Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 12 on May 19, 2016 04:42 pm
thank for the shout-out! hope that looking forward the primal spell will make appearance soon!

Author's Response: Oh, it'll be soon... ;) probably by the end of the next chapter.
Name: bigreader reviewed Chapter 12 on May 17, 2016 06:08 pm
Just read through the whole story. I want to see her act out all her fantasies with just her and Draco. I also want to know why Draco stopped seeing her, what blackmail... why did she retreat into the muggle world. What did Theo do? This story is making me crazy. Can't wait to see what happens in chapter 13

Author's Response: Thanks! :) The next chapter is coming soon.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Chapter 12 on May 16, 2016 11:09 am
Kind of short?! Blimey!!

It's been so long I'be had to go back through and re read the last few chapters! Are we going to be in this for the long haul, do you know?

I love reading your stories, I am always amazed at the ideas you pull out of no where it seems and you give it so much life and background that I feel like I've always known about it. Good luck for the next chapter, looking forwards to the action! Xx

Author's Response: Hi! (waves) (avoids looking at readers) Um, yes... I know it's a short chapter... but the story finally came back to life, and I knew that I had to at least post something to keep the energy going. (looks at the original file for the fic) Yep, it's going to be a fairly long haul. ;) Not 178978097089.pi chapters, but everything is either written or mapped out, and there are about 10 chapters yet to come for sure. And we're gradually easing into the part that will TRULY earn that NC-17 rating, so watch for it... ;)
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Chapter 12 on May 15, 2016 03:09 pm
Here I was thinking you'd forgot about this one.

Author's Response: Hey STT! :) Nope, never. I'm not sure why, but it just... kind of never worked to get the next chapter out before this. There will be another one soon.
Name: dmgirl1 reviewed Chapter 11 on Jul 13, 2015 07:42 am
Great job as always Anise! I hope the next chapter is soon pleaseeeeeee :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm actually working on it right now.
Name: pitzi reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 01, 2015 03:10 am
i"m so happy ou are updating!
I think this truth spell is going to affect Draco and Ginny too...
Hope for an update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter... ;)
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 11 on May 27, 2015 03:52 pm
hope the spell will work!!

Author's Response: Oh, it'll work... (cackles evil-ly...) Maybe not in the way that either of them expects. ;)
Name: bigreader reviewed Chapter 11 on May 27, 2015 07:52 am
Oh how badly I want Draco 's feelings to slip. Very exciting chapter for nothing to really have happened. Can't wait to see what happens with the spell, maybe something unexpected for the both of them?

Author's Response: You MUST be psychic. Something tells me that it just might happen. ;)
Name: coneveronica reviewed Chapter 11 on May 26, 2015 08:24 pm
This is great! I seriously can't express how excited I was when I saw the update. The tension in this story is keeping me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for updating :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! There will be another chapter very soon...
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Chapter 11 on May 24, 2015 12:25 am
Still have no idea wtf is going on with that magic. Very confusing. Pretty sure she has no idea either ;)

Hope everything is okay Anise, I missed ya! :)

Author's Response: (hugs STT) I'm still around!! I'm working a LOT on my nonfic project... but the thing I figured out awhile ago, and apparently need to STILL be reminded of all the time, is that writing fanfic is necessary to the process too. :) We'll get some more answers about the magic very soon...
Name: MyNightWish reviewed Chapter 3 on Jan 06, 2015 11:17 pm
I love Pansy and Millicent. Haha the part about Ginny almost getting tempted by the chair was funny :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I just love their characters here too... and that chair will turn up again a couple of times. ;)
Name: MyNightWish reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 06, 2015 10:55 pm
I hope Draco's plan (which Ginny still hasn't agreed to do ;) ) works. I wonder if Theo really is that bad of a guy in this plot.

Author's Response: Well, we'll see how the plan goes... ;) Theo is a more complex than he seems, although he's not a pleasant person.
Name: MyNightWish reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 06, 2015 02:18 am
What a great chapter! I have so many questions. I wonder why exactly did she run away with some of the other girls. Ooo I'm glad Theodore Nott is in this and involved somehow. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what else will be revealed.

Author's Response: Thanks! There's definitely more of this fic coming within the next couple of weeks.
Name: mollyp reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 27, 2014 07:56 pm
Just started this fic...I'm excited to see where it will go!

Author's Response: Thanks! There's a lot coming up... ;)
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 26, 2014 01:45 am
I wanna see those pictures! I hope you'll get the guts to post them 'cause they sound yum! Lol.

I find this chapter a bit steamier than the previous ones since Draco actually did something in real life compared to it only being in Ginny's flashbacks/fantasies, and I like it! I'm waiting for Draco to just snap and lose control. Yum, yum, yum!! *evil cackle*

I'm a bit on edge as to why Ginny is feeling odd though. Could it possibly be one of Theo's schemes? Or could it really just be the unbearable tension between Draco and her. Ooohh, I'm loving this so much.

Wishing you a happy holiday! ...and update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yep, the chapters are getting steamier all the time, it's safe to say. ;) And we'll find out all about the meaning of Ginny's weird feelings very soon. ;) Happy holidays to you, and there will be another chapter ASAP! And about those pics... sigh... I think that in the end, I'll put them up. With several zillion warnings and disclaimers. They're just... okay, I work with 3D art, and the characters are built to be as realistic as possible. This means that they're... how to put it... anatomically correct. Extremely so. The way you see Draco being described here? That's just the way he is in the art. And that's ALL I'm going to say right now... (runs and hides)
Name: dykeadellic reviewed Chapter 4 on Dec 25, 2014 08:33 pm
[The goblin cleared his throat. “This tricky little matter of the loan payment, settle it we must.”]

I love how all your goblins speak like Yoda. Seriously, it puts a smile on my face like nothing else.

At first glance, Millicent offering sex to goblins is funny. But then it isn’t. It’s deeper than that (to me at least). She’s trying to pay someone off with her body, and that’s not an easy decision to make. But she’s prepared to make it. That’s actually very emotional to me, and you managed to pack it in just a few lines. Not only that, but you mention that she’s doing it for Luna. Now I’m shipping them. Maybe that’s not what you intended, but I have all these emotions over them now.

[Then he vanished in a puff of smoke. Ginny stared after him, her mouth hanging open. She had never heard a goblin use correct grammar before.]

THOSE LITTLE FUCKERS HAVE BEEN ABLE TO USE CORRECT GRAMMAR THIS WHOLE TIME?! WHAT THE HELL, ANISE?!

I’m also having hardcore feelings about Draco paying off the loan for Ginny. It’s no big to someone as rich as him, but it’s everything to Ginny, and now Millicent doesn’t need to sell her body. Ugh. *fans self*

[Ginny longed to comfort Draco, to soothe him, to take him in her arms and pat his back and whisper in his ear that everything was going to be all right, even though she was afraid that it wasn’t and wouldn’t be. She clasped her hands in front of her in order to keep them from reaching for him.]

I’ll touch Draco for Ginny, I have no problem doing it. I will comfort him. Or both of them. Can I do that? I’ve never even thought about that before… and it’s somehow entirely your fault that I’m now thinking about a hypothetical threesome with two fictional characters. But if you’re wondering, that’s one threesome I would not pass up (most I would).

Is the above why Theo blackmailed them? He wanted in on the action and couldn’t get in on it and got pissy? RUDE THEO! *smacks Theo with a ruler*

Author's Response: Thanks for an AMAZING review! (Here's the Official Review Queen Crown! CATCH!) The goblins can talk correctly when they want to, but it takes a lot of energy for them, so they rarely do it. Millicent/Luna.... you know, I HAVE written that, actually. (Also Luna/Pansy.) I don't think it exactly happens in this fic in a romantic sense, but they have a very deep friendship. But you're on your own with that threesome thing! ;) Theo did have a very specific reason for blackmail... I can't reveal it yet, of course... but I don't think it's giving anything away to say that Theo was resentful that Ginny wouldn't become involved with him in any way. HEY! I now think that there's an unconscious undercurrent of Draco/Theo, but only from Theo's end. I don't even think it's entirely conscious with him, but it might form a part of his motivation. And you totally contributed this to the fic. :)
Name: dykeadellic reviewed Chapter 3 on Dec 22, 2014 02:46 pm
I thought I was ready for this, but when you brought in the sex chair I realized I was so far away from being ready. I didn't expect that, but wow. That was interesting, to say the least.

To say more? I'm thinking I feel a bit scared if Draco is bigger than that thing. Just a tiny bit scared, as we know my preference doesn't lean towards that size. So I might have said ow and squeezed my thighs together.

I'm also very interested in what is sure to be an amazing story. I already hate Theo. Stupid Theo, trying to ruin the romance for my loves! *grabs him by ear and drags him away*

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, um... um, the sex chair. Right. (looks shiftily from side to side.) There are a few, um, interesting things in this fic. But I don't think it ever gets too crazy-- I mean, to the point where the smut is more important than the D/G relationship and the motivations of the other characters. Theo is not a pleasant person, although he does get depth later on; I think that eventually we see that in his mind, anyway, he has a good reason for what he does. and, oh snerk, the chapters that are coming up next!! Maybe some chocolate would be good? Migraine-free chocolate? ;)
Name: b1elliot reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 20, 2014 09:58 pm
Well that was a steamy chapter. Thanks! Wonderful as always.

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yep, it was, but it's... um... not the last steamy one ;) More soon!
Name: dykeadellic reviewed Chapter 2 on Dec 20, 2014 07:46 pm
You know me so well that I feel as though this was written for me. It speaks to me on so many levels. Ginny owning a sex shop is awesome. Her pretending to be a sex worker is also awesome. Draco knowing what a switcher is, is even better.

Anise you keep topping yourself. I am loving this story to the point where I want to leave insanely long, thorough reviews, but I'm going to have to come back to do it. I just want to read it all the way through and not stop.

I do like the way you've still yet to show your hand completely. I'm left guessing about what happened. It's got me on edge completely, and that has me coming back for more. Seriously. You give me just enough. Any less, and it'd be too little to pique my interest. Any more and it'd be too much.

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I LOVE that you're getting so much out of this fic. :) Yes, it kind of started as a purely smutfic, but it's expanded a lot... and I'm glad that people see that. (Well, YOU see it, anyway... I don't know about everybody else. ;) And I would never try to discourage an insanely long review... ;) There's a lot going on in this fic, and it's true that some crucial points haven't been revealed yet. But they will.. they will.. just wait.
Name: pitzi reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 20, 2014 10:44 am
Ha! Where's the picture of the look on Draco's face when Ginny told him she's going to take control? And what is she intending to do?I cant see her actually letting Theo watch her naked? MAybe if zDraco coveres her with his body. Yuk. I want to kill Theo too. I suppose after this is over Draco will have a hard time convincing Ginny that he feels something for her.
I suppose Theo suspects that their relationship is not exactly what they try to convince him of. And him mentioning 8 girls they shared was deliberate I think. Is he trying to create antagonism between them?
anyway, thanks a lot for the new chapter!!

Author's Response: Hmmm.... now I can't get the picture out of my head. ;) Maybe I'll work on it. Okay, I can't reveal EXACTLY what's going to happen with Ginny's plots and plans, but don't worry TOO much. It'll all be okay. Actually, I think that Draco has more to worry about... and that's all I'm going to say. I think I would say that Theo would love to drive a wedge between Draco and Ginny, but when it came to the eight-girl story, he wanted to get more of a negative reaction out of Ginny. He didn't exactly get what he hoped for, because Ginny is better at controlling her temper than she used to be. More soon! Hopefully right after the holiday break. :)
Name: coneveronica reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 20, 2014 10:00 am
I'm so glad you updated this story. This chapter was excellent but way to leave it on a cliffie just before the holiday break! I'm going to dying for more between now and then! Great job and happy holidays :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yep, there's a lot happening in the next chapter... I'll try to have it up the day FIA opens again (Jan. 6th.) I'm working on the FFN group's exchange fic, though, so it might be a LITTLE longer. Happy holidays to you too. :)
Name: bigreader reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 20, 2014 07:12 am
OH MY GOD! This is so hot. I love it! And those pictures, I want to see these pictures you have made! The characters are so believable, Draco almost seems pouty with his jealous feelings. Good thing Ginny can still think with all that lust running through her.

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Those pictures... um... well, I could post them on the FIA blog once we get to that part in the story, because Wordpress doesn't have content restrictions. But I am SO not kidding about how explicit those pics are. Maybe I could somehow post them anonymously... no, that wouldn't work, because everyone already knows I wrote the fic... ;) Anyway, I'll think about it.
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 19, 2014 08:48 pm
It hits the fan rather hard at the end there, just wow. Good for her! She's gonna make Draco do it isn't she? Oh jesus this is exciting now. Just, good god.

Author's Response: Thanks! We'll just have to wait to see what happens in the next chapter... ;) There's a lot coming up.
Name: dykeadellic reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 19, 2014 07:01 pm
Anise, darling, you would write something like this. It's right up my alley, of course. From the beginning you had me enthralled with it. The entire exchange had me wondering what the hell was going on. Now I find myself dying to know just what caused Ginny to flee to America. What could be so bad?

You've done it again. But then you always do. I've thee tabs open for FIA and two of them are yours. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Okay, as far as why Ginny ended up running all the way to Portland (she took Frontier, actually, and she's never going to fly on THAT airline again,) here's a quick recap. A year before this fic opens, blackmail letters were sent to a number of people, including Ginny, Draco, Luna, Pansy, Brutus Crabbe, and Selina Goyle. Ginny's letter said that unless she sent a lot of money to the anonymous blackmailer, then her affair with Draco would be made public (she was still with Harry at the time.) She was still trying to scrape the money together when the blackmail letters were sent to the press. As a result, she decided to leave the wizarding world for a while, which was allowed as long as she agreed to not use magic in the Muggle world. At the time, Ginny didn't know who the blackmailer was. Right afterwards, though, she learned from Luna that it was Theo. That's why she wants revenge.
Name: Iolanthe reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 17, 2014 03:54 pm
This is amazing so far! Are you still updating?

Author's Response: Yes! :) And thanks!
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