Name: dlareme526 reviewed
She Said... on Aug 22, 2007 09:33 am
This fic has a great premise but there are a couple grammatical errors that you keep repeating. I love it though; it is adorable.
Name: detlefren reviewed
She Said... on Aug 09, 2007 03:26 am
This is great writing! It really draws you in. P.S I'v actually read this before and could'nt stay away.
Name: Shenna reviewed
She Said... on Aug 02, 2007 01:56 pm
yeah I really like your story, and I love readin the author comments so i was a bit sad that your only doing these three stories? *sighs sadly* well thanks for at least putting them up. Next time it will be longer...Shenna
Name: anismenta reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 02, 2007 06:47 am
Nothing bad, not bad at all, Good Job!!
Name: anismenta reviewed
He Attacks... on Aug 02, 2007 06:46 am
Nothing bad, not bad at all, Good Job!!
Name: MandyAnne reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 29, 2007 04:08 am
This was so cute, I absolutely adored it! (: Write on!
Name: crimsonpetals reviewed
She Said... on Jul 28, 2007 03:05 pm
I loved the little bit about Ginny using Draco's smirk against him. Little tidbits like that are great. I also liked the part where Ginny dares Draco to push her to see if she'll make good on her threat of hexing his balls off. Intriguing first chapter.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 25, 2007 08:02 pm
It was wonderfully fluffy. Thank you for the very enjoyable read. ;)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
She Avoided... on Jul 25, 2007 07:58 pm
I love that as soon as she saw it was only him she was relieved. ;)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
He Avoided… on Jul 25, 2007 07:54 pm
You can't leave us there....
So many funny lines:
"It was almost like living at home, minus the fanatical Dark Lord supporter and the suffocated mother that rarely fought back. Not that those things were still like that at home mind you."
And then he goes and says, "I found myself wondering fleetingly if she would frighten our children ranting as she is wont to do, or if it would be her fiery temper that kept them in line since they would most likely be bad and rotten like me."
*clicks next chapter*
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
She Falls... on Jul 25, 2007 07:47 pm
LOL! The Beatles? Really? HA HA HA! I wonder what Lucius felt about it.
Luna seems a bit off -- but I enjoyed it anyway! ;)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
He Said... on Jul 25, 2007 07:42 pm
Oh my goodness... I loved it. LOVED hearing it from Draco's POV. You were lovely here.
At the end of that year, Potter saved her from the Dark Lord in the Chamber. I backed off a bit from teasing Ginny; after all I had almost lost her.
AHGHG! Really wonderful!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
She Said... on Jul 25, 2007 07:38 pm
I liked it. ;)
I was amused by Ginny's attitude. Very in character. Very fun. A few little annacronysms (Like I can't exaclty picture Draco saying, "jump my bones" but they're not distracting. I usually don't care for first person - but you've written Ginny wonderfully! ;)
Name: Rashonda reviewed
She Said... on Jul 25, 2007 06:40 am
I read this story on my phone and I had a huge smile on my face the whole time. It was a great read, I loved how each chapter let the other one be the narrator. GJ.
Name: ErinM reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 18, 2007 11:28 am
I think I smiled throughout this entire story. And listened to the Beatles. haha. I loved it!
Name: Kalira reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 18, 2007 05:23 am
It was highly entertaining. Good job!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 17, 2007 05:46 am
oh that made me happy!!
Name: pens82 reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 17, 2007 04:10 am
very cute
Name: detlefren reviewed
She Said... on Jul 16, 2007 06:35 pm
Sexual tension at it's best. ;)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 16, 2007 10:24 am
awe. way cute! way way cute!
Name: bloomingauthor7 reviewed
She Falls... on Jul 16, 2007 08:39 am
rofl
Name: bloomingauthor7 reviewed
She Said... on Jul 16, 2007 08:32 am
hahaha!
Name: fatedtobehated reviewed
She Said... on Jul 16, 2007 07:24 am
It was cute. I liked the story - especially the idea that Ginny and Draco met each other at a young age because both their fathers work at the ministry. It makes perfect sense - I wonder why we all tend to think they met for the first time in Flourish & Blotts?
Anyway, please keep writing. I will wrap up this long comment and read the rest of your story now. :)
P.S. Who is your beta?
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
He Attacks... on Jul 16, 2007 07:22 am
hahaha Draco saying, "don't hate" is so super amusing. Cute story! :)
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
She Falls... on Jul 16, 2007 07:15 am
Awww!!! That's adorable! I love your chapter titles, as well as the sheer likeability of your characters. They seem to be a tad more American than British, but quite quite quite cute. :)