Name: justwish reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 11, 2011 05:16 pm
I loved this story!! I agree, JKR just does not explain what is going on at Malfoy Manor. The idea that he wouldn't recognize Harry after knowing him so well for six years is ridiculous! Of course Draco recognized him- and Granger and Weasley. Heck, Lucius recognized them and he had seen Hermion twice! Great idea.
Name: Rebecca Ripple reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 10, 2011 12:38 pm
Well written. This is very powerful. I love the way you write! Keep it up! :)
Name: gidge_8 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 10, 2011 07:23 am
Nice viewpoint on this scene. I'm sure he had a million thoughts going through his head during those moments.
Name: Januarybaby reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2011 01:05 am
I like it - the little flashback was good and I liked the bit about trying to keep her away from school be pretending to be Neville. Good work.
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