Reviews For Frayed Silk
Name: dykeadellic reviewed Toxic on Aug 10, 2010 09:16 pm
That is exactly how heartbreak feels. The why it twists in your stomach, and you wish it were either more painful or not there. The burning in your throat. The breaths hurting your chest. Oh damn, you got it down. I'm usually not too big on poetry or prose, but I sure loved this.

I also loved the repitition of the line "You might have thought she was praying." Beautiful. Great job!
Name: Imaiya reviewed Toxic on Aug 10, 2010 10:38 am
Imperfect, devastating smile.

That was a great line, it really stuck with me. You've done a great job here! Sometimes it was confusing...but in a good way, because I don't think this piece is meant to be crystal clear...alot of it is left to be interpreted by the reader. I really do hope you write more :) Great job!
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