Name: Eleoopy reviewed Insults and Allies on May 06, 2012 03:03 pm

Ahhhh, finally updates!  been like 2 weeks since the last one?  Thought it was a Sunday joke when I got the update notification!

I like how Harry 'gets' Draco in a way for him to express more than he even admit.  Though I wish Harry sympathize Ginny more than Astoria :/  I just think the way he felt for Astoria is a bit unfair to Ginny, b/c this isnt entirely Ginny's fault....just my 2 cents

I also think Ginny is a bit not helping.  I thought when she stormed into Draco's library, she would said somehting that would make Draco to realize her true feelings, but she reall couldnt formulate her thought well (and who could really blame her).  This chapter has too much internal struggle (some are shown while mostly are hidden) that sorta torn me apart.  

And the last line is classic <3  

Waiting (im)patiently for your next chater!



Author's Response: I'm sorry it takes a bit for me to update, but my beta is a very busy beaver so she doesn't always have time to look at my chapters right away. But no, no Sunday joke! :P

The four of them have a lot to think about at this point. Harry is torn, Astoria is frustrated, Draco is disappointed, and Ginny is just plain confused. The next chapter is going to be the beginning of the end, so this chapter was the peak of the emotional content. The problem is that I have to try to make the story believable, so that's why there is so much internal stuggle here. I promise, there will be no angst beyond what was in this chapter!

I will try to get the next chapter to my beta soon so that I can update as soon as possible, I promise! Thanks for the review :)
Name: Sleepless reviewed Insults and Allies on May 06, 2012 02:08 pm
Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Insults and Allies on May 06, 2012 11:07 am
haha. the only way harry and draco could bond is over something bad. haha. good job. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am going to try to send the next chapter to my beta soon so I can get this updated :).
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed Insults and Allies on May 06, 2012 07:45 am
Bonding! :DD AND IT BETTER END HAPPY >:(

Author's Response: I will reveal no secrets, and you can't make me! Thanks for the review, dearest :)
Name: Paranoid_Schemer reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 30, 2012 10:23 pm
I liked Draco's reaction more than Harry's, it was more realistic. Curious to see how the children will take it. Good chapter :)

Author's Response: There is more to Harry's reaction to come. Hopefully it will make more sense! Unfortunately, there will not be much on the children until the final chapter/epilogue, but rest assured that they have not been forgotten! Thanks for the review :)
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed Sunday Tea on Apr 27, 2012 09:07 pm
Aww cute

Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Name: Belle reviewed Sunday Tea on Apr 24, 2012 10:31 am
I love it, love it, love it !

Author's Response: I'm so glad! :)
Name: Sleepless reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 23, 2012 06:08 pm
Oh poor draco but he'll Come around right.?

Author's Response: No comment on the fate of the relationship. :) Thanks for the review!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Lie to Me on Apr 23, 2012 10:37 am
a lonely one!!

Author's Response: Lonely? Hm.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed My Heart, Where My Head Should Be on Apr 23, 2012 10:32 am
Great chapie, love how the fake ginny & astoria act with their husbands! i think fake ginny went to far with harry! harry & draco are so clueless this situation.. onwrd to the next exciting chapie!!

Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story so far :) Thanks so much for the reviews :)
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Families on Apr 23, 2012 10:24 am
love the chapie, to pieces!! funny how asoria's son realize what was going on! looking forward to  seeing how the fake ginny is doing?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Name: drakebell reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 11:05 pm
I didn't expect Draco to be angry like that. Well, it's a good thing Harry understands Astoria and the truth came out. I just hope Draco will not let Ginny suffer first before calming himself and forgiving Ginny!!!

Author's Response: Draco's reaction is a bit more complex, and there's more to come on that in the remaining chapters. Thanks for the review!
Name: mollyp reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 07:45 pm
AH! The husbands finally know! I figured Harry would be fairly calm about it and Draco would be angry but I didn't expect him to be THAT mad. I feel so bad for Ginny. I feel like Draco might take awhile to come around. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you thought that Harry would be the calm one. A lot of others thought it'd be the other way around. :)
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 07:34 pm
Oh, sadness. I love this story. THEY NEED TO REALIZE THEY'RE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER.

Author's Response: :) :) Not saying a thing. Thanks for the review!
Name: SunnyStorms reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 01:46 pm
Loved their reactions! You could really feel Draco's emotions here. I'm glad you didn't postpone Draco's response. :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad I went into Draco's reaction in this chapter, although there is still more of that to come, because I don't want to leave everyone hanging for too long. I'm happy you enjoyed!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 11:17 am
How is it that Harry took it so much better than Draco? Or is Draco about to calm down and work things out with Ginny, the way that Harry did with Astoria?

Author's Response: Because it hurt Draco more. Draco always loved Ginny, whereas Harry doesn't love Astoria -- he sympathizes with her. He knows what it's like to have a spouse who isn't in love. There will be much more about Draco and Harry's reactions/feelings in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for the review! :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 10:59 am
haha. so many of us had been looking forward to the rejection. i think that's funny. good job. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am going to try to update sooner this time. :)
Name: firefireice22 reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 10:09 am
love it! hopefully draco comes around :) can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Name: bigreader reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 08:37 am
Oh Draco you'll come around soon enough! Go figure on Harry not freaking out too much. I can just see Ginny mentioning that Draco's son is for it backfiring on her yet again. Oh I can't wait for the next chapter! Love love love!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the review :)
Name: Eleoopy reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 07:53 am
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO....not another long wait for this heart-aching ending like this!!! >_< How am I going to survive another week after THIS update!!!

Great chapter though, I love the Astoria + Harry confrontation, kinda surprise that Astoria isnt as stupid as Draco thought (or anyone) and now it seems like she IS perfect for Harry who just want to be the hero in the family while ginny hates that :)

I know the next chapter would be heart-aching too (cant go from this to happy ending, cant we...) but I hope we can get to see Draco's internal struggle b/c obviously he liike Ginny a lot and he probably love her more than he will ever admit otherwise, he wouldnt be this angry. Also Draco has a good point - what about the kids...?

Please pleas please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: There will be more on Draco's reaction in the next chapter, I promise. I am going to try to update sooner, but my beta has a lot on her plate right now, which was why this update took so long. Thanks so much for the review!
Name: FireNIce70 reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 05:54 am
What a GREAT chapter! I think you nailed Harry's reaction to the T. And Ginny appearing directly to the spot with Harry and Astoria is great. I hate to admit it, but it's great that Harry and the women seem to have gotten tot the same conclusion. If only Draco can get there too. Draco's reaction: not sure. I think the angry tirade would have much worse but he got it all out in the end and what comes next will be a very interesting confrontation between Harry and Draco. THAT is something I cannot wait to read. Great job.

Author's Response: Believe me, we have not yet seen Draco's full reaction just yet. There is still a ways to go, but I wanted to give everyone a little taste. :)
Name: pitzi reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 22, 2012 12:07 am
I was kinda surprised by how well Harry took the news, but on a second thought it does fit him. Draco's reaction was expected though. I just hope he comes around eventually.

Thanks for the story and looking forwar to see how it all fits into place.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I didn't want Harry to get quite as emotional as Draco for a few reasons, most of which will be explained throughout the final few chapters, so I won't go into too much detail here. But, I will say that Harry is very sympathetic, even though he didn't say too much in the last chapter.
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 21, 2012 09:44 pm
Great so far great cliff hanger

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Not Good Enough on Apr 21, 2012 09:41 pm
Sharp rocks and crushing waves at the bottom of this cliff. Sooo good, but sooo long since the last update lol. Don't rush the amazing-ness though. I laughed so hard at around half of this chapter, straight up loved it.

STT.

Author's Response: I'm glad :). I actually had this chapter finished for a while, but my beta, unfortunately, wasn't able to read it right away. Thanks for the review! :)
Name: clocks2 reviewed Crossing the Line on Apr 11, 2012 04:42 pm
Love this story please please update

Author's Response: My next chapter has been sent to my beta! It shouldn't be too long. :)
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