Name: maximumtrouble10 reviewed Chapter 4 on Sep 03, 2010 06:27 am

Yay for more chapter summaries! My conclusions--more characters are introduced, Loki begins (or rather, begins to NOTICEABLY) meddle with Draco and Ginny, Astoria (gasp!) marries Draco, Ginny begins to mature and develop as an individual, Blaise and Luna are so cute together, evolution and Lucius are twisted, and Zenobia is awesome :)

Other thoughts--I think that Ginny's decision in chapter 40 is really significant because it also means that she is less susceptible to illusions of certain people (*Loki and Draco*). Also, it means that she is not going to justify her actions by pretending to live in a fantasy "perfect" relationship with Draco and thus accepts that she needs to take action, establish independence, and accept consequences.

I wonder who packed the crates?? Ginny herself in the past before she was obliviated? Loki? Draco? And I think for some reason that Loki has some Immortal power that's a permanent/much stronger version of Obliviate to help him with his...plans :)

Anyway, thanks for the chapters! Please update again soon!

Author's Response: I think that you're right about Chapter 40. The thing about the past several chapters is that Ginny has been trying to break out of the cycle of these uncontrollable feelings for Draco, and she hasn't really been able to do it. This is when she finally gets somewhere.