Name: WolfStar reviewed 13 - 16 on Jul 28, 2010 02:13 am

I really liked the tone of Discrepant. It's like Draco was trying to convince himself of something.

Despite his hate for all three of them, he didn't want to be their executioner.
and
He was not a murderer.
Were my favorite lines. The second is especially powerful, I think.

Nice job on bringing the Mirror of Erised in. I like that Luna was completely sensible in those moments. I think what my favorite thing most of all is, though, that all these drabbles tie together into one larger story. Sorta like snapshots.

Author's Response: Haha. I've been getting lots of different interpretations - or just plain confusion - for Mirror. I also think that Luna is a pretty sensible person with her straightforwardness. She just believes silly things because the only authority figure in life makes his living off of them. Which is a rather neat contradiction. Of course, that's just my interpretation of her character. I'm glad you are enjoying the drabbles though. I was a little afraid that the snapshot format of the story wouldn't give enough to it, but then again, it does highlight just the important points, without all the transition in the middle.