Reviews For Brighter Dawn
Name: yanmaneee reviewed Brighter Dawn on Dec 24, 2021 11:21 pm
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Name: Desertisle reviewed Brighter Dawn on Jan 22, 2016 09:23 pm
This was wonderful! Please write more, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Thanks for writing this.
Name: TuesdayNovember reviewed Brighter Dawn on May 27, 2011 11:34 am
This review is going to be a series of Facts and Explanations.

Fact 1: This was beautifully written.
Explanation 1: Stunning lines like, "The scent of dust and decay seemed to coat Draco's tongue and stick in his throat, like a layer of rot that was slowly choking him," and, "she had died bloody and torn: a magnificent white rose ripped apart until nothing but thorns were left in Draco's memory."
STUNNING.

Fact 2: This was very powerful.
Explanation 2: We get not only stunning descriptions of Draco's fragile state, but the way Ginny 'saves' him is beautiful too. Hopeful and uplifting in spite of all the darkness.

Fact 3: This deserves WAY more reviews.
Explanation 3: See the above.

Conclusion: Ur a rle gud riter lol. plz update soon. ;)

Author's Response: Lizzie!! Thank you, as always, for your lovely review! I'm glad you think it was well written and powerful ^_^ So was your review ;) Conclusion: I iz totly may-zing, will rite more. Lolz.
Name: Boogum reviewed Brighter Dawn on May 01, 2011 03:16 pm
OHHHHHHHH! This was BEAUTIFUL! I loved it. Really. The imagery was so rich and powerful, and the way you handled their emotions was just--wow. I'm speechless right now.

My favourite line: ""she had died bloody and torn: a magnificent white rose ripped apart until nothing but thorns were left in Draco's memory."

Simply beautiful (in a tragic way, of course). What I love most about this, however, is that you gave hope at the end, and you did it in a way where I wasn't wanting to roll my eyes--as is sometimes the case. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Hi Kim! Thank you so much for your review, (I'm dreadful at replying to reviews), I am over the moon that SOMEBODY here left one! I'm glad that's your favourite line, because it was my favourite one to write ^_^ I'm glad the ending wasn't super-cheesy for you. Subtelty is sometimes key, no? Squee! Thanks ^_^.
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