Name: Gwendolyn James reviewed
He Attacks... on Oct 23, 2004 06:19 pm
That was absolutely wonderful! I think Ginny and Draco were very much IC - bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very happy to hear that and I'm glad you think so. ^_^
Name: Sub reviewed
She Said... on Oct 22, 2004 03:02 am
(Me again, just wanted to add that you can contact me via the Archive, I am a member)
I know that you updated the story some time ago, but I hope you'll get my reviews. I really loved your story and I am glad, I read it.
All the best, Sub
Author's Response: Wow. I'm so overwhelmed. I opened my email to see 7 new reviews on this story and my eyes went like this - O.O and my brain (which had just woken up by the way) went eh??
All the same...thank you so much for all the awesome reviews. You made MY day. ^_^ I had a lot of fun writing this story, so it really adds to it when other people have fun reading it. ::hehe:: Sorry you didn't like the Beatles part - believe it or not, that was where the whole idea for the story came from, so if it wasn't for me listening to the song, this story wouldn't exisit. O_o; I agree that more dialogue would have been nice, but I actually had a difficult time coming up with a lot of what I did have. Maybe sometime in the future I'll edit it up a bit - you never know when you'll get a brainstorm.
I like it when Draco likes Ginny first too. I'm also a big D/G fan...in fact they're currently the only HP ship I'll read these days. You had so many nice things to say that really meant a lot to me - it seems as if you got into my head and saw what I was trying to accomplish in my writing. Thanks again for being so wonderful. ^_^
Name: Sub reviewed
He Attacks... on Oct 22, 2004 02:52 am
Whheeeee! :D Your story made my day.
I loved it to pieces, thanks for sharing!!!
+ I liked that you let your characters pretty much IC.
+ Thanks for using the information of Book5, I just love these stories. Very true to the books.
+ The way we got an inside into both of them was great.
+ All in all very well written
- Your dialogues could have been longer. It doesn't hurt to let them have more converstation.
- The Beatles: nice, but slightly too muggle for Draco.
So. There you are. Loved it.
All the best, Sub
Name: Sub reviewed
She Avoided... on Oct 22, 2004 02:43 am
Again, another great chappie! :D
I love how cunning Ginny is, the way you write her makes her very very sensible.
This story is so great, but now I have to read on! :D
Name: Sub reviewed
He Avoided… on Oct 22, 2004 02:36 am
Wheeee! This girl kicks ass. I like the way you write D/G. I am a huge D/G shipper, and your story is a great one so far.
I liked sulking!Draco in the bad tub.
You really write hilariously!
Off for the next one, Sub
Name: Sub reviewed
She Falls... on Oct 22, 2004 02:29 am
*giggles* That was a fun chapter.
Only thing is, that I don't like when stories have many many muggle things in it or songs. But that is just me.
You actually wrote it quite well and I don't have the feeling now, that everything can be explained in muggle songs. Not yet.
ok, I'm off for the next chapter.
Sub
Name: Sub reviewed
He Said... on Oct 22, 2004 02:16 am
Great! I loved how you introduced Draco, and him being obsessed. It's not too OOC, don't worry!
I for one like stories where Draco likes her first.
*sighs* This is so promising!
I'm off to read more,
Sub
Name: Sub reviewed
She Said... on Oct 22, 2004 02:10 am
Loved it.
Your writing style is great, it gives the whole thing the write flow.
Can't wait for more!
Name: anonymous reviewed
He Attacks... on Oct 18, 2004 12:28 pm
“Geez Malfoy! What are you trying to do? Give me a heart attack?” she hissed at me." "Don't Hate" are completely American slang. The story is so irritating because you missed the British essence of the characters. Don't write any more HP fanfiction. Please.
Author's Response: Wow look! A flamer! My first one in the HP fandom. I'm so excited. Too bad you didn't even have the guts to put a name and left yourself anonymous! I feel bad for you; you read the whole story and you didn't even like it! You must have too much time on your hands. You know what they say about people with too much time, right? Anyhow - if I don't like the first part of a story, I just MOVE ON. My advise would be to practice that yourself in the future, but ya know...there's no helping the really clueless people.
Totally missed the British essence of the characters you say? American slang, well...I suppose that suits me since I'm an American and that's the slang I'm used to. ^_^ Heck, I can live with that. I still gave it my best shot, and fanfiction is just for fun for me anyways. It's not like my professional future includes becoming an author of British characters. ^_^
As for writing more HP fanfiction, I'm still not really planning on it. I might change my mind, but right now I'm too busy to take on more projects.
Next time - at least be brave enough to give your name and email address - you get a lot more respect that way when you leave flames. Although, when you flame you don't get much respect anyways because it shows a low maturity level. I mean honestly, mature people just kindly point out what needs to be worked on - and they leave their name and contact information. They don't insult the author, just stick to the story - but I guess you haven't figured that out yet.
Name: Christine reviewed
He Attacks... on Oct 10, 2004 08:48 am
Okay so I read this all in one sitting. It was really good. Keep up your writing, even if you don't do any more HP stories.
christine
Author's Response: Thank you Christine ^_^
Name: Silver Dreams reviewed
He Attacks... on Oct 07, 2004 03:16 pm
Ab-so-friggin-lutely cute! I really enjoyed reading that. I had never listened to 8 days a week because I'm not exactly a Beatles fan, though my best friend is. So, after I read this story I pulled out my Beatles records (I actually have about 5 or 6 of them) and listened to the song. And I loved it!!!! And now, thanks to you, I am hooked on the Beatles right along with my best buddy. And as for the story, it was really great, and I would love to read more D/G FF from you...as I'm sure many others would too. :) Think about it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad the story turned you onto the Beatles. ^_^ That's so awesome. I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed the story too, it was fun writing it all out. I'll continue to think about writing more, but can't really say if I will or not. Right now, I'm still working on finishing up my Rurouni Kenshin story I've been writing for the past 3 years. O_o; Thanks again and Take Care. ^_^
Name: giny reviewed
He Attacks... on Sep 16, 2004 03:11 am
lovely story! Good job
Author's Response: thank you! ^_^
Name: Sam reviewed
He Attacks... on Sep 15, 2004 04:23 pm
I loved that story! it was so cute and sweet at the end! i loved that they both had snappy comebacks, i guess i love it so much because thats the part i suck at the most when writing my fic!
Well good job!
~SaMi~
Author's Response: Thank you. I know what you mean about coming up with witty comebacks though. O_o;; ::heheheheheh:: Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story.
Name: Sasha reviewed
She Said... on Aug 26, 2004 06:40 am
i loved it!
keep it up!
Author's Response: thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed the fic. ^_^
Name: Manjier reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 14, 2004 11:08 pm
OOh.. This was soo cuutte! Even though it was a bit OOC who am i kinding quite a lot of OOC.. But it doesn't matter because it was so great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Which i knew what KR / RK (?) was cos then i'd run and read that to.
Author's Response: Thank you! RK stands for Rurouni Kenshin, a Japanese Anime that I have 2 in progress fanfiction stories. If you would still like to read them, they can be found on fanfiction.net. My penname there is Bunny / Sailor Moon. Thanks again. ^_^
Name: Aishiteru Tenshi reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 12, 2004 02:12 pm
Whoa... Bunny, I think the song totally fits the story. I've never read a Draco/Ginny story before, but I can tell you that I think you kept them in character, for I've read stories about both of them dating other people. I like the story, it's breathtaking. Maybe I'll read some more Draco/Ginny stories, maybe not. I will say that your story is well written and that I liked it; I hope you write more Draco/Ginny stories, and I hope you continue your RK story.
Author's Response: *squeals and glomps* AT-chan, you are so awesome! ^_^ Your such a good friend to come here and read my story. *big hug* I'm really happy that you enjoyed it too. I hope you do read some more d/g's there are some really good ones out there. I would start with my favorites I have listed here. I'm sure you would love Echo's 2 d/g's. They are the best. I am continuing the RK story - if you haven't been by to see it in a while, I actually updated chapter 40 recently. Thanks again At-chan - see ya on the forums. ^_^
Name: i am a muggle reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 03, 2004 11:30 am
aww i loved the story but didn't expect it to end there i wish you had written more as in following up like were they going to put their relationship out in the open or were they going to keep it a secret etc etc
Author's Response: I know I kind-of cut it short compared to other romance stories that continue a bit after it's established that they are together, but I wanted to keep it uncomplicated and sweet, without all the mess that happens after a relationship begins. I *did* however include in that last chapter that Draco intended to marry Ginny as soon as possible. ^_^ I have an idea for a cookie about that actually, but I'm not sure if I'm going to write it or not. O_o;;
Name: emvee reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 03, 2004 06:16 am
sniff...its finished...i luv it..i luv a strong d/g and your's have it. thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: thanks for being a great reviewer. ^_^
Name: mary reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 02, 2004 11:17 am
very cute, i like the story very much!
Author's Response: thank you...that makes me very happy. ^_^
Name: lovely lioness reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 02, 2004 08:39 am
Ooo, now I feel all warm and fuzzy! That ending was pairfectomundo! I loved it! And now I have to sit and brood because it's over. I hate, yet love that feeling. Please please please continue with D/G, i know this was gonna be your only HP fic but please? For me? I'll be lookin out for ya. -The Lovely Lioness
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews. You are one of the best reviewers I've ever had for any story. (That's saying something!) I know what you mean about a story being over...
As for writing more dg, I still highly doubt it. I have an idea for a cookie to this story that I've been throwing around, but I don't know if I'll actually write it out or not. Other than that...gosh...I just need to finish my RK stories before I think about writing anymore. Since I put this story on FF.net also, I've been getting hate mail from my RK readers that have me on Author Alert. They are so pissed at me because I'm writing, but not updating my RK story. *cowers* Thanks for looking out for me though...it's nice to know someone will be here to read should I write another DG. *hugs*
Name: ash reviewed
She Said... on Jul 30, 2004 11:27 am
its a great story!
Author's Response: thank you, i'm happy that you think so. ^_^
Name: AnitaBlake/BuffyFan reviewed
She Avoided... on Jul 30, 2004 06:04 am
Awaiting the next chapter,
Author's Response: thank you! that makes me happy. ^_^
Name: emeraldsorceress reviewed
She Avoided... on Jul 30, 2004 04:57 am
i like very much kewl plot too nice harry twist what next? hope u update soon ~
Author's Response: thank you! I'm very happy that you are enjoying the story! Enjoy the updates too. ^_^
Name: lecharme reviewed
She Avoided... on Jul 29, 2004 10:32 pm
Yay for cliffies.
Author's Response: *scratches back of neck and giggles nervously* uh...sorry 'bout that ^_^;;
Name: daywahyn reviewed
She Avoided... on Jul 29, 2004 10:23 am
Hope you update soon!! I'm enjoying this story very much.
Author's Response: thank you, I'm very happy to hear that. ^_^