Name: Marinka reviewed
Chapter 4 on Nov 18, 2013 07:15 pm
Interesting comparisons and definitions towards the end of the chapter. I always wondered why did they sent her to school on that year? She could have been killed, kidnapped, pretty much anything could have happened...
Name: coneveronica reviewed
Chapter 4 on Nov 17, 2013 08:15 am
I'm really liking how this story is progressing. It seems very natural. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 4 on Nov 16, 2013 04:57 pm
Another GREAT chapter! I meant to review this earlier, but things are pretty nuts around here... ;)
Anyway. You just have such a great portrayal of Ginny here. It's EXACTLY the way that I imagine she actually would have been during that seventh year. Brave, stubborn, reckless... the reader actually fears for her, because she's kind of dancing on a precipice, and she could fall off at any second. And I really like the way that you didn't immediately pair her up with Draco in detention. It would have been the obvious thing to do, but it wouldn't have been the *realistic* thing to do.
I'm going to post about this fic on our FB again, and I really am urging people to read it. There just aren't enough fics about this year in Ginny's life-- this is a great one! And you'd better continue it... don't make me come over there... ;)