Name: DGgirl reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 16, 2010 12:28 pm
Nice. A little tip though - you write very clinical way - try to be more organic and a little less concerned with describing everything in absolute detail. Just let it flow. Looking forward to an update!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll work on it, thanks for the advice :)
Name: Mungihead reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 15, 2010 07:25 pm
Did I tell you how adorable this was? I had to read this chapter again because I loved it so much :)

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxo,
M :)

Author's Response: Ahhh thank you! You spoil me lol. Next update will be out soon, I promise. College just started, so I've been ridiculously busy
Name: paola reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 15, 2010 12:57 am
This is really cute!!! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Will do :)
Name: bluelover reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 14, 2010 11:22 pm
I absolutely adore this story! I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the story and update soon please (^_^)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it :) And there will be an update soon
Name: Delilah_Malfoy reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 14, 2010 02:01 am
oh its so freaking adorbale, I love it!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you :D
Name: openskys reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 13, 2010 08:38 pm
This chapter was so cute :D I bet Draco says that he let her beat him eventually lol. Are we going to see the story from Dracos side? I'd love to know what's going on in that little head of his!

I like that your not rushing their relationship I always think that she should be friends first (but obviously not the really nice kind lol) so I can't wait to see more :D

Author's Response: That's a very good point. I promise eventually we'll get to see what Draco's thinking. And yes, I think it should happen gradually. Thanks for commenting!
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 12, 2010 04:59 pm
I liked it!! Happy Chapter! and I love Narcissa's interactions with Ginny...Thank you!

Author's Response: Narcissa is awesome, hehe. You're very welcome! And thank you for commenting :]
Name: Len reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 12, 2010 04:53 pm
YAY!!! they're are getting close! I love that Draco is making the effort to make her happy but I guess that he just couldn't stand to see her sad...

Awesome! Update as soon as possible, please!

Author's Response: They are getting close. It makes me happy too hehe. Thanks, and I'll be updating soon :D
Name: Mungihead reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 12, 2010 01:16 pm
That was so adorable, I think I teared up a little bit. FANTABULOUS chapter!! I love how you showed both Draco and Ginny's characteristic wit in a game of chess- it suits them and brought out some of the emotions and qualities: confidence, determination, compeitiveness, and the thirst to prove oneself, that really make up Ginny and Draco.

So, yeah, like I said, I loved this chapter!! Keep on with the fantastic work!!!

xoxoxoxoxoxo,
M :)

Author's Response: Thank youu! Your comments make me very happy :D I'm glad that you're getting so much out of the writing.
Name: forbiddenapple reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 12, 2010 06:53 am
i can't wait for your next chapter. i absolutely adore your writing.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Next update will be out soon :]
Name: Shwadi reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 12, 2010 04:03 am
:):):)

Author's Response: :D
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 12, 2010 01:27 am
That makes me happy. I love that he used his mom as an excuse. Fun. Draco is definitely improving. I love that their relationship is progressing naturally and realistically. Next update soon please.

Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad that their relationship is realistic. That's what I was hoping for. And I'm very glad I made you happy :)
Name: Akt5us reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 11, 2010 11:47 pm
Awww that's so sweet of Draco. I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it :D
Name: firefireice22 reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 11, 2010 10:57 pm
aw draco does have heart! i love the chess scene! please please please update soon!

Author's Response: Yes he does :D I'm glad you liked the chess scene, and the next update will be out soon :)
Name: Tamashii reviewed A Real Smile on Sep 11, 2010 07:44 pm
Draco can be so sweet of course that it is deep deep down.

Author's Response: Lol yep. But he can't completely hide it :]
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