Name: takinglifeasitcomes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 21, 2012 12:03 pm
It's a lovely start to a story so far, gives lots of room for development. However it does bother me a bit how young Ginny is at this point regarding the context. Definitely seems out of character for the age being portrayed.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honest review, I really appreciate it. I am sorry if the age of the characters bothers, you it is not my intent to offend anyone. However, I feel that the Chamber of Secrets needed to be re-told from the person who was most affected by it. I am working on keeping things as PG as possible because of their young ages, but they do have a strong romantic connection.
Name: Rinney reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 20, 2012 08:06 pm
This was a very lovely kiss scene, I must admit. It was rightfully passionate, not too overwhelming in my opinion. Are you going to continue the story or is this all we see for now? The first story is always the hardest!
Cherryredxx is a darling, by the way. We share betas :) Wouldn't know where I'd be without her, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it! I have five chapters written so far and am working on writting a 6th. My intent is for it to be a fairly long story, about 25-30 chapters. I absolutley love my beta she is amazing and I dont know where I would be without her either! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and I love your annalysis of the kiss. I just recently submittted chap 2 for her to beta so hopefully it will be up soon.