Name: mene reviewed
Chapter 5 on Feb 06, 2022 10:46 pm
Love this story. Hope you're able to get some new chapters out!
Name: justwish reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 21, 2011 04:20 pm
I appreciate this story!!! Hope she keeps this baby!
Name: DGgirl reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 14, 2011 05:37 pm
Awwwww yay! They're in love! Now they just need to tell that to each other :)
Really looking forward to the next chapter - please update soon! xo
Author's Response: They will. :)
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 14, 2011 12:16 pm
WHAT! I really want to read more!
Author's Response: :D
Name: mchen reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 12, 2011 03:05 am
What do I want to happen? Other than the obvious -- Draco + Ginny -- the answer is: more!! You have done such a great job of slowly unfurling their relationship, I was looking forward to many more chapters; it feels like there is still so much emotional distance they have to go before they achieve a fully realized relationship, and before we therefore get a fully satisfactory ending. But you're the author; I guess I'll just have to trust you, based on what you've done so far, which is just fantastic. Sorry if I sound too negative; I really was looking forward to a lot more of this, and was surprised to see the end coming so quickly. I want to be clear: you've done a stellar job so far -- thanks!
Author's Response: You'rew not being negative at all. I get what you mean. Thank you. :)
Name: Mungihead reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 10, 2011 08:00 am
This chapter was awesome! I loved it so much, and the fact that you're taking it at an an natural level of progression, where they aren't insanely in love after a day, is very realistic.
I love this line especially, "Draco hugs me even tighter, and hides his face in my hair as he whispers back, 'I appreciate you, too.'"
Fantastic job! You left me hanging with that last line- I can't wait for chapter 6! I think Draco will be happy about the baby, and hopefully it'll be kind of a bridge for the Weasleys to accept Draco into their family.
Can't wait for more!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo,
M :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Mungihead, for your continuous support. :) I hope the ending was everything you wanted.
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 06:46 pm
Amazing! The rest is in email.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Swanne reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 03:05 pm
so cute the way they grew to each other :)
Author's Response: :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 11:41 am
oh emotional pregnant women. haha. i'm glad they "appreciate" each other. haha.
Author's Response: me too :)
Name: Almicene reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 04:34 am
Ok I reread this chapter too. I can't help it, the writing is fabulous. I feel like everything has come together here. Characterization, dialogue, descriptions, etc. I'm seeing other parts of this chapter I didn't appreciate the first time. I love how Draco really understands Ginny, that when she's yelling at him for not coming to her room, he doesn't react in an upset manner. He realizes that something is wrong. And it's an understanding that has grown over the course of the story, i.e. beautiful character development.
I really should get back to homework now :p. But seriously! fabulous!
Name: Almicene reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 04:21 am
I was absolutely spellbound by this chapter. Sorry for keeping at you about the ending - I just read through the reviews and it seemed like you were of two minds - that not every ending is happy, and then that you liked happy endings. I really love your D/G here so it was like an investment of emotions on my part. I tend not to read tragedies cause I usually hate feeling so sad afterwards.
Anyways, so the flow was perfect here. I'm curious whether the dates you put in here are necessary - like perhaps there is a point/reason you're putting them in there. I can't decide whether I like them or not :P. The POV was perfect, and the pacing also perfect, especially in regards to how they revealed their feelings for each other.
I think the only thing I'm surprised about is Draco not having marched up to his wife when she was with Harry. Again I can't decide whether that would have been in character or out of character for your Draco. You've written him as very cool and collected, but he clearly has his bursts of anger/temper. I would have liked to see more of the scene of them realizing their feelings for each other. That part could have been fleshed out a bit.
Also can't decide whether 'Christ's sake' would be appropriate here. I always found it a little strange when muggle-borns just used 'Merlin's sake'/etc, but Harry's grown up in the Wizarding world.
Also, major props for not feeling the need to change the tags for all your dialogue. Most people feel like they have to write 'she said' (which is good) but then every line is 'she breathed' 'she huffed' 'she smirked.' I liked that you weren't afraid to use "tell" "said" and actions linked to some of the dialogue. I could really picture the scene in my mind and feel the personality of the characters. It was absolutely perfect so don't change it.
This was my favorite chapter up to date. Mixed feelings about a sequel! Could either mean you're going to do a baby story sequel which most authors don't really do well, or leaving this on a cliffhanger. I have faith in you though so don't take this as me pushing you either way.
Name: billarayne reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 03:27 am
I thought this chapter was good, then you drop the bombshell about a possible sequel! I love this story so much. It just all comes together so perfectly, I adore your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Name: Cara reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 12:33 am
I'm very happy for them. However I don't think there won't be any drama anymore. Looking forward to the next chapter! And yay for th sequel!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 09, 2011 12:13 am
I love this chapter! It's darling! More moremore!
Author's Response: :)
Name: twitched reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 08, 2011 07:59 pm
more please! Let them have a lovely pink haired baby and Draco should stop being a pansy and just admit he's completely smitten with her.
Author's Response: lol, I've never really understood what is meant by pink hair. But I'll see what I can do.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 5 on Oct 08, 2011 07:15 pm
First of all, "Order of Moron, First Class" is the funniest thing I've read in a while. Just had to get that out.
Kinda sad that it's ending, but happy that your muse is suggesting a sequel. Yay! :D
This chapter is lovely. I love Draco's jealousy towards Harry. I love how 'appreciate' represents love in their arranged marriage. It's like, what more can an arranged marriage ask for than appreciation. Lovely.
I look forward to the final chapter and the *fingers crossed* *whispers* sequel.
Author's Response: Yes, well, if the sequel pans out, it won't be posted in several months, I write slowly. And it's going to be *angsty*. Thank you for the review. :)