I find your story intriguing. I like the dynamic you have set up between Draco and Ginny. I understand Ginny's hatred toward Draco, but her excessive use of profanity is jarring. Yes, Draco is responsible for the death eaters coming into Hogwarts, but it feels like Ginny feels he is responsible for everything including Harry breaking up with her.

Author's Response: I feel like since Ginny is only sixteen, she would be very prone to making Draco a scapegoat instead of putting blame where it is due. Also, I think this year is her "angsty teenager phase," hence the incredible amount of profanity. Especially under pressure, I see Ginny as a girl who uses profanity to cover her own feelings and look "tough." I do appreciate you pointing out her flaws--I'm trying to make her appear fairly illogical and rash. Thank you so much for reading!