Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 11, 2014 01:06 pm
The comma problems were in just a few spots, so I was able to chalk it up to a stylistic approach rather than deny it.
I am excited to see chapter two is up, and I will read it as soon as I can!
Name: Marinka reviewed
Chapter 3: Back for More on Sep 11, 2014 01:31 am
I wonder what makes them different from the rest of the team? Doesn't sound like they did reform so different agenda?
Name: Marinka reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 11, 2014 01:20 am
Great start! I am curious to find more why girls are there? Not very useful, are they? Certainly usless when compared to Ginny :)
Name: vintagepearls reviewed
Chapter 3: Back for More on Sep 09, 2014 06:38 pm
Ooo very intriguing! Usually I'm pretty picky with stories that I come across -- but I'm so glad I clicked on this! Keep up the good work!
Name: Silvryn reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 09, 2014 08:18 am
Ooh! It's definitely captured my interest! I like the characterization and character interactions so far - believable motivations and behavior sells a story so well :) looking forward to the next installment!
Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 08, 2014 05:53 pm
Usually I don't enjoy reading our submissions. I have to try and find every error I can to see if it meets the criteria. This story? You have blown my mind so far. I am adoring it, and I truly am excited to see where this goes!
This takes me back to when I first started shipping Draco and Ginny. All those stories were waiting to be found and told. I think that you'll join the ranks of our classic authors in no time!
The one thing I would advise: Be a little more careful with comas! There were a few errors, but nothing major.
Hope to see the next chapter very soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hearing that means the world to me :D
Where were the comma problems? I know I'm a comma abuser, but I'll fix problems wherever you spot them.