Name: TASHAx reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 23, 2011 01:57 pm
I did read the other reviews after reading this and I think they're being a little unfair. Personally, I thought this was sexy and very well written. I think with smut, particuarly, kinky smut you can run the risk of seeming classless but actually I felt this had a kind of sophistication to it.
I love that they're married and trust each other so much they can do new things and try stuff out in the bedroom; the beauty of having a familiar partner you love.
Good work :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! It's hard to tread the line with writing something kinky. Not everyone wants to read it, and it's not always someone's thing. I like the idea of Draco being at Ginny's mercy, and I see them (no matter what 'verse I write with them) as very comfortable with each other once they make that kind of commitment to each other. It's can be an awkward conversation to have, but that they're willing to go out on a limb and try something new is a wonderful show of trust between them.
Name: ginnygie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 07, 2011 11:53 pm
I'm not a fan of anal, but I think I quite like the vulnerable, begging Draco here.
Author's Response: Vulnerable Draco is always fun to write, and I don't really play around with that side of him very often. :)
Name: HumbugGirl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 05, 2011 04:05 am
Lol - I read some of the reviews. The epic gulf between LJ/Porn Battle and the archive, eh?
Nice bit of kink. Not my usual fare, but nicely done all the same.
Author's Response: Well, this isn't everyone's kink, so I don't take it personally. I think because people are expecting wilder things on the Porn Battle, it didn't throw them as much. :)
I'm glad this worked even if it's not your thing. :)
Name: laxgirl14 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 04, 2011 09:29 pm
haha i don;t mean that you are not a good writer, you def are, i just can't get behind it bc i am a urologist :) and i feel prostates all the time, and not in the hot way.....
Author's Response: Hey, it's not like this is everyone's thing. I knew that when I wrote it. :)
I know the feeling. When I was a med student it was all kinds of awkward and not hot. Can't say I miss doing those. :D
Name: Eleoopy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 04, 2011 07:56 pm
awww, cute and extremely funny at that :)
Author's Response: Now, that's a new response. lol. Glad you liked this. :)
Name: Januarybaby reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 04, 2011 06:29 pm
Good job, it was all smutty (wonderfully smutty) and then it had this cute 'they're married' ending. Yay
Author's Response: Well, that part was because I had a conversation a while back about how no one writes married!sex as anything but boring or fade to black. So that's why I decided to go with a kinkier kind of viewpoint for the Porn Battle entry. :)
Name: scentasia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 03, 2011 01:24 pm
i actually liked it. it was something different and you wrote it so nicely. good job! i always enjoy your stories!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 03, 2011 12:06 am
i read the reviews before i actually read this, which was maybe why I was not as grossed out because i thought she was going to sexually drink his pee or something, lol. that being said, smut aside, your writing is very talented as always and it's always interesting to experiment and write something new. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I may try writing different kinks, but drinking pee is something even I wouldn't write. ;)
Name: Almicene reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2011 07:29 pm
Ya idk, I find it kinda weird and a little gross. I do like some of your other works, but I think you might have a harder time finding an audience that will like this one just due to the content. It's nothing against your writing style, just what you wrote about. I can see what you meant about having a hard time with the warning/descriptions, but you might want to find a way to include it in the summary? Or something, cause I was expecting something a little different when reading it. You could always put an author's note at the beginning of this perhaps.
Author's Response: It's tough thing about warnings. While this isn't a kink that floats everyone's boat, there's always people that find warning for every possible kink insulting, too.
Name: laxgirl14 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2011 05:26 pm
you know, i was going to find this hot....but i've given 8 rectal exams today, so it's a no-go.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. Those aren't the most fun exams to give. :(
Name: Iddoitallforthat reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2011 02:47 pm
this is a bit rank.
You have talent though, use it for something better. :)
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like this. We'll see what happens, since I haven't had many D/G ideas lately.
Name: panda_toots reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 02, 2011 11:37 am
ewwww.. gross..
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like it. There isn't any particular warning I could've put to warn for that. :(