on Jan 22, 2011 03:16 pm
This was intense. I really like their interactions and how much they were fighting or not fighting against each other, if that makes sense. I can't wait to read more of your stories! :)
on Jan 18, 2011 01:55 pm
It was very. very intense. Awesome work!
on Jan 18, 2011 12:38 pm
way interesting, i like the war-torn stories where they aren't forgiving and everything just hurts because its so different from the way we want it. good job.