Name: Incognito reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 30, 2010 11:14 am
Aww, this was adorable.
I really like how you kept the simple 4-line rhyming scheme (ABCB). To me, it made the poem more lyrical, like a song.
Well done.
Name: scentasia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 04, 2010 02:50 am
Aww, that was really cute. I could so picture that. Nice work!
Name: dancingonstars reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 03, 2010 11:09 pm
i usually don't read the poems/prose and stuff. but i really like this. it was innocent and lovely. good job!
Name: pitzi reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 03, 2010 10:13 pm
This was very good - catching a moment, a reader can actually imagine the scene.
Name: Ber239 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 03, 2010 02:29 pm
Aww, this is so cute! I love it :D
Name: Khaos reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 03, 2010 10:43 am
Aww I like this... It's sweet.