Reviews For Punished
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Memories, Part II on Apr 01, 2013 12:13 pm
I think you did a brilliant job. I think that sweeet Draco is still in there somewhere. He just has all this DE training hiding it now, and bringing it out in weird death-y ways.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. He's trying, he really is, lol. I hope you keep reading. :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Memories, Part II on Mar 30, 2013 07:13 am
Little Draco is observant and such an adorable little gentleman. I like that Ginny remembers their time together at the day care as well, and I like how you linked all the canon events to being D/G related. Very nice.

Author's Response: Isn't he though? I figured he had to be, since people in his social circles are expected to act a certain way. Ginny remembers everything, but has a hard time connecting Draco the jerk in Hogwarts to the sweet Draco she remembers, though she wants to be the way they were again. Those events from cannon fell into place perfectly for this story. I was so happy to be able to tie it together. :)
Name: Marinka reviewed Memories, Part II on Mar 30, 2013 03:57 am
Thank you for the update, I just managed to get the website to load after one week of failed attempts.
I hope once this is fixed, you will get heaps of reviews!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I hope so!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Memories, Part I on Mar 11, 2013 11:19 am
Oh, I know how you feel. I've put myself in Academic Quarantine just to get some studying done before I update my fics.

Good luck with exams!

Author's Response: Thank you! You also! Next week is my last set and then I have a week off before my next quarter starts...Thank goodness...
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Realizations on Feb 28, 2013 07:14 pm
Too much too fast... Without anything actually happening! I'm hoping that the smut will redeem that...

Also, I'm pretty sure that "Toxic" came out after 1997.

Author's Response: There will be smut. Also,this is fan fiction, so I am taking liberties with music and such that I wouldn't normally. Thank you for your review and I'm sorry you find a lack of plot... :( Will try and improve...
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed On Fire on Feb 28, 2013 07:10 pm
I don't like that Ginny was okay with murder. Or that Draco was okay with carrying out a murder. It makes the story seem like a caricature. Unless they're psychotic, they should not be okay with murder.

Author's Response: Are soldiers psychotic for killing during wartime? Draco is a soldier, as is Ginny, on opposite sides of a war. And if you think Ginny has no psychological problems after being possessed by an evil overlord for about 180 days then I'm not sure what to say...
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed In Need of Punishment on Feb 28, 2013 07:03 pm
Looks promising...

Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Memories, Part I on Feb 24, 2013 04:27 pm
I LOVE!!! I can't wait to read more. I love that he's actually dangerous and emotionally dangerous. I can't wait to see how this plays out. More please (and soon, hopefully). :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Draco's dangerous nature. He is now a fully trained Death Eater at this point so I was hoping for a dangerous air about him. I am working on it, but it is finals time at my college, so I'm going slightly crazy!
Name: Marinka reviewed Memories, Part I on Feb 20, 2013 10:53 pm
Crazy times for them...i feel sad and hopeful at the same time. Perhabs they can help each other?

Author's Response: I'm glad I am evoking emotions :) There is hope for our young couple yet.
Name: KJ Expelliarmus reviewed Memories, Part I on Feb 20, 2013 08:26 am
I liked much this chapter, above all, above all, as you narrate -in a manner truly original- the first meeting between Draco and Ginny, with only 3 and 4 years old.

I hope you can update very soon your great fic, especially if Ginny remembers these first meetings with Draco.

Author's Response: I think she will, I haven't figured out how to work it in without repeating everything that already happened. I'm glad you liked it and I will update soon.
Name: KJ Expelliarmus reviewed Realizations on Feb 20, 2013 08:20 am
Undoubtedly, Luna Lovegood must have seer genes. Moreover, I liked it as you have narrated the discussion between Draco and Blaise about the blonde's feelings towards Ginny.

I hope you can update very soon your great fanfic.

Author's Response: Either seer genes or that sharp Ravenclaw mind. And if Blaise can't be honest with Draco, who can? I love the idea of someone like Blaise keeping Draco grounded you know?
Name: NoelMalphoi reviewed On Fire on Feb 15, 2013 06:09 pm
oooh~ very well written:3 and the storyline is quite beautiful:D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you are enjoying it.
Name: xxprincessofdarknessxx reviewed On Fire on Jan 14, 2013 04:40 pm
Update update update!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in it's final stages of editing now.
Name: KJ Expelliarmus reviewed On Fire on Jan 06, 2013 01:42 pm
A very promising story. I really liked how you have presented to Draco and Ginny, and their respective personalities.

I hope you can update very soon your promising fanfic.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked their personalities. I was worried it was a little much a little soon, but they are both such strong willed characters in my head that I just let them take control of where this is going.
Name: Siriusly_Holey reviewed In Need of Punishment on Jan 05, 2013 07:44 pm
This story is only two chapters in and I'm hooked. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Coming very soon, within the next couple of days I'd say.
Name: Marinka reviewed On Fire on Jan 05, 2013 03:30 am
is that a little obsession with purity on Draco's side?

Author's Response: Absolutely ;)
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed In Need of Punishment on Jan 04, 2013 07:11 pm
Seems really rushed the urges but I'm betting there's tons of backstory here. I'm a lil confused as to where this is going, but its intriguing me. Added for emails.

Author's Response: I'm glad to have peaked you interest. They do have back story from cannon that I'm going to add little twists to, those will pop in as random memories in later chapters...
Name: maximumtrouble10 reviewed In Need of Punishment on Jan 04, 2013 05:06 pm
Very interesting story--your characterizations of Ginny as feisty yet having a flaw of inconsistency and Draco as highly possessive and ruthless are excellent. For some reason, it's a little difficult to reconcile the Ginny who insults Draco with the Ginny who is empathetic about him almost murdering Dumbledore and actually killing Vaisey--especially since it seems that this change occurs within a day. Do they have a backstory, or is their physical attraction to each other somehow that strong? Thanks for the great story!

Author's Response: The cannon back story is all they have, but with a twist. I used Draco's teasing her ruthlessly as a pigtail puller move. He enjoys tormenting her because she feels everything so drastically and shows her emotions. In Draco's world emotions are sort of a foreign notion. He is infatuated with Ginny's emotions and how intense she is about everything and has been for a while. I'm not sure how Ginny feels about him except the whole hormone thing, I get further inspirations for back story while I write, but she remembers him from daycare. That is something, isn't it? Thanks for the review!
Name: Marinka reviewed In Need of Punishment on Jan 04, 2013 02:10 am
i only hope that characters death is not our couple and that somehow they live through it..Ginny did behaive kind of stupid but they are both seems to like each other.

Author's Response: I can't give away too much, but neither Draco nor Ginny die, though there will be some close calls...
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