Name: hatebelow reviewed
5 - 8 on Apr 09, 2011 05:10 pm
“Where does it hurt?” -The only dialogue in "pain" and it was perfect.
Author's Response: There were actually two more lines of dialogue, but this one definitely had the most impact. I thank you. n_n
Name: WolfStar reviewed
5 - 8 on Jul 17, 2010 05:32 pm
I think my favorite is Pain, followed by Test.
Author's Response: I think Anger might be my favorite right now. It's in the next batch. :)
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
5 - 8 on Jul 16, 2010 10:54 pm
I like the shortness of each of the "chapters" they are windows in a bigger picture but I like it a lot.
Author's Response: The 400-word limit is, well, limiting, but that's part of the challenge. It's a bit difficult because I don't have enough words to really explain what I mean sometimes, but I think it makes the story interesting because each drabble really is just a snapshot, a moment, of the story. A lot of the story is read between the drabbles. I'm glad you're enjoying it and thank you for the review. :)