Reviews For Christmas in Hell
Name: wiccawitch reviewed A Proposition on Jul 30, 2010 04:53 am
I read this when only this first chapter was posted and then my computer died on me before I could comment or track it! I'm so glad I found it again. I absolutely love the beginning and I can't wait to see what you come up with.

Author's Response: I cannot believe I missed responding to this! *headdesk* I am so glad you like it so much! I know you commented the second chapter, but I feel like a bad author if I don't respond to every review.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 30, 2010 01:08 am
I tend to dislike when characters I don't know are introduced, but I think I like Kora.

Author's Response: Kora has an entire back story of her own. She has real depth to her. And she did an unspeakable thing. *hint hint* so she is by no means a perfect character. I'm glad you like her.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed A Proposition on Jul 27, 2010 01:39 pm
I'm liking the "true story" to the Deathly Hallows ending, and interested to see how this goes. update!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I will be updating either today or tomorrow, actually. Thanks for the input! The next chapter will be a bit slow, but things will speed up fast.
Name: Januarybaby reviewed A Proposition on Jul 25, 2010 12:23 am
I like it - please keep updating I really want to know what happens. I hope it has a happy ending :)

Author's Response: It should be updated sometime this week. Glad to see you like it! I had to type out this response like twenty times. Stupid internet. lol.
Name: openskys reviewed A Proposition on Jul 23, 2010 11:27 am
I am intrigued! I like the way you opened it and I hope we get to see through Ginnys eyes eventually! I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: From now on, it will switch back and forth. Ginny isn't as catatonic as she seems. ;)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed A Proposition on Jul 21, 2010 04:30 am
Ah, so this is what you were talking about in the common room the other day. I'm intrigued by your keeping Rowling in the picture, though I don't like the Death Eaters winning. Still, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you! "Good" doesn't always triumph though. Glad to see you want to read more.
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed A Proposition on Jul 20, 2010 02:29 pm
I really like this so far. I love how it is from The Death eater's point of veiw and they arn't as bad as we always thought. Not good, but not horrible (unless you are against them). Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Ahhh, I missed responding to this review! I wanted to emphasize that during a war, everyone thinks they are on the right side. I hope you have continued to enjoy it!
Name: silver rose reviewed A Proposition on Jul 19, 2010 11:58 pm
ooohhhh.. evil draco...hot!

seriously though good job. looking forward to the next chapter..

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: The_Real_Weaslette reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 10:54 pm
Want more, please! :D It absolutely SYCKED me into the story, and the beggining bit with the books was so fantastic. I love it when people work into the story how the books were written based on fact and the Wizarding world is real and... its a lovely story and I can't WAIT for more!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you much! It shouldn't be too much longer until the second chapter is up.
Name: Boogum reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 10:19 pm
Good premise. I like the darkness of this, and I think you've set Draco up as a good, solid character.

I have to admit, the first few paragraphs really threw me off. I'm not a fan of people bringing the canon books (or JKR) into their fanfiction. That being said, your writing was enough to encourage me to keep reading.

The only real bone I have to pick with this is that some things could be a bit more subtly done. Your bit about Stockholm Syndrome, for example, seemed a bit too obvious, if that makes sense. It just didn't sound like something someone would say.

Criticisms aside, I like what you've set up here, and I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review and your critique. Actually, the Stockholm Syndrome will have NOTHING to do with this story. It was said in desperation to convince Draco to "purchase" Ginevra. I'm glad you kept reading, as I know a LOT of people have a problem with bringing canon into fanon. Thank you once again.
Name: anah492 reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 06:56 pm
I really like the story so far! I'm excited to see what is going to happen next!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is close to 4,000 words, and low on action, but in chapter three....well, just wait. ;) Chp 2 is essential to the plot, and intresting.
Name: Mungihead reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 05:32 pm
Hahaha :) I know this chapter was supposed to be dark-ish, but when I though of Draco reading the Deathly Hallows and I almost fell over laughing :D Great start, however! I am eager for more :)

Author's Response: Oh, in my head, it was funny as well. Haha. I'm glad you like it so far! There's so much more to come.
Name: shezachica85 reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 04:19 pm
This is very interesting start.. i am curious to see where it goes but very very interesting plot line

Author's Response: Thank you so much. There is also much more in the plot line that we will discover in the first three chapters.
Name: gracie reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 03:13 pm
please up date!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Haha, I will soon enough. I'm not going to do daily updates like our dear Anise though!
Name: snowgoose1070 reviewed A Proposition on Jul 18, 2010 12:32 am
I have to admit, the idea of a character reading the books to begin with initially made me frown, but the rest of the story blew me away!! I love evil Draco, and I'm SOSOSO excited to see where this goes!! Excellent work!

Author's Response: I'm glad I got your approval! The idea of the books was hard to construct, but I think I did it in a way that emphasizes not only the differences but Draco's character. Thanks for your review!
Name: Anise reviewed A Proposition on Jul 17, 2010 08:32 pm
Quite, quite intriguing. Clearly, this will be a dark Draco, but on the whole I think he'll walk the right side of the fine line they have to walk in order to still be readable and believable (because the darker ones definitely can go too far overboard.) The premise is very snicker-worthy. (Is that a word? Well, it is now.) The fascinating part will be to see where it all goes from here, especially in terms of the interaction between Draco and Ginny given the type of relationship set up between them from the beginning. Looking forward to seeing more!

Author's Response: First off, I'm amazed that my favorite fanfic writer actually reviwed my story. Give me a sec, having a huge fangirl moment....okay. In the second chapter, we will see the more human side of him. It's all intricately planned out. I'm so glad you like it! I need to stop writing before I have another fangirl moment. lol.
Name: bluelover reviewed A Proposition on Jul 17, 2010 06:18 pm
I really like your plot! From this first chapter alone, I am already hooked.

Thanks for the story and I look forward to reading the next chapters soon (^_^)

Author's Response: You're review made me smile. It should be up in a week or two! Can't wait to see what you think of the upcoming chapter.
Name: bootsy_mine reviewed A Proposition on Jul 17, 2010 06:15 pm
I find your beginning very intriguing. I'm enjoying the premise and the idea of an alternate ending. I look forward to seeing more of this story.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Akt5us reviewed A Proposition on Jul 17, 2010 06:09 pm
I really like how you explained J.K. Rowling and the series end. This is a good way to go around it! I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! Chapter two is in the process of being beta-ed, and should be up sometime in the next week. Glad to see you're enjoying the story so much!
Name: Caramel reviewed A Proposition on Jul 17, 2010 04:54 pm
You made it! *winks* This premise is lovely (I already reviewed in FFnet), and I am really curious to see what you do with the following chapters. I am curious about your review reply too, I suppose Ginny won't be doing too much talking.

I also like how you use the books (as a fraud) to introduce this Alternative Universe. Well done ;).

Looking forward to read more.

Author's Response: While Ginny won't TALK much, she will be doing a lot of thinking in the next chapter. You will see it soon enough. I might even give you a sneak preview at the DG forum. ;)
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