Reviews For Silence
Name: liyunyun reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 05, 2018 01:14 am
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Name: Kyasarin reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 21, 2013 01:57 am
I enjoyed this immensely. I especially like how you played with the timeline to reveal the plot, but also how multidimensional your characters are. You mentioned something about a sequel, but your blog is protected. Any update on that?
Name: Cara reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 22, 2011 01:41 pm
Perfect ending for a great story! Hope to see more of you here!! Very much hoping on that sequel. :)
Name: Almicene reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 09, 2011 04:26 am
I reread the first chapter cause it popped me back to here after leaving the last review.

Favorite part: His office chair is comfy. I only leave it when I think he might be home soon.

One of my favorite things about your stories is that you show their feelings for each other, and they don't even know it. It's really a credit to your talent, and Ginny's perfectly in character in this chapter. Angry, and feisty. The rose was a nice touch.

Oh and things I'd like to see - actually probably this same story and certain parts fleshed out from Draco's POV. I'd be really interested to see how you did that. And if you didn't want to do the whole story, how about just the last chapter you wrote from Draco's POV? I'm curious to see if you can keep him in character as much as you do now, and how you handle a man's perspective. No pressure either way. I would just love you forever if you did that :p.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 30, 2011 08:44 pm
love the ginny.. will draco acting a block of ice, ever change?

Author's Response: read on to find out. :) by now you probably already have.
Name: Almicene reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 30, 2011 01:11 pm
Gr wish you could edit reviews. I wanted to clarify about the time jump parts after I reread what I wrote to you.

So first off, I like them in your story. I really like seeing how they got together with where they are now. The idea is great. The part I should say could use a slight improvement is perhaps the transition - where you put them or how you put them. Cause sometimes I feel like I'm reading the present then WHAM back into the past without warning. So just a little smoother transition would be less jarring.

So keep them! but see if you can make them work a little bit better. That's all I meant to say :p.

Author's Response: Got it, thanks. :) I'll employ the transition better in my next fiction. Promise!
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 30, 2011 11:27 am
very interesting! feels very ...real
please keep writing this!
:)

Author's Response: thanks, I will. :)
Name: justwish reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 30, 2011 11:17 am
What a great start and so unique! Can't wait to see where we go.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: billarayne reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 20, 2011 04:44 am
This is fantastic. I cannot wait for more, literally. I went to ff.net and then to the link on your profile page on this site, just incase you had posted more chapters somewhere. Amazing. Simply amazing.

Author's Response: Ha-ha! I do that too - go snooping around the net. Well, I'm sure you found about a half of what you were looking for. :)
Name: Cara reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 20, 2011 01:46 am
Wow! That's a very good story! I like how you portrayed their feelings and to see that they somehow do like each other. Looking forward to the next chapter!! Cannot wait!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Name: Mungihead reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 04:40 pm
I really liked the beginning! Draco and Ginny are both very true to character, and I like how they aren't automatically in love. It seems much more real that way- and I love that. Please continue, this seems very promising! Excited for chapter 2!

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M :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I tried to make them canon, although I'm not 100% sure I succeeded with Draco, but thanks! :)
Name: twitched reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 02:16 pm
Very opposite of what we're used to in the draco-ginny relationship because it's always portrayed as passionate and intense. Some parts are heart breaking to read (Draco sneaking a glance at Astoria).....can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! More is on the way. :)
Name: twitched reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 02:15 pm
Very opposite of what we're used to in the draco-ginny relationship because it's always portrayed as passionate and intense. Some parts are heart breaking to read (Draco sneaking a glance at Astoria).....can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 01:00 pm
This is a very interesting story and I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: ginny2909 reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 10:41 am
Hey, nice start..I liked the way you started it and I'm sure it will be make an interesting read. It has a very fresh appeal to it :)

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: tcf reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 09:02 am
Great beginning. You revealed a lot of hints as to where you are going with this and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yes, hints are my specialty. Thanks :)
Name: Iridescent-Dreamer reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 02:24 am
Intriguing.

Author's Response: Thanks! ;)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 02:15 am
And I really don't like Draco looking at Astoria with regret. That makes me mad. :(

Author's Response: Aww! You are going to be mad about many things then... :( Hope it's not so bad, you 'll stop reading. ;)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2011 02:15 am
I'm very confused. Intrigued, yes, but I don't really understand what's going on.

Author's Response: Well, yes. I wrote it like that on purpose, I'm nasty that way! ;) Did you notice that the dates don't follow chronologically? That may be the source of your confusion.
Name: shezachica85 reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 18, 2011 09:23 pm
good start!

Author's Response: thanks :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 18, 2011 08:37 pm
I quite like this. The storyteller-like quality to it is very entertaining. I definitely look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you :)
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