviewed Take Your Best Shot on Jun 14, 2010 03:12 pm
i thought it was him after the first killing, but then it just didn't seem right. good job!

Author's Response: I tried to be secretive till the end. Thank you for the review :)
Name: Indiainksky reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 02:28 pm
Wow. That's seriously chilling, and very good.

Author's Response: :D Thank you.
Name: MargretKelley reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 11:19 am

Woah, a tiny voice in my head has been saying all along "Draco's the killer!" but a much larger voice has been telling it to shut up because it couldn't possibly be true.  Another part of me was suspecting Harry since he hadn't really been mentioned so I thought that there might've been some really messy breakup that had gone on and he was killing everyone that reminded him of Ginny.

 

The end confuses me: did Ginny somehow manage to survive and is sneaking around to see Draco?  Or, has he just really gone round the bend and he just sees a hallucination of her?  I'd say that she might be a ghost, but the indications that her hair is red, she's dripping blood that's staining Draco's clothes, and the fact that she can touch him leads me to believe that that is not the case.

 

All in all, it's been a great read!  Congratulations on a job well done! :D



Author's Response: He's seeing her the way he left her, so yeah, he's hallucinating. You're probably the only one who really got it, haha. I was going to make him have a split personality type of deal but then I thought this was better. Thank you for the review :)
Name: cindy reviewed Take Your Best Shot on Jun 14, 2010 11:11 am
oh..dats bad..but if u ever change ur mind about writing more to it,i'll absolutely be reading it!good work and a definitely good story.
Name: cindy reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 10:52 am
came across this story..completely intrigued me and this chapter caught my brain off guard..cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: It's complete by chapter 12.
Name: scentasia reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 07:58 am
DRACO IS THE KILLER!!!!Cant believe I missed that!What just happened?the ending confused me.OMG!All the suspense is killing me here!
You made Draco evil..I feel sad now. :(

Author's Response: This is the end of the story, I'm sorry.
Name: bluelover reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 14, 2010 06:53 am
Okay...I don't get it!!! I need to read the next chapter! Update soon please...thank you!

You're confusing the heck out of me but I love it!

Author's Response: There is no next chapter, I'm afraid. Draco killed all of those woman, including Ginny.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 13, 2010 11:11 pm
Oh my goodness! It was DRACO all along? I was totally expecting Blaise! oh my goodness, that is twisted. This is possibly one of the most twisted things I've read in the DG fandom. And that's not a bad thing! I really like mysteries with a surprise twist ending, but...wow. this is really just...*whew!* Only one part that I didn't get, though. At the very end, with the redhead girl...is that Ginny? Or just another redhead? Because it seems like it would be Ginny...And what was the blood dripping down her temple and the hollow eyes?

Other than that, good job on the twist! I'm going to go back and reread the DG parts just to see how twisted this is.

XOXO, JT

P.S. Is this the last chapter? Because it says WIP, but it seems like this would be the end...

Author's Response: It is the last chapter. I just didn't want to change it to Complete until this was up. Yes, it was Ginny, well he was seeing her how he left her anyway.
Name: Leelaz223 reviewed Take Your Best Shot on Jun 13, 2010 11:05 pm
What just happened!? I felt like the story took a complete 180. And it was different being from the first person perspective, so I hope the next chapter clarifies these recent developments...

Author's Response: I changed the other parts to first person, too. It made it easier with what I wanted to do for this chapter.
Name: firefireice22 reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 13, 2010 10:40 pm
i am completely and totally bamboozled! its DRACO? blond hair was tell-tale sign...its creeepy! arghh how many more chapters?!

Author's Response: This is it. I wanted people to see things through his eyes, for him to explain why.
Name: Akt5us reviewed The End Of Days on Jun 13, 2010 09:20 pm
This is very interesting. I'm guessing that it's Blaise? Is this the end? I can't wait to read more if it isn't!

Author's Response: It's the end. It's Draco. I made that kind of obvious in this chapter, haha. I had to.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed The New Revelation on Jun 07, 2010 02:51 pm
Well duh! Of course she loves Draco. We already know she loves her brother, that's sort of a familial given. I love the step they have taken in their relationship, moving in together is a big decision. Awesomeness. Pansy is such a force, nothing is safe if its in her way. LOL.

Author's Response: Moving in together is the only way to ensure Ginny's safety.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed The New Revelation on Jun 06, 2010 11:38 pm
Maybe she loved who? I know you mean Draco, but since you had Ron and Draco in the sentence before, it reads a little confusing.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed The New Revelation on Jun 06, 2010 10:45 pm
yes! that last sentence makes me happy! But...I have a question. I thought Ron was married to Hermione, who you mentioned to be pregnant in the last chapter? So, is he cheating on Hermione with Pansy? Just wondering...And that new development about the killer in Ginny's building is creeping me out...

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Ohh. Oops. I guess I forgot about that. Um, I suppose he is then.
Name: Akt5us reviewed The New Revelation on Jun 06, 2010 10:27 pm
I really like this and I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed How Far We're Come on Jun 06, 2010 01:11 pm
:) Brilliant. The mystery continues. But at least Ron is here now :).

Author's Response: He'll probably just be in that one chapter. I'm debating.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed How Far We're Come on Jun 06, 2010 11:14 am
Draco's last line is so creepy...could Ginny really be the one that the killer wants? And what is this thing that's flashing over his face? The mystery thickens...Good job!

XOXO, JT
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